| "The 1st Son Daughter???" Reviews/Comments [ 80 ] |
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Reviewed By: Leoavery [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2010 08:00 CDT
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update soon before I go Super Saiyan myself and rip out your heart in a testament to the Fatality.
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Title: starting to give up on ever getting an update
Reviewed By: Update soon please On: August 01, 2009 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know the longer you take to update the more readers start to give up on your story and you can eventually lose them. So the sooner you update the happier your readers will be. Update soon please! I still haven't given up on you completely yet. So update please!
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Reviewed By: T-T On: May 23, 2009 18:24 CDT
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It's been over five mounths what's up? Once again you leave us (your loyal and dedicated readers) with a cliffy? How meeaannn! (T-T) Update soon please? (and all will be forgiven again) (^_^) update soon please?
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Title: Update pllzzzz
Reviewed By: Melliieeeeee On: February 13, 2009 10:14 CST
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update! update ! PLEEEAAASSSEEE! :'(
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 19:10 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update! But can u add more romance wit trunks and Minako i would like to see more of dat.. the action and fighting scenes r great but can we add more romance plz..
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Title: When man when!
Reviewed By: mell479-3qre On: December 29, 2008 00:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great writing! will trunks and minako get together? and if so when?! i cant take it!
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Reviewed By: PrinceVegetasLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2008 18:20 CST
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oooo...what happened to Minako? *needs new chapter* X3
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Reviewed By: not logged in currently On: November 06, 2008 19:07 CST
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I have just one word for chapter 46... Hilarious!
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Reviewed By: PrinceVegetasLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2008 20:34 CST
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omk YESH XD *rofls* that was an outstanding chapter...i cou;dn't stop laughing XD HAZZAH X3
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Reviewed By: PrinceVegetasLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2008 10:00 CST
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goku's cooking...oh mai...O.O i fear for all of the sons health XD
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Reviewed By: PrinceVegetasLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 19:42 CDT
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OMK poor ChiChi! XD nice chapter, can't wait for more ;p
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Reviewed By: PrinceVegetasLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2008 17:42 CDT
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nice, another chapter! :3 i can't wait for more!!! ;3
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Title: YAYAYAY!!!
Reviewed By: PrinceVegetasLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2008 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT'S A MIRACLE!!! YOU UPDATED!!! HALLELUYA!!!!! O.O XD *dies* oh my kami, you don't know how happy i am that you updated, i was getting worried you discontinued the story XD well, glad you're back, and can't wait for more! :3
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Reviewed By: ---no name --- On: June 04, 2008 20:05 CDT
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Okay! Still no update even though it's been over a YEAR!!! I mean come on at least give an explination (and when about or if you even plan to update) to your loyal readers.
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Reviewed By: T-T On: May 25, 2008 15:24 CDT
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Oh my gosh it's so totally crule to write such a great story than leave your loyal reader (like me) hanging for over a year. I mean how mmmeeeeaaannnn! (crying rivers of tears) Update soon okay? Please? Pretty please with sugar on top?
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