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Reviewed By: Innortal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2007 04:26 EST
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Damn, things just seem to be growing. If you need something to stimulate a muse, you may try writing things from Nodoka's perspective, reading Ranma's progress report, as well as baby pictures. Damn, I do hope you write more soon.
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Reviewed By: 117 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2007 09:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad to see you're updating! I was wondering since the last chapter when you're going to. Your story is well-done, both the comedic and sexy stuff blend together really well. So Akane finally broke. Poor girl. Can't wait to see what happens next with the Tendo sisters. Call me a sadist but please make Nabiki really *suffer* when she resists. Example, Ranma banging Kasumi in her room while Nabiki listens in frustration unable to do anything to relieve herself. That would be sheer torture. *grins*
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Title: The Fic Reader
Reviewed By: Naaros On: December 24, 2007 00:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Update! I've like your stories since you started them ... the tension ... the sex ... the corruption ... and so on ... I wonder what it's going to be like when Kasumi finally falls ... those closet types ... usually seem to be the most energetic when it comes to doing the deed. As for Nabiki ... let Nabiki resist temptation if she must but make sure she never figures out the tea that she's drinking is the cause. That's part of the fun! In fact ... let her drink more to 'soothe' her nerves. Pride always comes before a fall. And Nabiki will eventually fall ... hard. ^_^
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Title: GASP!
Reviewed By: Mz Demeanor On: October 22, 2007 10:38 EDT
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As always you leave me holding my breath at such exquisitely written story. You always leave me wanting to read more and more and Ranma and Nabiki's interactions are always so much interesting to read. I wonder what plans Nabiki is plotting to counter Ranma and I'm a little surprised she hasn't connected her "condition" with the special tea. I also beg you that you continue to write Nabiki's resistance of Ranma. Her continued resistance as well as her interaction with Ranma is what makes me keep coming back for more! I laughed so hard when I read Akane finally throwing herself to Kuno only to be rejected by the deranged kendoist. Utter genius by the way. LOL! Everything seems to get more interesting as well with the senshi suffering from some weird backlash from Tuxedo Kamen. I wonder what happens to the rest of the characters next? Again I can't wait for the next chapter and as always I'll be cheering for Nabiki-chan to resist Temptation! Brilliant and excellent work!
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Reviewed By: Innortal [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2007 05:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A little confusing at one line in the debate between Ranma and Nabiki, but still a great read. I can't wait to read more soon, and to see what Ami's computer tells them.
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Reviewed By: godlykiller2 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 18:29 EDT
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i love the story its well written and suplies and nice background to make it better.
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Title: fantastic
Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 00:01 EDT
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i noramaly read this story on your main site but i feall like givein a revew this stim because this story is truly fantastic thank you for sharing it
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Reviewed By: 117 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 11:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What more can I say that hasn't been said by those other reviewers? Your work isn't good, man. It's EXCELLENT! One of those types of fanfics where we poor readers can only *drool* in anticipation ... of what happens next. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Chris234wefg On: March 14, 2007 12:31 EDT
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I'd enjoy a Urd/Ranma scene or Uranus/Ranma scene
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Title: Who else?
Reviewed By: whimsy007 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 07:55 EDT
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You mentioned Ukyou in passing. A flashback scene would be nice. What about Kodachi? Miss Hinako in adult form? I'm sure that Ranma could provide her with enough ki to keep her in adult form during their encounter. As far as the other Inner Senshi, Minako and Rei would be amenable. and Ami would seem to be of the "it's always the quiet ones" type. Going after Haruka and Michiru would be interesting. Can Ranma turn them into bisexuals? Akane has less emotional control than Nabiki. I think that she will succumb soon to Ranma. However, he regards Nabiki as a special challenge. That should be interesting to play out. As another reviewer suggested, don't have Nabiki give in to soon. Urd and Belldandy know about Ranma. How would they react to Megumi and Ranma? As long as its consensual I don't think that they would interfere. The OMG-verse also contains other attractive women such as Chihiro, Sayoko and Shiho.
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Reviewed By: BTSV On: March 11, 2007 07:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just can't wait to see Ranma sexing up the Tendo sisters ... ^_^
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Title: Just a Suggestion
Reviewed By: Mz Demeanor On: March 08, 2007 06:16 EST
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Hurray! You've updated!(Throws confetti in the air) Now for an actual review, You have probably guessed from my last and first review that I am a huge fan of Nabiki-sama and would very much to see her struggle against Ranma's seductions ( I fear that she will crack soon and that would be so sad) Nabiki is a very conniving creature and I would like to suggest that she finds an alternative way not to succumb to Ranma's advances like pressure points, potions, etc. She lives in Nerima afterall and getting something to counter the aphrodisiacs she had been exposed to or even discovering some kind of Ki/Chi technique to counter Ranma. Like I had said in the previous review, I don't want Nabiki to bedded so soon since I enjoy her interactions with Ranma too much. Plus her internal and external struggles are always amusing to watch. Continue your great work and I hope to see more updates from you. Go Nabiki-chan! Resist Temptation!
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Reviewed By: Comartemis On: March 07, 2007 17:51 EST
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I don't care whether or not it's getting repetitive, so long as the rest of the senshi get some sooner or later, i'll eagerly wait for new chapters. How 'bout some Hotaru smut? ;)
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Reviewed By: iatnehfognik [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 10:28 EST
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consistant chapters at a constant rate with original ideas. I think it begun to be a bit repetitive, but for some reason i still like it..
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Reviewed By: DrewB1442 On: January 04, 2007 14:59 EST
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Well done. I like this story very much, and I hope it is continued soon. Also, the person going by the name 'Jaded Ranma Fan' is a fool. Don't listen to him.
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