| "The Fox and The Phoenix" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Reviewed By: sweetinsanity On: October 02, 2006 04:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ill admit that the 'sick shit", as you so aptly named it, disgusted me. but it makes your plot so fucking brilliant. as much as it sickens me, i have to bow to your awsomeness and praise your amazing writing skill. keep up the good work XP
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: ranch_boy1 On: September 29, 2006 10:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good story I love it but please ad another key make s.s. for graphic blood and gore and ad a key that says make you vomit shit seriously this chapter gave me nightmares
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Title: PS
Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 22:18 EDT
Comment/Review:
.....narufan19 really needs some help, you put warnings up, if he doesn't wanna read that part, he should skip it -.-; sides it SS parts really help fuck with narutos mind :P again, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 22:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nuuuuuu the chapter ended TT me sad. please update soon! things are really lookin interesting :p =) i'll be waiting for your next update, ja~
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Title: PS
Reviewed By: Arenja-too-lazy-to-log-in On: September 21, 2006 01:16 EDT
Comment/Review:
Ignore NeruFan19, he's most likely an idiot with an IQ of 75. (BTW: 100 is average for an IQ)
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Reviewed By: Arenja-too-lazy-to-log-in On: September 21, 2006 01:14 EDT
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*chokes on own laughter... again* I LOVE IT! DAIIIIISUKI! You REALLY have some issues, dude. I mean, going to sleep thinking how to fuck with your charactors MINDS? ... Never mind. I do that too. Well, actually, I sleep with a little pink stuffed rabbit, a blue conforter, my brother's old pillow, and a very quiet radio going on the classical channel on my alarm clock while thinking how to torture my chractors and how to dodge this weeks church... We're very much alike! Keep up the good work! I like the part where... Aha, who am I kidding? I like the whole thing! I REALLY love your writing. Keep up the good work! I'm looking foreward to your next update! I'm glad I put this on my favorites so I know when you update!
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Reviewed By: southwest_cyba_ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 00:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your fic. to be honest i think its better than the show. altho you do tend to tell more than you show. a writer must show the reader whats happening not tell them about it. keep it up. UPDATE SOONER!!!!!!!!
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Title: AHHHHHHH!!!!
Reviewed By: jetset6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 17:07 EDT
Comment/Review:
I NEED MORE!!!!!!!
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Title: 0.o
Reviewed By: inuyasha_man not loged in On: August 24, 2006 03:03 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pure evil lol(jk)i wonder what happens next, sorry about my reviews being mest up and adding to many.(at least i love reviewing your wonderful story up date soon)
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Reviewed By: Arenja [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 02:33 EDT
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YOU BETTER UPDATE FASTER OR... or... umm... JUST UPDATE PLEASE! Looking foreward t it, your cliffhangers are more evil than mine!
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Reviewed By: dman0100 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 19:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fan fics i've ever had the plesaure to read
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Reviewed By: Zaara the Black [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 19:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is #1 on my top 5 so please update soon. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 13:08 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, still good stuff. I liked this fic at first, and I admit, Zabuza and Haku having an open relationship (as in its public knowledge) in Konoha could result in some HELARIOUS results. Honestly, its cool. Still, I like the latest updates, but a few things. First, Naruto can't survive the way he's going right now. He needs, in this fic at least, if not the manga, who his father is, and why. Even if he doesn't know Sanza is his mom, he still needs to know. THats my opinion at least, and such knowledge, at least indirectly, will give him the knowledge and strength to persevere, and get over such suicidal tendencies. I know that duty and honor help with that sort of thinking help with that sort of thing from my own experience. Anyway, keep writing, this story is GREAT!!!! And I vote for question 3, as its the most technical explanation. Anyway, keep going, the fic is good stuff.
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Title: gomen
Reviewed By: inuyasha_man [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 17:46 EDT
Comment/Review:
um forget the last part of my other review its working for once after al these months.
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Title: inuyasha_man not loged in
Reviewed By: inuyasha_man [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 17:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was prety good. can wait till its up and also today i was pretty lucky i found this on fanfiction(dot)net i didnt know you wrote there to any way i think i like reading your stories better here then there just somthing about here make it feel a little nicer to read any sorry i didnt log in again for some resson when i come to naruto section my account logs off and and i cant log in here with out repeating the loging out loop again?weird.
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