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Reviewed By: sugarkram On: June 30, 2006 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOO!!! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR WEEKS FOR AN UPDATE TO FIND OUT IF SHU IS REALLY PREGNANT OR NOT!!! WAAHH.Please update soon!!!!!!! Like in a day or two maybe? please? Im a big fan of your stories and I've read all your pieces and I really love them.
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Reviewed By: catti-dono(bakadeshi) On: June 10, 2006 23:40 CDT
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I have read ALL of your stories...this one is the best by far...I love the writting, the mood, the feel of this story...I was kind of hoping you would go into Shuichi's limb detail more...I feel that is about time that he would start having symptomsof leg weakness, giving out and would have to have the SURGERY that was mentioned in the last story...I guessIm a mashochist in having Shuichi only having problems but this is how it started with his legs giving out on occasion...now is a good time for him to be paralysed and need to have the surgery.....I guess Im just evil...but oh well...love your story...love your writing...catti
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Reviewed By: Flamula On: June 10, 2006 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is the mpreg I'm actually enjoying reading, very entertaining and with a touch of real life quite believable. Please keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Ashcat not signed in On: June 07, 2006 15:34 CDT
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Chpt 10: Wow I really like how this story is shaping up! It is nice to just see them interacting around the death and just normal time together! Oh oh.. :) I have to admit I hope Shu is pregnant, you know Eiri can't ever keep his thing to himself --- you've never talked about birth control what do they use if any? Is that how they end up with so many kids? ;) hehehe I really hope you go through the whole pregnancy bit this time if you chose to go that route, in your other stories you seem to skip over the actual pregnant time and I"ve always missed it.. I think you would bring a thoughtful and realistic view to pregnancy, especially seeing how well you write them with their children! Thanks for updating and I'm sorry about your hd that does really suck!
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: Tamu Ali [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 15:33 CDT
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Funny, I was thinking about this story and it's like you were reading my mind about the daughter thing. lol...Since all the boys have "K" names her's could be Koyomi or Kumiko: "Enternally beautiful child." lol...how strange you wrote this chapter meantioning a girl, lol. I can't wait to read more...keep it up!
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Title: Terrific!
Reviewed By: AngelofLight (not signed in) On: June 01, 2006 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another baby! My nephew Connor is 5, and he also spills the beans about anything he might overhear. I'm the one he normally spills to though lol. I really enjoy how you portray the characters, you mold them to fit the story, yet keep them in character enough so that they are recognizable. I also love Kane and Keitaro's personalities! Kane reminds me so much of Connor that I just giggle through all of his scenes (personality wise; I think my brother would rather have a root canal then let him have his hair that long. he'd pull a Keitaro and cut if off while Connor wasn't paying attention). That last line especially made me laugh, about wanting a girl since Shuichi doesn't count. Hilarious! Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: devilsincarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 16:43 CDT
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Lmao that was funny baby what baby? I really like this fanficiton and hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: Ichigo pocky On: May 31, 2006 17:32 CDT
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The extenstion to your chapter was very good, it was very sweet, very sad and funny at the end. It would be nice for Shuichi to have a baby girl. Anyway, will be waiting anxiously for the next chapter, until then.
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Reviewed By: sherlock sunshine On: May 30, 2006 18:04 CDT
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LOL! that was great. shuichi doesn't count. HAHAHAHA! now that was hilarious. you gotta love how kids can over hear everthing you say no matter now quiet it is said. cant wait for the next chapter. update soon.
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: DearMe On: May 30, 2006 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This story is so dear to me! You made them so perfect togehter, they're a noisy, lovely family! They're soo real and after all this time, all the struggles and everything they're still the COUPLE and theur family is absolutely the most beautiful thing ever. I can't wait to see Shu pregnant again XD! Thank you for continuing! Tons of inspiration and hope your computer problems are solved ^^
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Reviewed By: shu no baka (not logged in) On: May 30, 2006 14:39 CDT
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I'm bursting out laughing here too!!! Kane's more like Yuki than Shuichi! CX
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Reviewed By: ashcat not signedi n On: May 30, 2006 13:00 CDT
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Chpt 9: I liked the additions, it was nice to see Shu talk with Maiko - I always felt like they were close from the manga. Hmm.. so another baby, that will be tough to juggle with little Kira and a possible comeback career. And of course the biography is waiting at home as well. I'm curious to see where you end up taking it :) I am really enjoying this story!
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Reviewed By: morly On: May 30, 2006 12:58 CDT
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Very good chapter. Loved the baby dialogu with Kane. I cringe to know during what act he over heard the conversation though. Kids can say the darndest things.
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Reviewed By: SaraLoo On: May 24, 2006 17:27 CDT
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I love your story, it's so cute to see Shu and Yuki interacting with their kids. Will be waiting for the next chapter, hope it's soon.
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Reviewed By: Ichigo pocky On: May 23, 2006 20:28 CDT
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It was a good chapter, I think Kane is way cutw. Anyway can't wait for the next chapter, as well as 'Sorry'. I'm always excited when I see You've update either story. Ja ne for now.
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