| "Two Sides to a Story" Reviews/Comments [ 123 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zorella [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 16:18 CST
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As gokusgirl said, a unexpected surprise! Your e-mail every chapter brings a smile to my face and to go 'wopdido!' and jump and dance.. well I would, if my mum wasn't 3 meters away ^^
As usual DA, I loved it. I want to say something profound and memorable, but there is nothing I can say execpt that I love this story. I don't want it to end, but it must I guess.
See you next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Editor Rascal On: January 02, 2003 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Continuing your usual superior caliber of writing,
once again you have provided us with just the right tone and emotion to bring the story just where it should be. We all want it to go on, as it is such an addicting read, but, as they say, all good things must come to an end. This has been a very satisfying story to read. You have such a wonderful writing style, not pretentious, but so real and intellegent without being wordy or florid. I am looking forward to the last chapter. (Just don't take too long!) Please write more, and often!
Love Ya Lots,
ER |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an unexpected surprise!
I'm glad you updated...and I'm glad that Vegeta and Bulma have reconciled. You wrote their intimate moments very well and it was very funny about Vegeta confusing a carot diamond with an actual carrot...
Chichi is very annoying in this stroy, but you make her exactly what I would picture her in the normal DBZ line.
I'm saddened that seventeen will be the next chapter, but it's been a wonderful piece to read and I can't wait until you write more. Until next time...ja... |
Reviewed By: Eloy Brightdreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've done it again! I'll be sorry to see the fic end next chapter, but hey, you can always start on another one, right? :) You should write more humor too.
You're the only author who can make me laugh, cry, and need a cold shower all in the same fic. Never stop! |
Reviewed By: Unknown On: December 21, 2002 16:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The best fanfic ever!!!! |
Reviewed By: Erin On: December 13, 2002 10:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to read chapter 16! |
Reviewed By: RingPrincess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2002 18:38 CST
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Oh yeah, a new chapter!!!! and it is as wonderful as all the rest. Hmm. . . the next chapter sounds very interesting. ;P |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2002 21:33 CST
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I love this story...
yup, thats all I have to say. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 02, 2002 12:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update. For a while there Chichi was really starting to get on my nerves, and everyone elses for that matter. I can't believe that she had the nerve to mouth off like that in Bulma's house. Poor Veggie developed a taste for cat food? I think it's finally starting to dawn on Bulma that his life for a long time was a living hell. Vegeta is so messed up that he's still angry about having to wear that infamous pink shirt-lol!
Looks like Trunks is the only person that he will trust or seek help from. Can't wait to read what happens next!!! Great job Darke ^_^! |
Reviewed By: Mr Peepers On: December 14, 2002 01:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is exceptional in every way. Darke Angelus brings a realness to characters and story that makes it addicting and satisfying to read. Written with such insight and intelligence, "Two Sides To A Story" nails us to our seats and has us panting and pining for more.
Now, where IS that next chapter? |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2002 07:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one intense chapter DA! I am glad that you are still updating ths wonderful fic! You know I have been making predictions on how this story is going to porgress and I NEVER get it right! It is wonderful to find a story that in not predictable, and it leaves you either worried, exicited, dismayed, or whatever until the next chapter! You're doing a great job, and I wonder how you will have Bulma & Vegeta interact with each other in the next chapter...update soon...or when you can...I know you're a busy little bee! :)
Take care,
aka "vejitasbabe" |
Reviewed By: autumn On: October 30, 2002 00:56 CST
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This chapter was fabulous. I thought you really captured a maniacal Vegeta very well and I especially liked Gohan's role in everything; the way his presence gave Vegeta the first spark of doubt and how Gohan had such trouble accepting the fact that he might have to kill Vegeta. It was all very well done. Of course, I loved the ending, seeing little baby Trunks help his daddy and Vegeta actually being grateful. Again, you got those emotions down so well. I can just see Vegeta kneeling in the dirt, bewildered and confused and then... remorseful. *sigh* Might have to reread some of this story while I wait for an update, I just love it so much. :) |
Reviewed By: Sluggy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2002 14:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are my ALL TIME favorite fanfic writer! I'm SO glad you're back, and just in time for my birthday! What a present this is ^_^ and you didn't even know it. Like always, you lure the reader into your little trap and keep him there squirming and writhing in agony for another great chappie to be posted. Great work and I can't wait for the next one! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: October 29, 2002 04:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG There are no words to describe how I'm feeling after reading this chap. The fight scenes between V/G were so intense as well as heartbreaking. The last thing Gohan wanted to do was hurt Vegeta. You could almost feel the emotional conflict he was going thru. Finally that bastard doctor is dead. Using baby Trunks to bring Vegeta around was sheer genious. Absolutely amazing is all I can say. Now maybe B/V can start to repair their relationship, although that's gonna be a tough road ahead. Bravo for this incredible chapter. |
Reviewed By: Zorella [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2002 23:51 CST
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Oh yay! I get first message for new chappie ^^
As usuall I am utterly lost for words but *sigh* that was good DA, unbelievably and incredibly good.
You are the best author I have ever known, and I'm not only talking about fan fic authors. |
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