| "Two Sides to a Story" Reviews/Comments [ 123 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zorella [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2002 06:55 CDT
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yet another involving chapter. What does go through that mind of yours? :) |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2002 16:07 CDT
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Ooo, I'm in suspence of what will happen next! |
Reviewed By: Kandy. On: May 11, 2002 17:15 CDT
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You updated...Yah!! Who would have thought that was all he need? I can't wait to find out what Vegeta tell Bulma. Looking Forward |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 11, 2002 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome update!! I loved the scene in the bathroom, specially when Yamcha came in to relieve himself. Poor Trunks is suffering but thanks to daddy it looks like he's gonna be okay, even though Vegeta's "treatment" seemed somewhat unorthodox. Can't wait to see what happens next!! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2002 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the love of everything that is good and holy why do you keep stopping?!?!?!?! Damn... |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2002 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a dramatic chapter! Well worth the wait! |
Reviewed By: ErieDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2002 19:06 CDT
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EW! Omg.. He ripped open his wrist.. O_O At least he got to Trunks on time. Scared me shitless when the bleeper thingy went dead.. Ohhhh man darke, you rule the world XD All KOP writers should be shot.. |
Reviewed By: Alexander [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2002 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn is all I can say. Damn. |
Reviewed By: Duo's Dame On: April 27, 2002 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got it! I JUST got the JOKE: The opera singers in Chapter Six- "Blueberry the Fruit" and his wife "Assorted Nuts" OMG! Where do you come up with this $hit? Too bad about Trunks but I know you wouldnt put the little tyke on the chopping block without a motive up your sleeve. Then again, knowing you... maybe you would! Can't wait for Seven!!! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2002 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blinks* Damn... |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2002 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Trunks, why? |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 26, 2002 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Christ Almighty!! You should be crowned the King Of Angst! Trunks is in a coma and Veggie's been missing for all this time. Poor Bulma, I don't know how she can deal with all this. I can't wait till you update, cause there's got to be a light at the end of this tunnel. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 16, 2002 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!! "You taste like chicken"-great line (to everyone except Furiza). Good riddance to the Installation and all the assorted a$$holes that worked in it. Furiza met a fitting end, along with another part of his anatomy ^_^. What's gonna happen to Veggie now? I mean he can't die, specially after thinking of Trunks and Bulma. Maybe he's starting to regret that he left Capsule Corp. Awesome chapter!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2002 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn...
-JB |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2002 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know if I can take anymore of Vegeta getting the blunt end of it all. He's been through so much...and you have to admit, if he left CC he wouldn't be where his is now. Besides finally getting revenege by killing Frieza now, is it worth his life? His ability to summon his ki? And will he ever get back home, and make things right with Bulma & Trunks? Oh! I just can't take it...but you I'll be here on the 26th! Laters! |
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