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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I admit I am not a Sess/Kagome fan, but I might have to make an exception for this piece, WHOA. I liked Sess's personality, his inner dialogue, it was insightful and he almost seemed...taken with her. I did like Inuyasha's little 'when I get my hands on her I'm going to erase all of Sess's claims' speech. That sounded promising and I almost felt bad for Sess, ok I felt bad for him because it was Inuyasha being a shit and letting Kags go in the first place. I really enjoy your writing and the fact that you don't use horrendous analogies for parts. When demonds are rutting (or humans for that matter), analogies like 'flower' etc seem embarrassingly stupid. All I know is that I would not have to fit bit by some evaporating, horney demoness to chase after one of those guys, lol. Great piece! I look forward to updates, thanks!
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad you updated. I was wondering if and hoping that you wouldn't let this story drop from our radar. Another great chapter. *gives you a cookie* I thought that Kagome would start remembering herself. Especially with the way you ended the last chapter. ...Guess not. *shrugs* I thought for a you were going to have Kagome run into Naraku when you mentioned the energy. That would have been weird. Well, at least she got rid of Kikyo. And so quickly too. Not to mention freeing all those poor souls. Of course that doesn't make up for the fact that Kagome killed all those animals/youkai for nothing but their energy, but I guess she can't be held accountable for what she does right now. Correct? Hopefully you'll have Sesshomaru or maybe even Koga run into Kagome. Someone who can knock some sense into her. Again, great chapter (my only suggestion is proofreading). I hope you update soon. *wavies* ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
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Reviewed By: izzyco2001 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 01:29 CDT
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I can leave my review here since I can't on FF! I liked this chapter very much. I really can't say more for certain reasons that you already know of, but good job.
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Reviewed By: Togu On: August 13, 2006 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaawww :P you finally updated ^^ nice chapter, but kinda boring Oo but what`s gonna happen now?? will sess find her or inu or????
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Title: Ch 3
Reviewed By: Mrs_Sesshomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 09:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Glomps Rhiannon with a giant hug* Weeee!! New chap! Awesome chap! I will say you scared the crap outta me when Kikyo shot her! I'm all like, "OMG! Kikyo's gonna kill Kags (& if not kill her, then seriously hurt her & leave her for dead)." Yup, I liked what really did happen a lot better! Ha-ha! Kags broke the pot! I love it!! That was the best Kik-hoe kill I've seen. Totally hilarious. Poor Inuyasha... Okay so update soon & all that jazz!
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Reviewed By: creitros [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 09:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bravo. You have a knack for interesting scenarios. I suppose the next chapter will involve Kagome getting some control over herself?
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Reviewed By: kitty_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is good so far but I do hope that you update it soon. beacuse it is really good and I would like to see where you are going with this story. Do she end up with Sesshomaru or inuyasha. I hope Sesshomaru. love it please update soon.
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Reviewed By: jc On: May 22, 2006 04:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Remembers Sesshoumaru slung over Kagome's shoulder..*bursts out laughing* what a blow to his pride eh? This is one hell of a story; it's definatly different in a good way (although i think the purple hair was a bit far). Hopefully Sesshoumaru doesn't get too mad about that "scratch" :) Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: tsukinoodango [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2006 22:04 CDT
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wow I like it it's good update soon
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Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 22:17 CDT
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All I can really say is I'm stunned! I don't know if I should fear this new Kagome, or be jealous of her! I love the story!! Poor Fluffy, he dosen't even know he is being used yet, I wonder if he will figure it out. This is a different story and very orignal. Don't stop writing, cause I ponder poor Fluffy's Predicament!Is she using him just for breeding...or something far more sinister?
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Sesshomaru. So slow on the uptake. I like the "postpone the final outcome" bit. Cute. Well, this chapter was... I'd like to say informing, but it wasn't. It was, however, very entertaining. ^_^ I can't wait until the confrontation. It will be next chapter, won't it? Or do you need more time to for Kagome's memories to surface and be doubted/pushed aside? Well, whichever way you decide to take the next few chapters in, I hope it's forward. *crosess fingers* Hopefully writers block won't strike. I'm impatiently waiting the next installment. Please update soon!
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was really good (though proof reading is needed). Throws confetti It's definitely different, I'll tell you that. But poor Sesshomaru being molested; though I'm sure he didn't mind after all was said and done. LOL Strange to try to picture a violet-haired Kagome running with Sesshomaru slung over her shoulder. But I'm wondering exactly what Kagome's turned into. A seductress, that's for sure. But what kind? Thinks Kagome wants a baby? Is that what why the demon was after Inuyasha and Miroku? "Now that she had what she'd so desperately craved, she knew what it was she'd desired. A male's help would be crucial by the end, but she didn't really need him now." How random. "...The sizzle of insects caught within her delighted and teased her to no end. With this newfound discovery, she enveloped a softly furred youkai before it could scurry out of her path, pouring her essence into its open nose and mouth and letting her excited bursts of energy tear at the creature's soft inner flesh. Absorbing the youki and fluids released in its pain, she reveled in her small gain of power..." For some reason that strikes me as being Naraku. Again, I enjoyed this chapter. I hope your planning on continuing this beyond the two chapters you've already posted. I really hope they find Kagome and figure out why that demon possessed/passed her powers onto her. Off to read the next chappy! Please update soon. Ja mata~! Wavies ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
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Title: WHAO!
Reviewed By: SesshyFAN On: April 09, 2006 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh, this is good! Can't wait til' you post next chapter!
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Reviewed By: 3Jane [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshoumaru? Slung over Kagome's shoulder? *giggles uncontrollably* Normally I would avoid Kagome-goes-demon fics like the plague, but this? I am so corrected. I especially love how even not in full control of herself, Kagome wants to let rip an 'osuwari' - hee! Absolutely no OOC-ness, so I'm in awe. Must go now and read the rest of your fics! :-D Oh, and updating soon? Yes, please.
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Title: Primal
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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