| "Project IY14" Reviews/Comments [ 68 ] |
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Title: BEGGING
Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 On: July 02, 2006 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I BEG OF YOU!!! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR SOO LONG FOR THE STORY TO CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M GONNA CRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A LOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!LEASE!!!PLEASE!!! and...Oh. My. God. So good. So good. I can't even describe the elation I felt when I got the notice that this had been updated, and then the even greater elation after reading this chapter. I wish I had some criticism.Can't wait till next update! and...wow... I really like your story.. I just read the chapter u posed. AHHHH YOU JUST LEFT IT THERE!!??? *sobs uncontrollably* Mother F&*%er! (not you.. just a comment)I wish I was living this story or something.Please add more chapters! Lemony even! :-D ok, bye, also I usually don't ask writers to hurry up and updte because I beleive it is very rude. But this one time I will be rude. PLEASE update faseer than a month. I don't think I can what that long. Another great chapter by the way. I have no complaints! ^_^
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Reviewed By: j0yrid3 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update as soon as you can! This is the most original fanfic I've ever read and it's captivating at the same time. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: XSesshomaruX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 21:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
YES MORE I LOVE IT DONT STOP YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YESYSESYEYESYEYSYESYESYYSEYEYSEYEYESYYESYESYSEYEYSYESYESYESYESYYESYESEYSYES YEYYESYSEYESYSEYESYSEYESYESYEYSSYEYESYES!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 18:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
thanks for the update!! :o) i totally understand about school. awww.... how sweet! rin and sesshoumaru! yay!! i am interested to see what you do with the rest of the characters. i can't wait for you to update again! wonderful job!!
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Reviewed By: Angelevie (nsi) On: June 22, 2006 18:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
I reeally liked this story, and that's saying alot since I don't normally like Sess stories. It's deffinately a one of a kind.
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Reviewed By: XSesshomaruX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i thought u quit BUT U HAVENT GIVEN UP ON UR FANS KEEP WRITTING
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Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 17:19 CDT
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This is such a good story, I hope you update soon. Ohh...I loved how you made Kagura the head general over Naraku - that was quite original and it's kinda cool to have a woman be in a position of authroity over a man as long as it's done well and you certainly did.
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Title: BEGGING
Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 On: May 21, 2006 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I BEG OF YOU!!! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR SOO LONG FOR THE STORY TO CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M GONNA CRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A LOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!LEASE!!!PLEASE!!! and...Oh. My. God. So good. So good. I can't even describe the elation I felt when I got the notice that this had been updated, and then the even greater elation after reading this chapter. I wish I had some criticism... he might be moving a little too quickly, but somehow that works (cause he's soooo SEXY!). Can't wait till next update! and...just...wow... I really like your story.. I just read the chapter u posed. AHHHH YOU JUST LEFT IT THERE!!??? *sobs uncontrollably* Mother F&*%er! (not you.. just a comment) INUYASHA IS SO DAMN SEXY IT'S NOT EVEN FUNNY!!!! I want him for my birthday, not just a chapter! (but i thank u 4 the chapter ^_^) Luv ya!
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Title: Awestruck
Reviewed By: maelia8 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read all of the chapters of this fanfic and I was incredibly impressed with both your command over plot development and your eye for detail in the enunciation of an AU. For me, an AU must creat a complete world, and I am often disappointed with AU fanfics which leave holes or unexplained passages. But this fic passes my AU test of believability and proper characterization, so kudos to you! This fic is a prime example of the amazing whays in which AUs can be as powerful as the priginal situation, if the plot is properly constructed. I loved that funny little reference to prison guards in Iraq . . . quick, well-punctuated humor is certainly not lost on the astute reader, and, when properly placed, can be a real spicer for a complex fic. I wonder about the tantalizingly teasing bits of IY14's past that you have permitted us to see, although I do have a few questions, such as: How does he have memories when he is a clone, not a reincarnation? And how could he have taken his life with Tensaiga (as he seems to have done from the flashbacks), as it is a sword which cannot kill? I look foreward to finding the answers to these riddles, and any onther intriguing connundrums that you may choose to pose for readers like myself. Thank you for writing this fic! Please update soon!
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Title: Very Good ^_^
Reviewed By: inuyashasramen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 21:38 CDT
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I love it so far! It's kind of funny, usually I don't really read these kind of fics. I'm more into just inu/kag, but I'm glad I chose to read this fic. It's awesome! ^_^ I felt so bad for sess in the beginning, they were torturing poor him! But now he's found rin and everythings' alright. I love it! Please continue! Lub, inu's ramen ^_^
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Reviewed By: divapimpstar On: May 10, 2006 03:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story one of a kind ........when will u update.....keep writing!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Jimmy the Gothic Egg [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm just so proud of you. 33 reviews!! You made a bunch of changes apparently, so I'm rereading. I do love this story. You are so original; I could've never thought this up.
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Title: oh god...
Reviewed By: just me On: May 08, 2006 10:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm applauding you here!! i can't believe how good your story is! and so origin! kinda... i love this story and all, but i have one request, which i hope isn't too hard to fullfill: make inu and kago closer, because the way they ae now is just like some distant friends, but i love your story anyway! inu_inu_luvluv
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 12:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go Kagura! Yeah! I thought that was an awesome chapter! :o) wonderful job!! i hope you update soon!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh most excellent chapter. Love it that Naraku is on the receiving end this time and not Kagura. That's a switch. Wonder what she's gonna do when she finally catches up to their project. Being that he is more aware of things now. Should be most interesting. Awesome story. Update when you can.
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