| "The Fox and The Phoenix" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Arenja-too-lazy-to-log-in On: August 03, 2006 23:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing. I really like the drama of it all. I mean; Naruto letting Sakura almost kill him? That is a completly origional idea. Out of 1-10 in originality/creativity I give you a well earned 37. You really know how to bring out the siriousness of the matter.
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Reviewed By: wstphl On: August 01, 2006 19:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story and I can't wait till you update again!! I think your story is funny. I laughed alot!! Thank you!!!!
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Title: nice chap
Reviewed By: inuyasha_man not loged in On: July 26, 2006 23:12 EDT
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man it must of pu alot of work in to this chapter if you were up since 2AM and way this chapter was great and im finally glad that you got to the chuuin exams =) *thinking*iwonder how far in the series will you go*back to talking*update soon inuyasha_man next time ill log in instead of beeing lazy.=)
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Title: nice chap
Reviewed By: inuyasha_man not loged in On: July 26, 2006 23:12 EDT
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man it must of pu alot of work in to this chapter if you were up since 2AM and way this chapter was great and im finally glad that you got to the chuuin exams =) *thinking*iwonder how far in the series will you go*back to talking*update soon inuyasha_man next time ill log in instead of beeing lazy.=)
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Title: nice chap
Reviewed By: inuyasha_man not loged in On: July 26, 2006 23:11 EDT
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man it must of pu alot of work in to this chapter if you were up since 2AM and way this chapter was great and im finally glad that you got to the chuuin exams =) *thinking*iwonder how far in the series will you go*back to talking*update soon inuyasha_man next time ill log in instead of beeing lazy.=)
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Reviewed By: Raman man On: July 26, 2006 16:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY!!!! THE CHUNIN EXAMS!!!! UPDA- * stops and thinks for a while* HOLD ON KAKASHI'S DEAD?!? OH well life goes on. UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Naruto_Lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 19:17 EDT
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Hello you. Its nice to see you again. It's me. The person off of The Original Naruto Fiction Archive website. I still love your story! Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Raman man On: July 23, 2006 20:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!! UPDATE!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!
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Title: man this is great
Reviewed By: inuyasha_man forgot pass ='( On: July 10, 2006 18:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow ive been reading all the chapters for the pass couple of hours now and well your dam great. man this last chapter just had me laughing lol. please update soon. man could you get and better.=)
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Reviewed By: Raman man On: July 07, 2006 20:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update this soon!!! Go all the way to the Chuunin exams!!! This is some great stuff
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Reviewed By: Arenja-too-lazy-to-log-in On: July 07, 2006 13:18 EDT
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"As the insane woman ascends upon Naruto in a bout of good natured tickling, the rest of Team Seven sweatdrop. And this was the woman who was going to get them through a B-rank mission.... A puff indicating sighs came out of the Uchiha's mouth, and the sweatdrop on Haruno's head grew bigger as Naruto came back at Sanziya with 'Ninpou: Fluffy Bunnies!' and the spiky haired Phoenix vessel falls back onto the chakra strings, swirly eyed. Along with one thought for this mission: They were screwed." LOL! LOL! GOTTA love the last part! FLUFFY BUNNIES! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That has GOT to my favorite part! *laugh/cries* fluffy bunnies, whohoohoo... Keep up the good work! I'm looking foreward to the next part!
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Title: nice!!!
Reviewed By: White Alchemist Taya(not logged on) On: July 07, 2006 01:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice!!! who was the girl??? nice stuff!! update soon!~
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Reviewed By: Raman man On: July 06, 2006 15:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really outdone yourself this time! When I was reading I felt the strong killing intent when Naruto thought Sanziya died! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
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Title: I like this so far
Reviewed By: Arenja [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 01:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you used exellent grammer. This was one of the first that I didn't correct in my head! I love the plotline and you used excellent imagination. I like how you seemed to put the sorrow of it into words. I really hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Shadowrai On: July 05, 2006 08:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your idea for Sansiya and Soriyu and Kyuubi being protective of Naruto.Anyway Awesome fic keep updating please
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