| "Confrontation" Reviews/Comments [ 107 ] |
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Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 23:23 EDT
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You hold are hearts in the palm of your hand and slowly, tease us with cliffs and plot twists! I must say you are a brillant writer and I am glad I am having the pleasure of reading your story! So please continue on...I've read too many stories that never finish and they just stop. A slave to your story, I am. Onward...to the chapters for I am a quivering with wonder!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 21:59 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Can't wait for the update, so don't take to long! I feel so sorry for Inuyasha and Kagome.
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Reviewed By: Neko_angel666 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 00:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn u!! DAMN U TO HELL!! YOU SUCK U SUCK USUCK!!! So unfair!! I want to know what happens next, that has to be the most evil cliffy I have ever read!! **cries** PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PPPLLLLEEEEAAAAASSSSEEEE hurry with the next chapper... I"M BEGGING U!!
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Reviewed By: brazen thought On: September 21, 2006 00:19 EDT
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O crap, oh man, what is Inuyasha going to do? I'm kind of anxious to find out what he is going to do to Kagome....oh I truly hope you update soon,I have to know how it ends.
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 16:26 EDT
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Wow, I think you've officially tapped every emotion conceivable! I just finished up through the last chapter that you have up right now and I went from tearing up at Inuyasha's anguish to happiness at Kagome telling him what for while standing there naked after she came back. Gods this demon was practically worse than Naraku or least his equal as far as mind games go. That was so horrendous. The worst part was the tragedy of Ayame and Kouga, wow. You really managed to capture the anguish, I practially felt my heart exploding. It was also hard to see Kagome once again having to self sacrifice for everyone else in the group. She always seems to be the lamb going to the slaughter. I was impressed by the way the wish worked out. Wishing for his happiness, but at the same time not realizing that she was his happiness. V.romantic. I do so hope, with great desperation, that Inuyasha and Kagome can capture some of the time to themselves to love and ejoy one another that everyone else seems to have had time to explore. They deserve it! Lordy...I really enjoy what you have so far! Very different and it really pulls at the heart stings. I look forward to your next update!
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Title: I LOVE U!!!!!!!!!!!!! and yet, i hate you at the same time!!!
Reviewed By: Neko_angel666 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 16:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story so much!! and every time you update a new chapter and it ends I want to curse up a storm!! because I want to keep reading!!! WAAAH!! For unfair!! I loved this last chapter, it's so sad and cute, I love it sooooooo much!!!!! Please update soon!!! **gets on knees and begs** PLLLLLEEEEEEEAAAASSSEEE!!!!!!!! Love ya lots, Angela
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Title: Ahhh...
Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 12:35 EDT
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Now that is a nice twist to the story. She came back, because he wished her back. Ahhhh...how sweet. This is such a good story. keep it up. 'Cause you write wonderfully! And it wasn't left on a cliff this time! YEa for
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Reviewed By: DarkMikoKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 20:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi remember me? I just wanted to congratulate you on this fic, you are just getting better and better with both story and grammar, I don't think you even need me. I'm busy but I always make time to read the new chapters. Great job!!!
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Reviewed By: loopylion On: September 01, 2006 00:08 EDT
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This is great,Kagome returned to inuyasha. I feel sorry for her and all the emotional turmoil she has inside of her.
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Title: OMG!!
Reviewed By: Neko_angel666 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 03:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! I've been reading your storry for the last two days straight. i couldn't stop reading it!! It was soooo good!!! It made me cry, it made me laugh, it made me happy, sad and mad all at the same time. Man I love this storry, and I'm going to add it to my favorites!! I hope you hurry with the next chapter because i can't wait!! I NEED to know what happens next!!
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Title: Confrontation
Reviewed By: trinity757575 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 07:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing, wonderful, gut wretching emotional story! You are very adept at being able to pull the reader into the world you have created. That one can't help but feel for the charactors that they already love. With your astounding protrail of the vile Jouyoku, you can't help but feel the utterly helplessness of the victim's and the imputant rage of the one's who loved them, whose lives have been shattered. Your story is truely wonderfully and richly written! So intel next chapter, I'll be reading you, Trinity
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Title: Ah!
Reviewed By: InuNekoHalf-Breed [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 02:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Kagome :( *sniffle* Good though InuYasha has to forgive her If he didntshe'd porbably die again :(
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Reviewed By: brazenthought On: August 30, 2006 00:13 EDT
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I love you! I totally love you!!!! Yeak Kagome is back.
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Reviewed By: furious On: August 27, 2006 02:02 EDT
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Kikyo has done nothing for her to get a second chance with Inuyasha. That is if she hasn't shown up to drag him off into hell. Inuyasha has always annoyed me, after all Kikyo tried to murder Kagome. And if she did wish for his happiness then does that mean that Inuyasha has wanted Kikyo all along? If he does choose the walking vase who, by the by,steals the souls of deceased women to survive.I hope everyone turns against him. What is everyone supposed to say hurray for Inuyasha he's happy with the accomplice of the monster who forced Kagome to choose death! I don't think so!!
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Title: Kami!
Reviewed By: InuNekoHalf-Breed [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 04:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Over all writing is beyond a thousand but they dont offer that I hope its not done yet your story is amazing and beautifully written it and u as an author are now a fave of mine and i can't wait for the next part ( should there be one )
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