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Reviewed By: Lord Payne On: October 24, 2010 12:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Will Ranma ever do all three Tendo sisters at the same time? And, will he do Nodoka at some point?
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Reviewed By: CVF On: July 27, 2009 04:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The calm before the storm. I can imagine Kohl preparing for a strategic assault on Ranma with that special liquid that would most likely lock him permanently in girl form. Ohhh ......... the adrenaline ........... though if it backfires ........ Kohl might be the one locked in girl form instead^_^ Great work on the fight scene between Mars and Kodachi. Nice show on Ranma and his escapades with the fairer sex^_^ Let the updates begin!
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Title: Chapter 20
Reviewed By: Hiryo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2009 09:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow as good as ever ^^ Thanks for writing that!!! I wonder about Setsuna overlooking Ranma as well as how Mars will fall into the equation. As well the Jusenkyo water. Man I wish Ranma all the luck he can get. ^^ Well looking forward for further installations of yours!!!
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Reviewed By: CVF On: November 12, 2008 04:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Ranma has finally completed his seduction of the Tendo sisters! And nice info on his opponents! Sexual combat does not appear to be far off. Great description of Ranma's prowess and skill in bed. Perhaps the upcoming battle would be most interesting with a match of the intimate kind. Body against body, skin against skin ... Kohl and Ranma would be fighting to the finish on this one. Winner takes everything. Hope to read more of this soon.
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Title: Learning and Corruption
Reviewed By: borgrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2008 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As usual, a great read. Looks like Ranma's going to have his hands full. Maybe a double or triple senshi charge-up is in order for handling Kohl. Maybe an attack rupturing a renal artery and ureter in such a way that he pisses blood, which is only a fraction of the blood loss. He would have to find a hospital and spend a week or two recovering, if he survived. The guy deserves an eventual vigilante death sentence for the callous way he enslaves women. Thanks for writing. Looking forward to more. Wes
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Reviewed By: Rubel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2008 08:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome an update. I'm glad you're writers block seems to have cleared up for this story. I know who you are hinting is "the Apprentice", the laugh gave it away but it could be her rival instead. THey both had that HOHOHOHO laugh. Anyways thanks for the good read and keep up the good work. Oh yeah which will be the next Senshi Ranma corrupts? :)
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Reviewed By: Hiryo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2008 03:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woa I'm awed again by you writing again I can't wait for another chapter (any story of you) I look forward to read more of you maybe I'm lucky there. This chapter was very nice and the setup partically picked my curiousity and want for more! Hope to read more very soon!!!
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Reviewed By: DrewB1442 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 19:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not bad. I can't wait for your next update.
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Reviewed By: Ptn02 On: May 23, 2008 15:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very enjoyable story I have been following way back from chapter 1. The last chapter continuous in this fine tradition, although I did get the impression that the Ranma/Nabiki lemon scene was a bit less polished compared to the rest.
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Reviewed By: Sargon Dorsai On: May 22, 2008 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I completely enjoy reading this story. The overall plot is enjoyable and of course, each scene draws you onwards towards the next. It was awesome seeing an update after so long. I'm looking forward to seeing how the police officers are handled. Not to mention how Kasumi develops. I have a feeling that she's going to go a long ways towards helping Ranma.
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Reviewed By: TJG On: May 10, 2008 00:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good update. You are missing part of the sentence towards the end at: "As he left the room h He winced as he saw the state of their pants on the floor."
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Reviewed By: Hiryo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks again for writing yet another grand chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANKS HEAPS I really like your fanfic and am happy and thankful for each chapter by you!
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Reviewed By: 117 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice update! Your latest chapter reminds me as to why your story remains the best hentai Ranma fanfic I've ever read! As for Nabiki, how the high and mighty have fallen ... with a real crash to the ground, of course! I can't believe what's happening next ... Kasumi the Apprentice, anybody? And who's that new guy out to nab Ranma in his female form? The plot thickens ... ^_^
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Title: chapter 17
Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 03:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love this story please update again a.s.a.l.a.
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Reviewed By: TJG On: December 26, 2007 17:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Great update. Interesting background additions to the characters. I wonder what is going on in Tofu's head to order that much. How about having Kasumi screw Tofu's brains out? Sort of like that scene in Warpwizard's "Payback". For that matter how about having her decide on a threesome right afterwards with Tofu with Tofu going nuts and singing children's songs or occasionally flipping personalities between normal, stereotyped Elvis and some stereotyped Spanish (and/or French) lover. Presumably Tofu is aware of some of those sex martial arts from what was shown on the story.
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