| "When Push Comes to Shove" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 08:22 CDT
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this was really really good. I loved the beginning where Inuyasha stood up to kikyou. That was how I always thought Inuyasha would do, when confronting Kikyou. And then the lemony scene at the river was perfect. Wasn't too graphic, but you had great detail. Over all, this was an incredible one shot, and I look forward to all the stories you write. Keep up the tremedous work!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2006 02:57 CDT
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Wonderful. That was simply amzing... I loved it.
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Title: Kawaii
Reviewed By: The_InuGrrrl_Cometh (NSI) On: May 06, 2006 12:28 CDT
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Very nice, Harpie! Gotta love citrus in the afternoon!
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Title: HEY U ^_^
Reviewed By: Flips4Fun [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Greetings my fellow PTH groupie. ^_^ 1 down 2 more to go and let me just say "WONDERFUL WORK"!!! Excellent description, very steamy lemon and perfect grammar/spelling. The little breaks in the beginning really tied the story together making it almost movie like with scenes of switching camera angles. Perfect 10 ^_^
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Reviewed By: aweesomeee On: March 10, 2006 01:34 CST
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totally great :)
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Reviewed By: Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2006 23:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved inuyasha's little speech to kikyou... damn it, it was a brilliant piece of work. and i love naughty kagome, she's fun. and i love naked inuyasha cuz he's well... naked. enough said. good job. ja.
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: Lady Jay [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 15:56 CST
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This is really well written and sweet. You have promising talent! More more more!! *grin*
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: February 16, 2006 03:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome fic ^^ sequel! sequel! sequel!
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 23:21 CST
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Wonderfull anymore detail i'll go insane!!!~Cricket42
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Title: that was great
Reviewed By: Inu/kag On: February 15, 2006 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow . that was soooo swee.it was cute.it was nice how you didn't make kikyo sound like a total bitch. even if she is( kikyo lovers..IT'S KAGOME AND INUYASHA)that was a great lemon to. good detal. i liked it.you sjould right more.like they have a little Inuyasha!:)you did good.to bad miroku and sango never were together.but oh well.it was cool .you rock!!
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Reviewed By: Elixir of Destiny (NSI) [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 18:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo...'when push comes to shove'...that title had my little hentai mind scrambling in all sorts of directions. I loved the little scene where Inu-kun told off Kikyou; gods the woman has to learn sometime or other that Kags isn't just her replacement. It gets really irritating after awhile. You write really well. The lemon was good, but I felt the set-up was a little contrived and abrupt, seeing as I can't imagine Inu immediately jumping into the sack, no matter how irresistable Kags is, with all his insecurities and past baggage still hovering over him like a second skin. But I definitely like how it was Kagome who initiated the 'action.' In my opinion, she's definitely the more aggressive and knowlegeable one in the romance and 'mood setting' department. Another thing with the word 'koi' and Inu expressing his feelings so openly, it felt a bit OOC because I imagine Inu grappling with the right words and he seems more of an 'action speaks louder than words kind of guy.' But besides my silly little rants and such, this was a well done little piece and I'm definitely looking forward to reading your 'Treading Water' fanfiction. I've only heard great things about it! *goes off to read*
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Title: Cute!
Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 00:45 CST
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That was so adorable! I love it when authors make it so Inuyasha acts the way he is inexperienced. I loved it, I really did. Lots and lots. Thankies!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my, that was most excellent!!! I love it, I love it! From beginning to end was great. But, seeing as InuYasha having no experience whatsoever with a female or a females body for that matter, is rather interesting indeed. Having to check things out right? But checking for curry? ROFLMFFAO!!! If you had said fish, I think I would have pissed myself, lol. And even though your story was short, it was awesome. Now I'm all wound up, where's my M+Ms dammit, lmao...
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Reviewed By: leila-chan* nSi On: February 14, 2006 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow girl. you should have written a sexxy one-shot along time ago. i loved that he wasn't at all knowledgable about the act itself, or a womans body for that matter. different and nice. i could have died laughing when he thought about her not being like curry. you're so crazy. so funny. and quite a bit steamy.
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