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Reviewed By: Centari On: May 29, 2010 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story if only it continued it would be one of the best!
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Reviewed By: ForsakenMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2010 14:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story. Characters were beautifully depicted, especially Lord Sesshoumaru and the new Kagome. I wish you'd be able to continue this. The story is way too exciting. T.T Too sad the last chapter was made 3 years ago. T.T
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 17:53 CDT
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Hey! I'm trying to rectify my recent bad reviewing habits. I love this story. Kagome has one thing that I've always wanted; the abilities of a shape shifter, and not just any shape shifter either. That's one of the reasons I love this story so much. I am also thrilled that she got the upper hand on Sesshoumaru. That was so awesome! Poor Kouga. I feel so sorry for him. Well, it's like he hasn't been asking for a good beating. I sure hope that you are continuing your fics. I'll be checking around other sites. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 10:05 CST
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pplz update soon i loved it!
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Title: Jade Lotus
Reviewed By: Jade Lotus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 01:25 CDT
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Very interesting. Are you going to have Sesshomoru find her? Since she is now kind of back to herself, I'm interested to see how the story will go. Love the pairing! Please don't have her go back to Inuyasha, it dosn't look like you are but, just in case you were debating it. I think Sesshomoru could really help her more here. :) Keep up the awesome work!
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Title: Intriguing...
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 07:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was really enjoying this story until I learned that you hadn't updated in over 6 months. Pity. You really have some great ideas. I really hope you can find the inspiration to write more for this story, as it really is rather interesting! But, I know how you feel. Myself, I hadn't updated a couple of my stories in about 6 months due to lack of inspiration - so I don't blame you, I just REALLY, REALLY hope you are capable of updating this story soon! Either way, I wish you luck in your writing!
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Reviewed By: sakura1985 On: March 05, 2007 16:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the four chapters you have and have re-read them many times. I was wondering if you plan to continues this story.
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 20:09 CST
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i like it! no i love it! please udate soon i cant wai to find out what happens next.
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Title: Woman!
Reviewed By: carlet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 13:45 CST
Comment/Review:
OMFG! I just got done reading the latest update in cereal box romance (again *sighs wistfully*) and I noticed you updated primal as well?! YOU GO GIRL! I totally love this fic (of course..its pretty much a gimme I'm going to love everything you write :P) I love demon Kagome..ha ha..and I LOVE that for once she is the agressor in the relationship ...the mental image of Sesshoumaru being thrown over some demoness's back whilst she kidnapps him away is PURE GOLD. Believe me...its something I would do....if I were strong enough :P..hmmm perhaps some sort of pully system? *shakes away daydreamy thoughts* anyways! Good work! LOVE IT! and Happy Halloween!
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: October 29, 2006 23:43 CST
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Word up, good update... I love it, I love it :3
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Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 01:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very interesting story. excellently worded and with beautiful descriptions in places. and despite what you warned, I don't think that your story so far is so bad for us romance lovers. I think at this point it has the potential of turning into a romance, but even if that is not your plan, at least its not some disturbing rape thing, which is a bigger turn-off when looking for a romantic story (at least to me). hmm...anyway, good story, and I am really looking forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 00:25 CDT
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I'm so glad you decided to update this fic. I'm not a big fan of Kagome as a demon but I like this. I dunno, I just like everything I've read that you wrote. How interesting it is that Kagome came back to herself and has the presence of mind not to try to enter the village at night. I really do wonder what is going to happen next...
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Title: Very Creative
Reviewed By: brower47 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such an unusual set of circumstances you've created. It really is very good and original. I also love your continued very sexy style. My favorite bit so far is how Kagome actually turns to a mist as one of her new youkai abilities. Very nice. Keep up the great work!
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Title: Nilee1
Reviewed By: Nilee [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 05:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting to see Sesshoumaru overcome by lust rather tha good sense. The Kagome-demoness duality has the possiblity of playing out so many ways. Are the one or two separate beings? Can't wait to see how this situation is resolved.
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Reviewed By: freakhorrorchick [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOO ANOTHER OF YOUR STORIES LEFT HANGING!!Waaa you so mean. I need more to read. I think im the one possiosed.
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