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| "Beyond Mortal Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] | Title: email review
Reviewed By: bewsbud [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 22:55 CDT
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I found your response...interesting. ~~"I meant that when someone exudes sexual allure as much as Aya did while he was wearing that outfit, I'm pretty sure some people would be dying to rape him"(quote from your response)~~ No. I didn't take the use of the term "rape-worthy" to describe someone as 'sexually alluring' *too* seriously. Rape is NOT a response to finding someone sexually appealing. Contrary to your "Schu-Schu"-line, I'm not against rape fic when handled properly (and please don't call me "Honey"). I have no problem with the sexual relationship portrayed between Alucard and Aya. This is 'not' about sex. It's about using a non-concentual, brutal attack as a compliment. This phrase garnered no less than 75 responses in my LJ...all found it offensive. The consensus was that the author was probably too young to see the importance of confusing attraction with rape. When someone you love is raped, and you've helped then struggle back from the edge...if at that time, you see "rape-worthy" as a harmless compliment of some type, then we'll talk. Until then, I wish you continued success in your writing endeavors. As I stated in my email, the writing in this fic shows promise.
| Reviewed By: Mikko On: June 16, 2006 17:07 CDT
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Oo another chapter!? Man, you are writing fast XD I was a bit surprised at Yojis comment about not finding happiness* since he's always flirting with girls, well, I don't exactly remember how he is in this fic, since it is focusing on Aya and Alu. But that comment was kinda harsh oO' But still, I liked it very much, and lookie; I've got another chapter to read XD Hehe, I've got some errors in my spelling, don't have the strenght to find a dictionary XD
| Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan(Not Logged In) On: June 16, 2006 11:34 CDT
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I have noticed something. Your sex scenes are like reading an RP session. That's not a bad thing really, but usually when you're not the one RPing and have a set image in your mind then it is hard to follow what is being done and said. It is expecialy hard when you read an action, read some thoughts, and then read the other person's reaction. It is like you have to back track and remember what the action was to gage the reaction. Please tell me you did not kill Alucard. Omg...Please. That would break my little black heart. I don't think Aya would get over it, and I doubt that him going on a mass killing spree is a good thing for the story. He is sapposed to be a good guy! Even if you do intend to leave Alucard dead, I wanna know how you are going to continue this story that way. It is an interesting concenpt to digest now that I think about it, and I am sure that it would make some interesting things to happen. I mean, maybe Aya going on a mass killing spree to kill all the FREAKS would be a good thing, and the wold could live without Shwartz. Tis all up to you lady, but I am reaally eager to see what happens now. I'll miss all the purty little sex scenes that you did with the two, I was really getting into the whole blood and gore thing with them. Thanks for continuing to write such a great fic! Ja!
| Reviewed By: Red-on-Black On: June 16, 2006 06:52 CDT
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Brilliant chapter as usual! However, I just got confused at the ending. Really confused. The last 2 paragraphs sounds as though Alucard...died and is dead. But somehow it makes as though he isn't at the same time. Which is weird because I remember in the anime and manga Alucard got shot in the head with a bullet like that and he still didn't die. Plus at the like 3rd last episode in the anime Walter said to himself that Alucard was truly immortal and couldn't die. So does the last few paragraphs just imply he is dead or not dead? *sigh* Nevermind, I'll probably find out in the next chapter anyway. Poor Aya. He just can't keep himself out of trouble can he? Can't wait to see how he is going to get himself out of this one.*snicker* Roughly three or four chapters left!?!?!?!?!?! Oh no! *sigh* Well, I was kind of expecting that. Fanfiction like these can't be expected to go on forever. On the good side, I can't wait to see how this is going to end and especially how Aya's and Alucard's relationship is going to go. Oh yeah, I forgot to ask in my last review, since Aya is now bonded to Alucard, doesn't that mean that Alucard in a way is Aya's "master"? And shouldn't Aya be able to communicate with Alucard mentally? Or am I wrong? Anyway, update soon. There's no one in this universe that can write an Aya and Alucard "romance" fic like you do!
