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Reviewed By: Mika-sanni On: May 01, 2006 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! And I love how Aya is being dominated X3 and the fact that the little bishounen is immortal *drools* the only thing that's missing is a black spiked dog collar (on aya/ran) with a chain/leash/leather-leash attached to it >:D And of course a controling Vampire holding it XD yeaa, anyway, keep updating cuz I love this!!
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Reviewed By: Dragondeb [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 04:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this. Please continue. :)
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Reviewed By: Glass Shell On: April 28, 2006 07:23 CDT
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Nice job! I like the fact that you did not make Aya/Ran a helpless person. Several crossovers I have read make him the dependant on the major crossover character. Also I love the connection between him and Aya-chan! You have probably read this story, but this is a VERY good explanation for how Aya-chan survived the explosion. It involves Aya/Ran having a talent, and they do a very good job explaining how the talent works and its benefits and all. http://panthea.populli.net/fiction/girl1.html It is called "Girl" by Maya Tawi and Viridian5. Looking forward to your next update!
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan(Not Logged In) On: April 27, 2006 22:38 CDT
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Ahhh! You have no idea how happy it makes me to see that I have an email from Mediaminer saying that there is a new chapter for Beyond Mortal Blood. I was sooooo happy about this chapter. It made me want to get up and jump for joy after I was done reading it. (Jumping for joy untill I realized that the chapter was all over and that there wasn't another chapter to read..;-; ) I really liked how you have CHarlie a face and a voice instead of just making him some faceless bad guy that Alucard sends to hell. It made me think of the Author of Hellsing because she does that aswell. I was laughing really hard about the Aya-Chan bit of this chapter and then Alucard's remedy that made Aya come back. But it got me to thinking that maybe Aya-Chan will come back and take over Aya's body again. I was kind of worried at first, because Aya-Chan said that Aya had gone crazy. I secretly blamed it on seeing Alucard's head on the floor. And the fact that he was so sloppy in getting rid of the freaks might have been a sign saying that Aya-Chan was infact in controll and not Aya. (I was thinking that maybe Aya-Chan lost his mind and was in a mental equivalent to a padded room inside of his mind.) I do like this way better. It makes it easier for more ALucardxAya sexiness. (-Hint hint!-) lol. I love reading your story, and I look forward to the next installment. (You're my new addiction.) Ja!
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan(Not Logged In) On: April 21, 2006 21:51 CDT
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I SWEAR IT'S ME! Omg! I am happy! Seras was in there! It wasn't as much as I would have liked, BUT SHE WAS THERE! I am a very happy woman right now. -huggles Seras plush doll- I am still irking over the whole Aya rape thing, it made my eye go twitchy twitchy twitchy and then I was like "HEY! I didn't know I could twitch my eyebrow..." Umm....Yeah....Just a little hyper. (Just a little.) I was also contemplating about the whole 'Making the FREAKs stronger using Aya (Persumably his blood...) But I also remember all the times that Alucard decided to lay claim to all of Aya, including his blood. So that would technacally make Alucard stronger. But maybe it's something else that makes the FREAKs stronger...I dunno anymore. I'll just wait and keep reading. THANK YOU FOR LISTENING TO MY BABBLE! JA!
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Reviewed By: Glass Shell On: April 20, 2006 21:20 CDT
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I like doin reviews for people who bother to reply to them :) As to this last chapter...XD Of course Aya is beastly enough by himself add in the Menthos level coolness of Alucard and you have a great pairing. Not to mention you have a good way of getting Aya to England without resorting to the "a person is walking around and trips over a rock and falls into a suddenly appearing portal" techniqe. That one just ticks me off. I wish you luck on the story and hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Glass Shell On: April 08, 2006 11:10 CDT
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I can honestly say that this is the first time I have heard of a Aya-clone idea. It is a very good idea too. Just thinking of the characters involved, I shudder to think what the meeting of Farfello and Father Anderson would be like...
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Reviewed By: hecate_19 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this fic to be very enjoyable. The only things I found wrong with it are how the P.O.V. keeps switching between Aya-kun and Alucard so suddenly at times. That, and the fact that poor Ken-kun had died, and he was my favorite Weiss chracter! T_T How did he die, anyways? Also, I can't wait to see when Schwartz comes into this. Alucard vs. Schuldig would be very interesting, as well as seeing what ol' Schul-chan might see inside 'Card-kun's messed-up head. But what would make it even more interesting is if the Vatican's Section 13 got involved as well!! *smirks* Can't you just imagine it? Farfello vs. Anderson? The guy who kills to hurt God, vs. the man who kills for God? And if you included the manga characters like Wolf Heinkel and Yumiko/Yumie, the split-personality nice/berserker nun? Berserker vs. Berserker! Now that would be something to see!!! ;)
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Reviewed By: Mrs.T On: April 01, 2006 01:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Ive never seen a pairing like this before. I like the way you portrayed Alucard and how you kept him in character.I really love his sick and twisted personlity and the way he interacts with Aya.I also like the way Aya acts in this story.I cant wait until Schwarz shows up.Id kinda like to see what happens if Schuldig or Farfarello meets up with Alucard.Now that would be an interesting altercation.Keep up the good work and update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: Glass Shell On: March 27, 2006 20:10 CST
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Just out of curiosity, are you going to introduce Schwartz to the mix? Just the idea of Crawford and Integra seems morbidly hilarious. Heck they would problably marry or kill eachother off. Anyhoo good luck, and still doin a great job on the fic. Even the latest chapter. kukuku ;D Glass Shell
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Reviewed By: xy On: March 21, 2006 20:26 CST
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so what is Persia goin to say...another chappie plz
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 11:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an interesting crossover, and I find the pairing something I haven't thougtht of before. Some of the parts I find that they move too fast for my liking however,not enough detail. It might just be me though. I like how Forward Alucard is, like in the manga. People tend to write him more as a closed off vampire, and I like the way you portray him. I was saddnened that I did not see Searas in the first two chapters, so I hope to see her in the 3rd or 4th. I really hope that you continue with this story, it will make this fangirl really happy.
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Reviewed By: Glass Shell On: March 16, 2006 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is an awesome crossover! I have never seen an Weiss/Hellsing crossover, it sounds hard to do, When I first read the summary I thought "how in the world are they going to do Alucard?" He has to be the hardest to do personality-wise, however you have done a great job of not making him too OOC. Your style of writing is refreshing and uniform, no diddly little paragraphs, or *shudder* whole pages of nonstop sentences. I was suprised when you had Aya and Alucard get together so quickley, but it is also nice to have a semi-short story that does not have ten chapeters before the main characters even kiss or anything. So once again, I have to say, Great Job!
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Reviewed By: Gingitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 20:00 CST
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This is so good! You painted an unlikely couple. I mean...who would have paired Aya with Alucard? I love the last part where Alucard gets inflamed with lust for AYa....hehe as for the sheet covering his naled self...I did see a picture before of Aya sleeping in the nude. He's gorgeous!
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Reviewed By: Ashley1984 On: March 06, 2006 12:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love it. I don't think a crossover of this kind has been attempted before. I also like how you've kept them in character as much as possible. Good work.
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