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Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 22:17 CDT
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All I can really say is I'm stunned! I don't know if I should fear this new Kagome, or be jealous of her! I love the story!! Poor Fluffy, he dosen't even know he is being used yet, I wonder if he will figure it out. This is a different story and very orignal. Don't stop writing, cause I ponder poor Fluffy's Predicament!Is she using him just for breeding...or something far more sinister?
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Sesshomaru. So slow on the uptake. I like the "postpone the final outcome" bit. Cute. Well, this chapter was... I'd like to say informing, but it wasn't. It was, however, very entertaining. ^_^ I can't wait until the confrontation. It will be next chapter, won't it? Or do you need more time to for Kagome's memories to surface and be doubted/pushed aside? Well, whichever way you decide to take the next few chapters in, I hope it's forward. *crosess fingers* Hopefully writers block won't strike. I'm impatiently waiting the next installment. Please update soon!
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was really good (though proof reading is needed). Throws confetti It's definitely different, I'll tell you that. But poor Sesshomaru being molested; though I'm sure he didn't mind after all was said and done. LOL Strange to try to picture a violet-haired Kagome running with Sesshomaru slung over her shoulder. But I'm wondering exactly what Kagome's turned into. A seductress, that's for sure. But what kind? Thinks Kagome wants a baby? Is that what why the demon was after Inuyasha and Miroku? "Now that she had what she'd so desperately craved, she knew what it was she'd desired. A male's help would be crucial by the end, but she didn't really need him now." How random. "...The sizzle of insects caught within her delighted and teased her to no end. With this newfound discovery, she enveloped a softly furred youkai before it could scurry out of her path, pouring her essence into its open nose and mouth and letting her excited bursts of energy tear at the creature's soft inner flesh. Absorbing the youki and fluids released in its pain, she reveled in her small gain of power..." For some reason that strikes me as being Naraku. Again, I enjoyed this chapter. I hope your planning on continuing this beyond the two chapters you've already posted. I really hope they find Kagome and figure out why that demon possessed/passed her powers onto her. Off to read the next chappy! Please update soon. Ja mata~! Wavies ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
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Title: WHAO!
Reviewed By: SesshyFAN On: April 09, 2006 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh, this is good! Can't wait til' you post next chapter!
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Reviewed By: 3Jane [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshoumaru? Slung over Kagome's shoulder? *giggles uncontrollably* Normally I would avoid Kagome-goes-demon fics like the plague, but this? I am so corrected. I especially love how even not in full control of herself, Kagome wants to let rip an 'osuwari' - hee! Absolutely no OOC-ness, so I'm in awe. Must go now and read the rest of your fics! :-D Oh, and updating soon? Yes, please.
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Title: Primal
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: April 03, 2006 21:28 CDT
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Very, very, VERY interesting... Hm :)
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Reviewed By: mspotts(not logged in) On: April 03, 2006 11:59 CDT
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I REALLY LOVE YOUR WRITING!! PLEASE UPDATE YOUR FANFICS SOON!
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Reviewed By: emiko On: April 03, 2006 08:14 CDT
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I LOVE THIS STORY!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 07:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my, another great fic! I've enjoyed reading these first two chapters and I can't wait to see how the next unfolds. You've got my interest piqued! Can't wait to see the next update! Excellent job, as always! ~~Ang
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Reviewed By: sesshomarus1lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love all ur storys i go by amber01 on ff and review on ur story on there i hope u update soon on this one! ur a great writer
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Title: Primal
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 02:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Primal
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 22:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: freakhorrorchick [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 12:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HELL YEA!!! Great begening!! Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: March 05, 2006 11:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have my attention. Wow, I can't get that picture out of my head....Sesshy slung over Kagome's shoulder.....temporarily paralized. *dies laughing* I've actually had to read this a couple of times to catch everything, but I think I've finally got it all now. Hard to grasp concepts when laughing as hard as I was last night. lol. Oh, and one more thing: no worries my panties aint bunched. lmao! I figure you'll get to 'darkness' as the urge strikes you. :) keep up the wonderful work, i love it!
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