| Reviewed By: Mikko On: June 11, 2006 16:19 CDT
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Thanks^^ Man, you update really fast, I like that XD Also like the fact that you made Aya break down and show us that he actually have a 'human side'. Same goes for Alucard :P Well, I got another chapter to read and review, *cuddles computer* but I think I have to wait untill tomorrow to read that, it's almost midnight here (23:18) and I need my beauty sleep XD L8er XD
| Reviewed By: Red-on-Black On: June 11, 2006 00:23 CDT
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Their relationship is very...complicated. Very, very complicated. *smacks forehead* Aya finally realised who Alucard is! I was wondering did he know or not. So now they are bounded to each another. Don't know wether to be happy for them or sympathise Aya as well because well...it is Alucard. The Two of them just seem to be running in circles around and with each other. Love the part with the phone call with Integra. *snicker*, it is very Alucard and Intergra-like conversation. And I agree their relationship is very different to other 'boss and employee' relationships. Alucard just enjoys annoying her. Wasn't that surprised that Aya went to Sakura's funeral. I actually expected that. Wasn't expecting Yohji warning Aya on the notion of being happy and in love and all that Jazz. Now Yohji seems like a busy body putting his two cents in on Aya's and Alucard's matter.Furthermore, now Aya will be debating on the matter and trying to think how Yohji could think that. *sigh* More troubles for Aya. Poor him. Can't wait to see more insights on Aya's and Alucard's love/BDSM/Masterandslave/verycomplicated relationship. Don't really know how to define their relationship. Don't think there's a word to describe it!*snicker* Oh well, its them two, it's expected! By the way, how long to you intend to continue this fic? Estimate on the number of chapters? Or are you just planning this along the way? Oh yeah, love the picture/comic scene. *laughs hysterically* It was really fascinating to read! Update soon! You fans will be waiting.
| Reviewed By: SchrodingersCat On: June 09, 2006 10:12 CDT
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And before I forget this time too *smacks Yohji* you are the last person to be preaching on seeking happiness and forgiveness skippy! Now that I feel better, Yohji in this story seems to be a pain in the *&%! , he of all people should see the agony that Aya is going through, not only is his sister in a coma, but he was raped ( by Shwartz of all people) then he has to put up with a homicidal vampire who lusts after his blood, among other things, then he is partially responsible for Sakura's death, bah! *applies the thousand-handed B**** slap to Yohji* I just had to let that out.
| Reviewed By: SchrodingersCat On: June 09, 2006 10:06 CDT
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Heh, the last time I read a fanfic where Aya gets drunk, he (Aya) was calling Crawford a "bad bad man". This story has really taken a angsty turn, not that that can be a bad thing of course, my favorite pairing is Sch/Aya, unfortunatly, you have to do some pretty fancy explaining to have that, because Schu is the LAST person Aya would have feelings for realisticly. However even I have to admit that the idea of a Aya/Sakura pairing is sick and wrong, why date someone that looks like your sister? It is the worst pairing of all time. So, keep up the good work all! I hope to see more updates! *ps: this is the person previously known as Glass Shell, I just can't use that name anymore.
| Reviewed By: Red-on-Black On: June 08, 2006 06:27 CDT
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wow, first Aya drunk, then confession, semi argument (or lover's spat in a way), mental breakdown, kind of cute cuddling comforting, then being thoughtful, sexual making up time and now back to argument/lover's spat. Nice chapter! Can't wait to see if Alucard will try to "make up" to Aya for getting him angry because he killed Sakura. If he will, the method will be interesting. However, I can't really imagine that unless he gives the excuse the she could have been a threat to Hellsing. I haven't seen an episode of Weiss either, but I have seen Hellsing the anime. Alucard is very much in character. Love the part where you kind of relate Aya to Integra. FInd that really...fascinating. So, Alucard will never leave Hellsing, and Aya cannot leave Weiss but they'll still be together huh? Can't wait to find out how they keep their interesting relationship. *grins* Update soon! Can't wait to find out what happens. Happy writing.
