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Title: Live And Let Die
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 15:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: nightangel15 not logged in On: February 25, 2006 12:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again you have managed to completely and utterly blow me away by your amazing ability to create these wonderful stories. By the time I got to the second chapter, i was riveted to my seat in anticipation of what was to come next. I cannot believe the group would truly think so low of inu, and the fact that they would hurt kagome like that is kind of sickening. I truly hope that when we next see Kikyo, she gets the bitch slap of her life from Kagome, because it is the very least of what she deserves for letting inuyasha down like she did when he trusted her. I am just glad that the two love birds FINALLY got together, and the sesshomaru-town girls part was entertaining too. I always get a kick out of fluffy threatening others for hurting his 'bastard half breed of a half brother'...once, again great job! I love this story!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1132 On: February 25, 2006 01:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it update soon
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: February 25, 2006 01:26 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love this story. I can't wait to read more. I just hope the others get the comeuppance they deserve. Please make it so. They were so mean and inconsiderate. Update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: LunaT On: February 25, 2006 00:15 EST
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I'm so impressed with this story! You create wonderful imagery, and i completely enjoyed it. I hope there's more?
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 22:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...wow...AWSOME JOB ON THIS CHAPTER! omfg! That was? Intense. Wow I loved the whole lemon nicely done Romantic and Heavy ^_^ Wow Sesshomaru is awsome I loved how he saved the girls...even though is was sort of like epsoide 162 I believe-"With Sesshomaru forever" but still awsome job, ahhh man I kinda wish he would have killed that kusotare monk though -_-* lol,...OH! WHEN KIKYO APPERES NEXT I HOPE KAGOME BEATS THE LIVING...uhh DEAD KUSO OUTTA HER ^_~
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: February 24, 2006 20:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YIPEEEE!!! Another super chapter!! Thank you Goddess. That was delightful!! I am so impressed by the way you have master the emotions and the flow of words to create these images!! This is another powerfully emotional and serious story. Thank you for answering some of my questions. I really liked how you handled Sesshoumaru and the priest. So true to his nature. He was in a forgiving mood only because Kagome had gotten to Inuyasha and he didn't die. I liked how Inuyasha was able to open up to Kagome about what happened. Very touching. I hope that when it comes to the others that even Sesshoumaru will put in his own. And Shippou.. wow... yeah.. that was just low... but so true to his character. After all in the episode where Kirara disappears he sadistically accused everyone of being the reason. Starting with Inuyasha first!! When he knew all along where she was. He is quite selfish and partly it is Kagome's fault for being blind (not seeing how manipulative and awful he is at times) and over coddling and catering to him. He went up against the Thunder Brothers and took a beating from Manten. Which I think is nothing like the annoying whacks on the head from Inuyasha who would pull his punches. And Miroku... that is a good reason - he can feel the power of the shards but hasn't any clue to tracking. Sango.. argh.. I just want to scream! Thank you Kaede for the start of their punishment. I don't think a simple 'I'm sorry' will work this time. Not when both Inuyasha and Kagome were killed due to their low consideration/opinion and dismissal of Inuyasha. I know Kagome is a very forgiving person but I hope she makes them understand very much just how they have hurt her and Inuyasha because of this. Will the group seperate to have a 'time out' moment between them to let them step back and take a break then once emotions settle come back again? Or will some new ground rules and pack laws be laid out? The love scene so touching and tender.. especially after what Inuyasha had gone through. Will there be more with the priest? And what was that demon that stole women? Wow I am soo happy that you written another superb story!! You totally rock!! I wish I could express my pleasure in reading your stories better than I am able to. Please keep up the most excellent work and thank you for allowing us to read your stories!!
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Reviewed By: kokoro no miko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 11:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, very sweet. I like Kaede's take on the others' behavior--I'm pretty disappointed in them myself, but I think that it's more due to thoughtlessness than to actual malicious intent (except maybe for Shippou--he's really starting to irritate me). Looks like it's going to be an interesting week in the shrine.... I can't wait for the next installment!
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Reviewed By: miko_kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 18:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Job. I really liked it. I hope that you update soon. P.S. Are your fanfictions on any other sites?
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Reviewed By: kokoro no miko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 11:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even after the way the others refused to help,Kagome still tries to rationalize their behavior. I would be screaming their ears off, but that's just part of what makes Kagome Kagome. Shippou is really starting to bug me some times. I know that he's just a spoiled brat who wants his surrogate mother, but I'm getting a sense that he's actually quite a bit older than he seems--even some of the things he says in the anime tends to bear that out (like the time he asked Inu exactly how far he got with Kagome!). After all, he is a kitsune, and has those illusion abilities. The dream sequence was beautiful and completely believable (I've found myself in similar situations more than once, although I usually wake up before things get quite that far)! Keep up the great work. On to chapter 3....
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Reviewed By: kokoro no miko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 09:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, beautifully done. I felt so horribly bad for poor Inu--that kind of abuse would be pure torture for someone who had had so little that he could count on for his entire life. And WHAT was wrong with the others?!? I certainly hope that Kagome gives them a big piece of her mind whenever they finally meet again. Kikyou has never been one of my favorites, although I've managed to find a certain sympathy for her--she did, after all, get a pretty raw deal with the whole Naraku debacle--but this was a new low even for her. As always, I'm intrigued by the way you portray Sesshoumaru--it seemed to me that he was starting to gain at least a little respect for his brother by the end of the series, and I think that it's obvious that he has some issues of his own with his father and brother. Perhaps he'll find a way to work them out. Now to move on to chapter 2....
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: February 22, 2006 22:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, Another great chapter from the Literary Goddess!!! I loved it!! I needed to re-read the first two chapters again. The first time I read it..I don't think it sank in the severity of what happened to Inu...I was soo very saddened by what happened to Inuyasha. I cried. That IS the worst punishment to dish out to a so proud, strong, and so independent individual like Inuyasha. How will he be able to get over the pyschological damage? I hope Kagome helps out. And the matter of Inuyasha's sense of smell. Did Kagome clean his clothing enough to erase the scent? Will she wash his clothes a little more at her home? I am so glad she found him in time and that none of the others (inu-gami, jaken, Koga) had found them or came across while Kagome took care of him. I am so impressed that you got others so dead on. And Shippo so true to character. Even if Inuyasha is not in the wrong Shippo will always make it so it is his fault. Will Kagome remove the rosary sooner? I hope Kagome will cut the others down from their high horse with the refusal to help/dismiss her need to search for Inuyasha and then trying to make her feel even worse by doing the about face and saying yes Inuyasha went with Kikyo? Will Inuyasha have nightmares from his experience? I like to see Kagome comfort him where in Blood and Tears he comforted her. Sweet. And I like Sesshoumaru in this story. You have him maintian his stoic demeanor and yet care for Inu and Kag as well. Kudos!! Will Kichou make an appearance in this story? (can you tell I like her- She's great!!)How can Kikyo say she loves Inu when she allowed that too cruel/inhumane treatment of Inu to occur! I wonder if this will open Inu eyes to the new Kikyo.. I think that he has been still seeing her as from before her death. I wonder how he will react to her when they should meet up again. And if she tries to kiss him again. I wonder if his demon side will have anything to say to her. Did Inu have his Tetsusaiga with him in the sealed cave? Or did it get taken when he was captured? Must have it stil if he didn't turn full youkai while he bordered on deaths edge. LOVE IT!! Love it!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!! you totally rock!!! Please keep up the most excellent work.
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 19:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH WOOT NOTHER AWSOME CHAPTER!, Wow Inuyasha abnd kagome shore have alot of stamina for slightly sickly peolpe, LOL that was funny how Kagome said she wasn't willing to share, lol nice job ^_^ Hmmmm, so I wonder what's next is stor for are mate's to be...UP-DATE ASAP!!!
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 19:38 EST
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just keep writing just keep writing just keep writing just keep writing plz~Cricket42
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Title: Great Job!
Reviewed By: inugurl112 On: February 21, 2006 22:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought your story was a very good read! I can't wait to read more, so I hope you update soon! I plan to read your other stories:) Awesome job!!
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