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Title: Again!
Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 22:39 EDT
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Please tell me he isn't gonning to fall that quickly for the clay pot again! Your story is so good! I know that KAg wants Inu to be happy but this just seems to be a little to quick. Hmmmm....hmmmm.... the plot twists could be fatal if we, the readers, don't start watching for them! Keep it up, I love reading your chapters! The cliff you leave us on is slowly crumbiling under our feet! Same us from certain doom
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Reviewed By: ticked off On: August 25, 2006 04:17 EDT
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Why is he getting all wistful at the sight of Kikyo? What is wrong with the idiot! She tried to kill him and Kagome,and let's face it,she was on the side of evil,so why is it she is still around? Is Inuyasha supposed to be happy with her? That vile Kikyo was not a good person either in life or her undeath and it would not be fair for her to get what should have been Kagome's happiness. GRRRR I really hate Kikyo!!
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Reviewed By: brazenthougtht On: August 25, 2006 03:48 EDT
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No way! No freaking way! Is he really going to end up with Kikyo?! After everything she did? Even the jewel knows she was a selfish person in life! Oh please don't tell me Inuyasha is going to forgive Kikyo and be with her!!! Inuyasha is happy when he's with Kagome, someone shoot the claypot!!!
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 19:49 EDT
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kinky hoe man i hate her all i'm saying. poor inu i hope he'll be ok.~Cricket42
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Title: How Sad...
Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 18:45 EDT
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This is one of the best angst stories that I have ever read! I love it, the tears and pain, but I would love to see a happy ending. I am such a sucker for happy endings! You are an awsome writer, so keep it up. One more thing..... Why did you leave us on another huge cliffy You are so cruel to your readers even if it makes us read all the harder. Please continue....I want to know what happens next!!
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Title: Great job!
Reviewed By: Mystified Starlight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 00:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I will say that it's not often I come across a story that has me enthralled from the moment I start reading. You've really got something, here. I love this story, and the plot lines; absolutely everything that you've done with the characters is exactly what I would have expected. You've done a great job, and I look forward to your next chapters. Please don't stop writing on this story! I have to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Cricket42(to lazy to sign back in) On: August 03, 2006 01:15 EDT
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One thing I will say to you is "THAT IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO FUCKING MISSED UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Please don't kill off Kagome Please don't that would be cruel and unusal punishment. Lots of love ~Cricket42 P.S. write quickly
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Reviewed By: XSesshomaruX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 22:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMGO MOG MOG MOMG OMGOM OMG OMG OM GOMGO OMG OMGO MGO OM GOMG OGM OGM OGM OMG OMG OOMG OMG OMG OMG OMRG OMG OMG OG OMG OMG OMFG WTF I GOONA HAPPEN NEXT IM STUCK ON A NOTHA CLIFF I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE WHATS GONNA HAPPEN
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Title: NOT AGAIN!
Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 11:52 EDT
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NOt AGAIN!! You seem to leave us in these horriable cliffies!! *whines* What did we ever do to deserve this? I love the story, but...but... did the bastard die? Did Kagome? What will Sess do? The question never cease!! Please continue, I love it so much!
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Reviewed By: XSesshomaruX [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 22:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg plz dont tell me u stoped writting at least u should rap it up
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Title: O...M...F..G....Huge cliff!
Reviewed By: Inu4ever14 On: July 03, 2006 23:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh My F*ckin God no you didn't you have got to updated soon I completely have to know what happens next I'm bout to die in my computer chair here For the love of god have some mercy on us and update soon your killin us here this is by far the absolute BEST suspencful Inuyasha story I've eva read you have to update I'm like totally dreamin bout this a night I'm goin Insane update update update you said you love the hell out of inuyasha well do this for inuyasha, for kagome oh god kagome don't let jouyoku do...do... oh god just don't do it. update for all those lil girls rped by him , for sango, for that broken mouthed Miroku,and for sesshomaru and rin, Oh and lets not forget kouga, *sigh* and Ayame update
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Reviewed By: abblebottom On: July 03, 2006 15:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eh yo dis fic is hott as hell and I seriously can not wait till you update i'ma look every day until you do so huury up pllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz i can't take any more suspence!
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Reviewed By: J.D. On: July 03, 2006 15:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic rocksssssssss dude update soon
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Reviewed By: shaeshae On: July 03, 2006 15:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really great story and I can't wait for you to update ,the villian in this story is totally orignal and I like cuz it's somthing new this story is a lot of fun and it deserves a 10\10 ten out of ten
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Title: critical eye
Reviewed By: critical eye [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 19:09 EDT
Comment/Review:
Good fic but I wished you had Sesshoumaru paired with Kagura and not with Rin. Rin was six years old as she met Sesshoumaru that would make her only nine in your story. Personally I don´t think Sesshoumaru should be paired with a human if you don´t want to make him seem OOC and he is OOC in your story; guess you can´t avoid that with this pairing. Personally I don´t pair him with Rin at all; you don´t raise a child to fuck it later, that´s just disgusting. Please don´t take this as a flame, just my own opinion. Actually I think your fic is very original, please keep on.
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