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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: October 29, 2006 23:43 CST
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Word up, good update... I love it, I love it :3
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Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 01:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very interesting story. excellently worded and with beautiful descriptions in places. and despite what you warned, I don't think that your story so far is so bad for us romance lovers. I think at this point it has the potential of turning into a romance, but even if that is not your plan, at least its not some disturbing rape thing, which is a bigger turn-off when looking for a romantic story (at least to me). hmm...anyway, good story, and I am really looking forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 00:25 CDT
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I'm so glad you decided to update this fic. I'm not a big fan of Kagome as a demon but I like this. I dunno, I just like everything I've read that you wrote. How interesting it is that Kagome came back to herself and has the presence of mind not to try to enter the village at night. I really do wonder what is going to happen next...
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Title: Very Creative
Reviewed By: brower47 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such an unusual set of circumstances you've created. It really is very good and original. I also love your continued very sexy style. My favorite bit so far is how Kagome actually turns to a mist as one of her new youkai abilities. Very nice. Keep up the great work!
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Title: Nilee1
Reviewed By: Nilee [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 05:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting to see Sesshoumaru overcome by lust rather tha good sense. The Kagome-demoness duality has the possiblity of playing out so many ways. Are the one or two separate beings? Can't wait to see how this situation is resolved.
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Reviewed By: freakhorrorchick [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOO ANOTHER OF YOUR STORIES LEFT HANGING!!Waaa you so mean. I need more to read. I think im the one possiosed.
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I admit I am not a Sess/Kagome fan, but I might have to make an exception for this piece, WHOA. I liked Sess's personality, his inner dialogue, it was insightful and he almost seemed...taken with her. I did like Inuyasha's little 'when I get my hands on her I'm going to erase all of Sess's claims' speech. That sounded promising and I almost felt bad for Sess, ok I felt bad for him because it was Inuyasha being a shit and letting Kags go in the first place. I really enjoy your writing and the fact that you don't use horrendous analogies for parts. When demonds are rutting (or humans for that matter), analogies like 'flower' etc seem embarrassingly stupid. All I know is that I would not have to fit bit by some evaporating, horney demoness to chase after one of those guys, lol. Great piece! I look forward to updates, thanks!
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad you updated. I was wondering if and hoping that you wouldn't let this story drop from our radar. Another great chapter. *gives you a cookie* I thought that Kagome would start remembering herself. Especially with the way you ended the last chapter. ...Guess not. *shrugs* I thought for a you were going to have Kagome run into Naraku when you mentioned the energy. That would have been weird. Well, at least she got rid of Kikyo. And so quickly too. Not to mention freeing all those poor souls. Of course that doesn't make up for the fact that Kagome killed all those animals/youkai for nothing but their energy, but I guess she can't be held accountable for what she does right now. Correct? Hopefully you'll have Sesshomaru or maybe even Koga run into Kagome. Someone who can knock some sense into her. Again, great chapter (my only suggestion is proofreading). I hope you update soon. *wavies* ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
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Reviewed By: izzyco2001 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 01:29 CDT
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I can leave my review here since I can't on FF! I liked this chapter very much. I really can't say more for certain reasons that you already know of, but good job.
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Reviewed By: Togu On: August 13, 2006 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaawww :P you finally updated ^^ nice chapter, but kinda boring Oo but what`s gonna happen now?? will sess find her or inu or????
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Title: Ch 3
Reviewed By: Mrs_Sesshomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 09:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Glomps Rhiannon with a giant hug* Weeee!! New chap! Awesome chap! I will say you scared the crap outta me when Kikyo shot her! I'm all like, "OMG! Kikyo's gonna kill Kags (& if not kill her, then seriously hurt her & leave her for dead)." Yup, I liked what really did happen a lot better! Ha-ha! Kags broke the pot! I love it!! That was the best Kik-hoe kill I've seen. Totally hilarious. Poor Inuyasha... Okay so update soon & all that jazz!
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Reviewed By: creitros [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 09:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bravo. You have a knack for interesting scenarios. I suppose the next chapter will involve Kagome getting some control over herself?
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Reviewed By: kitty_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is good so far but I do hope that you update it soon. beacuse it is really good and I would like to see where you are going with this story. Do she end up with Sesshomaru or inuyasha. I hope Sesshomaru. love it please update soon.
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Reviewed By: jc On: May 22, 2006 04:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Remembers Sesshoumaru slung over Kagome's shoulder..*bursts out laughing* what a blow to his pride eh? This is one hell of a story; it's definatly different in a good way (although i think the purple hair was a bit far). Hopefully Sesshoumaru doesn't get too mad about that "scratch" :) Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: tsukinoodango [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2006 22:04 CDT
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wow I like it it's good update soon
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