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 Reviewed By: Jaisa Rael [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 20, 2008 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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A great story. smiles
 Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 03, 2008 17:03 CDT
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this is a great story so far and i hope you update it soon. i feel sorry for inuyasha being trapped 500 years in the future, will he meet any of his friends or allies that he knew before (kouga, shippo, sess, ginta, hakau, ect)
 Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 16, 2008 04:16 CDT
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Congratulations! Your fic has been featured for the August Fanfic Spotlight on The Deadliest Sin, a new Hiei/Kagome community. Feel free to come by and look around! We're a growing community looking to encourage authors and artists that enjoy the pairing. Good work on creating such a wonderful story. http://thedeadliestsin.proboards55.com/
 Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 03, 2008 09:31 CDT
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Sorry that it's taken me so long to review. I've been caught up in various projects and lost track of time. I have to say that I like how you're not afraid to use violence and tragedy in a story where needed. A lot of people tend to pussyfoot around the fact that when dealing with demons, there's going to be deaths. Most of them aren't going to be pretty either. I think you illustrated that well in Grandfather's death. I'm looking forward to seeing what you have in store for us next.
 Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 17, 2008 23:45 CDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Your story has been nominated in the Best Drama category. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open from March 20th 2008 through April 4th 2008 (at midnight). Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
 Reviewed By: sesshomari [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 19, 2008 07:31 CST
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Nice story! I wonder if they'll actually arrest Yusuke. It would be hilarious, but they seemed to be terrified of Hiei. Hopefully they find a way to get the stupid cops out of the way. Anyways update soon! ~!*sesshomari*!~
 Reviewed By: Blue Wolf Girl [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 06, 2008 19:15 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Aww, come on. What is it with you and cliffies, there driving me crazy. Please update ASAP.
 Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 14, 2007 06:33 CST
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I don't know how I missed this new chapter, but I'm sure glad I found it! Maybe I only had the alert for it up on Fichaven. I'll fix that. ^_^ Anyway, this was a wonderful follow-up to the last one. I liked the way poor old Gramps had be killed. (That doesn't sound right! LOL!) what I mean is, I liked the bit about how the kitsune could keep him alive in the flames, feeding off of his and everyone else's agony and misery. It made sense. I'm glad Botan let him speak to Kagome, and I was surprised by what he said about Hiei. YAY! Hey, as Hiei said, once he picks a side, he sticks with it, -- he chose Kagome, so his love and loyalty will only grow. That's what I like about him, -- he doesn't waver. But, with Kagome's past experiences, it may be difficult for her to believe in that, ne? Have I mentioned how very much I like the idea of them all finding out more about Youko's nature? He's not a sweetie. LOL! Poor, poor Hojo. Even if he wasn't really insane, knowing what he did may make him that way. I liked Inuyasha's insistence on staying with Kagome and her mother. It just makes sense. And I can't wait to see the outcome of this confrontation between the police and Hiei. Your chapters are always worth waiting for. ^_^ And did you say, "lemon?" Yum!
 Title: Chapters 9-15
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 27, 2007 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Awesome chapters. Update again soon. Can't wait to see how they defeat the Mae and how Hiei helps Kagome with the lose of grandfathe. Also what happens with Hojou.
 Reviewed By: todavialoca [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 16, 2007 14:50 CDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Hey this is a good fic, update when you can :]
 Reviewed By: ashtonreed(nsi)  On: March 16, 2007 03:47 CDT
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cant wait to read the next chapter! L O V E IT!
 Title: chapter 14
Reviewed By: Feral_Hiei_Lover [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 01, 2007 17:45 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is such a great story! But I cannot tell you how much i love this story becuz it is beyond any words I could say!
 Reviewed By: Starlet Angel [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 14, 2007 17:46 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Wow! That was intense! Great chapter!
 Reviewed By: MIA_Max [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 14, 2007 16:47 CST
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Wow...Daji is sadistic...your story is quite interesting...so much inspiration is overcoming me...
 Title: Ch. 14
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 13, 2007 21:28 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Loved it, and hope 2 read more soon! Loved how u put so much detail, and the ancient history so well stitched into the story itself! very cool! XD
 Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 13, 2007 18:07 CST
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As always, I am impressed by your attention to detail, and your willingness to delve into history and serve it up to us. (I'm a history professor.) I am wondering if the story the mirror projected was the thing that had upset Kagome. Her grandfather seemed to indicate that the burning of the scrolls had meaning in and of itself. And he asked her if she felt someone watching her read them -- is it an indication that something (or someone) transferred something to her, or perhaps, that something (or someone) was loosed when the scrolls burned? Loved the interaction between Hiei and Inuyasha -- I'm looking forward to them butting heads more in the future. Does Inuyasha realize what Kagome agreed to when she accepted Hiei's courtship? (The "rules?") And, just wondering, but wouldn't it have made more sense for kagome to go over to Shizuru's rather than have ALL of them come to the shrine? (I know: she was shook up. LOL!) This was a great chapter! I can't wait for the next one -- you never disappoint!!
 Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei - too lazy to log in  On: January 13, 2007 17:03 CST
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Very nice chapter. I like your use of detail and the way you incorporate ancient history into the story. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read more. Update soon please.
 Title: MUH
Reviewed By: Angelwings21 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 08, 2007 08:49 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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MUH Hiei teke it easy !!! Poor Kagome ( she has her Hands full with this one ^^ )And Keiko is such a Bitch !!! I mean Yusuke is not perfect but she gets angry for every little thing Yusuke does!!! And poor Inuyasha ( almost everybody from this Fic hates him )Please update ASAP and keep up the good work ^^
 Reviewed By: Elemental_dea (not logged in)  On: January 05, 2007 15:13 CST
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kagome 25? wow, i wasn't expecting the group to be that old, its probably from immature reactions and usual bickering, but who doesn't love that? is kagome ever going to set hiei straight??? awsome story, cant wait to read more ^.^ Please Update Soon!!!
 Reviewed By: babygirl20008 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 05, 2007 02:42 CST
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well done. I can't wait till you update again. keep up the great work.
 Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 04, 2007 14:37 CST
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Awesome job!! What a fabulous chapter! I didn't realize the characters were in their mid-twenties, though. They seem a little immature for that, but I like the idea of kagome having to look for another job because she's too old to be the shrine maiden. (Guess it's a good thing she and Hiei didn't get totgether sooner, or she might not be the shrine MAIDEN for other reasons --LOL!) I am really enjoying Hiei's being so authoritative going by youkai customs in his relationship with her. And it was interesting that Amataseru reassured Kagome that Hiei was the one she was meant to be with. I think that goes a long way towards helping her put up with his "rules." Absolutely died laughing and loved it when Hiei told everyone he would take her and "find an activity to tire her out" so they could all sleep. TOO funny! I'm scared of what's to come, though, since I'm afraid Hiei and Kagome are the target of the first dirty plan. I sure hope it doesn't involve him being with another woman -- that always makes me wince. Perhaps it has something to do with his bloodthirsty personality? I'm looking forward to Kagome's talk with Yukina. Yukina's thoughts were interesting, though they didn't speak of a great love for Kurama -- the idea that she wants her children to have a demon father is very original, I think. I like it. I've gotta feel for poor Kazuma, though -- he's gonna lose his sister and his love to demons. Ouch! The Inuyasha/Keiko/Yusuke thing is going to continue to cause problems, ne? I'd like for Kagome and Inuyasha to have a good talk, too. I wouldn't think she'd just throw him aside in favor of her new friends -- they've been friends for a LONG time now. (10 years!) The hints of yusuke being interested in Kagome continue to throw me -- I can't wait to see what you have in mind there if she's supposed to be with Hiei. (And she is!!) I seem to recall Amaterasu telling Yusuke he'd be surprised where he finds love or it would be in an unexpected place or something like that. (I'm going to go back and read the whole story over now -- yay!) Anyway, it was a real treat to get the alert that a new chapter for this story was up! Thanks! Hope you can update again soon!!
 Reviewed By: summerdancer  On: December 04, 2006 15:13 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful fic. I love the emotion behind the characters its so very accurate. I can't wait for more. Thanks for writing!
 Reviewed By: Starlet Angel [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 04, 2006 00:36 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow! I stumbled upon this fic earlier today and sat down to read it's entirety. I couldn't stop reading! This is one of the most creative fics I've read in awhile. And I love the fact that you actually have a knowledge of not only the background of the characters, but also the culture from which they come. I'm impressed! Keep up the wonderful writing! I look forward to more chapters!
 Reviewed By: Mrs Cake (Not logged in)  On: November 27, 2006 23:14 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
My God your so awesome! I'm still amazed at how awesome you are. Anyways, i keep hoping some romance will come between yusuke and kagome but i keep telling myself, "Oh yeah she's supposed to be with hiei in this one." And then i tell myself, "Man when are hiei and kagome going to have some romance?" Then i remember hiei is... hiei lol. This is a good story, keep it up. Much luck. Mrs Cake~
 Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 26, 2006 20:04 CST
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Yay! