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Reviewed By: kagomegirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 11:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is great. i hope you have a sequel. for when inuyasha and kagome have pups. that will be so cool. i loved this story. and i am hoping that you write a sequel.
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Reviewed By: fosaken faith On: March 05, 2006 17:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK! I love your writting! My favorite story is and i have a feeling will be "Blood and Tears" SOOO GOOD! This one is also up there. It was good. But i wanted more. I didn't think it should have ended ther. Idk. I'm not the writter. I guess it's 'cause your other one was so long. I liked it. But alas i still LOVE this story and I think you are an awsome writter. Please make a sequal or make a new story. I love your writting. -forsaken faith
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Reviewed By: kokoro no miko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 15:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, your lemons were beautiful. I absolutely loved how Kagome resolved the rift with the others. Granted that she went kind of easy on them, given the possible outcome of their actions, but that's such a huge part of who she is that I don't see any other way it could have been handled. The punishment definitely fit the crime, especially in Shippou's case--that little twerp is going to finally have to grow up, even if he has to be dragged by the tail, kicking and screaming, every inch of the way. As far as Kikyou is concerned, I've never been a huge fan of hers, but her behavior in this case was reprehensible! I'd really like to see a sequel that explored the changes in the group dynamic now that all this stuff has been resolved. Once again, I can hardly wait to see what's coming next!
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 14:05 EST
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plz write a sequel~Cricket42
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Title: GinaCat
Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 13:37 EST
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I love your story you are such a good writer you rock Thank you so much
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Title: Bravo! Bravo!
Reviewed By: Inu4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 11:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you soo very much for such a terrific story! Wonderful plot,terrific flow.just an overall awesome job!! You are definately one of my favorites!!
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Reviewed By: Danny Girl On: March 05, 2006 10:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Thanks for giving Kagoma a back bone (the scene with her and kikyou) also thank you for gettting shippo too...he needed it. please do a sequel.
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Reviewed By: HanyouKagome962 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2006 21:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another awsome fic you are such an awsome writer and i love this fic and blood and tears (i didnt read she's like the wind yet but ill get to it) i hope there is a sequel to this fic i would like to see about how the group fuctions now that inu and kag are mated and the group is now a formal pact with an alpha male and 'bitch' (lol). anyways i loved the kag vs kik scene it was great i could picture it happening in my mind. So sequel please!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: March 04, 2006 21:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All in all -I give this story a beyond 10+... sniffles!! Oh, Goddess... I am truly sorry to see it end so soon. You have ended it prefectly and sweetly touching with the strength of Kagome and Inuyasha shining brightly. Though with the hint of a possible sequel I am lightened. (rubs hands together- discipline shippo- putting Miroku into his place regarding his insenstive teasing- taking down Naraku- taking down Kikyo) Amazing!! I truly do love and am entranced/ enraptured by your talents with the written word!! I bow to your grace! Thank you for blessing us with another story. Wow!! Long-short- each one is a beautiful treasure to behold. Thank you again!! You totally rock!! You-re Awesome!! I am -I must say - a huge fan of your stories. The flow of this story remained steadfast and true. I enjoyed how Inuyasha dealt with Kikyo- he showed so much strength and confidence that only Kagome with her pure heart, soul, and unconditional love has given him. She really has healed a huge portion of his soul's wounds and still is healing. And Kagome showing maturity in accpeting her error at being a coward at sitting then running instead of talking. Though Sango, Miroku and Shippo still have a very long way to go with maturing. I wonder if that would be in the sequel? Thank you for answering my questions that I had been pondering. I love your approach to the mating and to Sesshoumaru. I think you have a truly wonderful grasp on the characters and in keeping them true. I just saw a episode of Inuyasha and in it.. Shippo got another girl interested in him and to like him. Then he because he was considered the Great Shippo in the Kitsune demon world that he caused harm - hurting her not only emotionally but phsyically as well and he never apologized and cried instead about his loss. I was annoyed. So in this light you have kept Shippo very in character. Thank you again and Please keep up the most excellent work!!! Til your next story!!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos On: March 04, 2006 20:58 EST
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i considered it a short and sweet tidbit and it was wonderful as always. you really showed how immature shippou can be and how he doesn't think at all of what his actions can do. it's sort of like 'i'm cute and if i whine you'll forgive me'. i do hope your muse allows for a sequel. there are so many places left that you could take this story, so many emotional avenues to explore and the development of the varying bonds of trust between miroku, ango and shippou with kagome and inuyasha, not to mention adding sesshomaru's truce into the equation. plus, kouga wasn't in this one! it might take on a whole separate life sort of like 'she's like the wind/power of love' until your next epic tale your minion will pace restlessly. please don't take too long.
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2006 20:47 EST
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Very good story. You're right, it does seem a bit short for you, but its still a great story. I liked how Kagome and Inuyasha handled their disappointment with the others there at the end. No screaming; I enjoyed the maturity. I also REALLY emjoyed the bitchslap that Kagome gave Kikyo. LONG time in coming. Can't wait to see your next story!
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Reviewed By: kagomegirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2006 11:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now this Chapter is great. Kagome's mom is way to understanding, but yet i wish my mom was that understanding. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie On: March 01, 2006 20:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoot!! Another Terrific chapter!! Thank you, Goddess!! I really enjoyed the way you had mixed the seriousness of the Inu tachi betrayal with the light heartedness and humour of Kagome's mom finding her daughter and Inu naked!! It was really great!! And the flaying of Shippo's butt!! Beautifully written!! giggles!! Will the subject of other demons still trying to take Kagome come up? Or is the marking understood and accepted in this story? Will a type of barrier be used to protect the mates from being "forced" from the other? Will they come into more powers from the bonding? I love that Kagome's mom is allowing her daughter to be with her mate freely after having the Talk. That was really awesome!! She so wants dog eared grandchildern. Wow!! Awesome!! I loved how Sesshoumaru put everyone into their place and how you kept him so delightfully in character!! (cheers Sesshoumaru) Shippo still doesn't understand that what he did was wrong, does he? He didn't seem truly remorseful... Or I could be wrong. And he is making designs on little Rin already. Poor Rin. Turning into a regular Miroku isn't he. heh. I can't wait for the next brillant chapter to come out.. Well honestly I can. I like the beginning of the chapter with Kikyo. Nice touch. Boy is she cheesed off. How truly nasty that was of her to want Inuyasha dead and waiting for her in Hell while she galavants around until she feels like going there. Another layer of her cruel plans for Inuyasha revealed. I hope Inuyasha realizes as Urasue said-only hate moves the clay body-and Kikyo is now a demon of dark powers. Will Inuyasha ask if he went with Kikyo what would happen? I kind of think that either Kagome's soul would return to her leaving him alone with a clay doll shell or he would be condemning a piece of Kagome to Hell.. Something he hasn't thought about yet. Will Sesshoumaru be the one or Inuyasha or Kagome to release Kikyo from her torment? Or is she going to side with Naraku after this? I have such a love for your story... it's WOW!! Thank you for allowing us to read your story and Thank you for posting here!! We are honoured!! Please keep up the most excellent work!! Thank you!!
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Reviewed By: inuhanyou fan On: March 01, 2006 15:42 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. well shippo really did get wat was coming to him. ah well he is still too much of a baby. i still cant get over the fact about kagomes mom. now wat mom will say that they could go into the shower and finish wat they started. she definantly is the most understanding mother of the year. i will be watching 4 wen the next chapter comes out so keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: kokoro no miko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 09:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That went well, I think. I almost (not quite) felt sorry for Shippou, but he more than deserved what he got--I think that Sesshoumaru was going easy on the little brat, but the whole ugly truth finally came out all the same. I was really glad that the others came to realize the possible consequences of their thoughtlessness, and seem to be more than willing to make amends when Inu and Kagome get back. Still, I don't think it's going to be pretty when Kagome finds out exactly what Shippou's been up to all this time--she's going to be terribly disappointed in him, and that might even hurt worse than his butt! I'm still laughing over Mama getting an eyeful (and an earful when they went to take their showers)! I always thought that she was no fool, and could see which way the wind was blowing from the start--maybe that's why she never really seemed to encourage Houjou all that much (beyond being polite, I mean). Again, well worth the wait! Now to start waiting for the next bit....
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