| Reviewed By: Mikko On: June 04, 2006 08:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! I love the rebellious(?) side of Aya when they are having sex and Alucard just happens to cross the line a little bit to far XD I really wonder what kind of club this leben tote club is XD I absolutely adore these little comments yohji have about Aya's sex-life, keep going! There is only one thing that worries me and that is the feeling Alucard have, you know, killing Aya and all that jazz. makes me think that someday Alucard will start to hate our cute lil red-head because of the fact that aya can't die, but since you guys are writhing this, somehow it feels like I got nuthin' to worry about XD I really like these thimes when Alucard wants to punish Aya cuz of somthing 'bad' he have done, anyway, keep up the good work and don't laugh to much at my grammar mistakes, since english is mu second language XD 'til next time, see ya!
| Reviewed By: Red-on-Black On: May 31, 2006 10:37 CDT
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Just started reading this fic from start to finish. One word from me : Wow! One of the most unique crossover and pairings I have ever read. And they actually work. Why do I have a feeling that they will be a very interesting and probably lots of blood sex in the next scene? Especially with Alucard and Aya dressed like that in a club together with alcohol? I bet if people do hit on Aya and try to force themselves on him in the club, Alucard will probably 're-mark' his possession. Got to love those types of seme and ukes huh? :) I'm curious how this fic is going to continue. You said that Alucard and Aya will be together for eternity in your answer to Mikko. Yes they are both immortal and will probably never die or get killed due to their skills (in protecting themselves and taking out their opponent) and abilities. But, techinically how will they be together? For one, it can't go on with Alucard being there due to mission from hellsing. One of them has to move to the other. But I can't really see ALucard leaving Hellsing and I dont think he can. Aya on the other hand can possibly move to Hellsing but then there's his sister. Think you give any spoilers on what's to come or is it going to be a secret and surprise? Oh yeah, alucard killed Sakura. GO YOU! Tech, I don't like her and never will. :) For definate, its so going to be an interesting relationship with the two of them being together for eternity. Don't you just love that? Keep writing. I'll feel so sad if you don't continue to the end. Hope you update soon.
| Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan(Not logged in) On: May 28, 2006 14:43 CDT
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Omg joygasm! That was such a lovely death. -Grins happily and squeals like the rabid fangirl she is- Ahem, anyway...>>....
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Reviewed By: Mikko On: May 23, 2006 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD I so fucking love this! And, just, wow... It's so hard to find really good-great even, fic's containing Aya as the uke :D A really funny thing would be a S&M club XD and maybe create that master-slave thingei between Aya and Alucard *grin* The most fun part about this story is that I've only watched like 5 minutes of an Hellsing episode, but still I love this! The writing is great! You guys rock!
| Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan(Not logged in) On: May 21, 2006 18:29 CDT
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Yay! Now they can stop dancing around eachother now! Alucard wants to fuck Aya's brain out and bleed him dry and Aya wants Alucard to fuck his brains out and make him look like a human pin cusion! Everyone's happy! (Only because we get to read about it. -snicker-) I really hope Sakura dies ya know that? I really don't like her. And Schuldig and them? Hee hee. Alucard must kill them all for touching Aya. -Grin!- Lol. Please, don't ask, I ahve eaten too many M&Ms. But yeah, I am so looking forward to this next chapter. The car is gunna shake! That is, if they decide not to move. Knowing how your last scenes like this progressed, their not gunna. Ja!
| Reviewed By: Schrodingers Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 07:41 CDT
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Whoah! A chapter without them doin the nasty?! *blinks* didn't think that was possible. Not that it is bad mind you, but it is certainly a change. I don't think it would be (no pun intended) humanly possible for Aya to be bitten and *cough* "done" and survive fighting all of the time. Other than that, and you have given a good reason as to how and why Aya can survive, still doin great!
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