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Reviewed By: YoukaiFate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 11:51 CDT
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Yet another wonderful chapter. I love how you integrated the Kazaana's attributes of eating back the flesh from the palm out, named it for a "fairytale' monk's ordeal, and now Miroku has a prosthetic arm. I wonder, by using the pure youkai healing abilities Kagura mentioned in the last chapter, if Miroku's arm could be restored? Hmmmm.... Fate
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Reviewed By: YoukaiFate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 11:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I am loving your attention to detail! I love how you added that history about the torture of the Nazi's, the prison guards and the 'Internment of 2220'. I find it hilarious that Naraku is answering to Kagura, instead of the other way around. They are both quite in character. Fate
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Reviewed By: YoukaiFate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 11:29 CDT
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I am positively flooding you with reviews, but I am so delighted by this story that I can't help but comment. =) Your writing is amazing! I have already gone from giggles to tears from chapter to chapter, but this one had me doing both. That scene between Rin and Sesshoumaru, when he lightly grips her hand, oh that was so poignant! I adored it, and was sniffing back tears over a happy little stupid smile. Oh it was WAFFy and lovely and I even sighed with contentment...only to choke later at the look on Miroku's face, 'as if he had been caught stealing Sango's bra'. Oh, that one had me on the floor laughing. I almost sprayed coffee all over my monitor...you should warn a girl before hitting her upside the head with a funny. I wouldn't have just taken a sip of coffee and I wouldn't have been choking and wheezing and trying not to chortle. Oh, that was a good one! Holy snot, I am in love with this story! Man oh man I hope you update soon, as I already checked and it's been a few months. *sob* Ah, well, I still have a few more chapters I get to wallow in before I run out... Fate
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Reviewed By: YoukaiFate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 11:11 CDT
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Okay, this chapter had me laughing out loud. I can just see the elegant Taiyoukai---thunk!---wince---banging his head on the upper part of that storage slot. And then, of course, his impetuous brother must follow in his footsteps, thunk. LOLOLOLOLOL I wonder if Inuyasha is IY7? Though he seems to think he is not a full hanyou. Curiosity roused. That last part with the low-cut top for Sango, haha! Wonder if it will work? (Skipping off to go read more...) Fate
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Reviewed By: YoukaiFate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 10:44 CDT
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The tears are falling now. So much emotion! Poor Sesshoumaru! Damn Naraku and his twisted self. Damn. Damn damn damn damn damn. Fate
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: YoukaiFate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 10:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this is awesome! I had to toss in a word about this chapter. It had tears in my eyes. Poor Sesshoumaru. To see such a proud being subjected to things he can't even understand, caged like an animal for the mere benefit of "science". Damn. You are exceptional. Fate
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Reviewed By: nyaa On: October 25, 2006 12:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I hope you haven't given up on this! You have such great imagination, I'd be really sad if you stopped here. The whole idea for this fic is so unique, and it's too great to be abandoned! Please, please, keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: neosassassin On: August 27, 2006 20:08 CDT
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Aaaaawwwwwwwsssssssooooooommmmmmmmeeee
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 01:46 CDT
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thanks for the update! i enjoyed the glimpse into sango's background and the miroku/sango scene. aww! :o) i can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: JimmytheGothicEgg On: July 28, 2006 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude. Make out scene time. No, I'm sorry. I just love this story so much. Which is odd. I'm not normally a Sessh/Rin fan. ((Sessh/Kagura is more my style.)) I hope we've got more a-coming. A-coming I say! Say I!
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Reviewed By: Crystaru-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2006 22:58 CDT
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...I absolutly LOVE your story! It's writen wonderfully! *Makes a happy mewing sound* I can't wait until the next chapter! I wish upon you the joys of no, that's right NO, writers block!
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Reviewed By: KinshiTaisho56 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh by the way my email is www.fight4fuzz@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: KinshiTaisho56 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's the best story i've read so far, invalving Sesshomaru! Wright the next chapter soon! please?! KinshiTaisho56 P.S. if you could send me the rest of the chapters after Chapter 12 - Nightmare ( Chapter 13 ), i'd apreashiate it! Thanks
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Reviewed By: Kinshi Taisho56 On: July 14, 2006 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's the best story i've read so far, invalving Sesshomaru! Wright the next chapter soon! please?! KinshiTaisho56 P.S. if you could send me the rest of the chapters after Chapter 12 - Nightmare ( Chapter 13 ), i'd apreashiate it! Thanks
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Title: excellent
Reviewed By: raven of the dark [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 06:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your story! Words cannot describe how good it is, and I just absolutely love it! I am like 'Go Kagura! Beat the shit out of Naraku!' -.-'' haha!!! Hope you would hurry and update! I want to see what happens next...
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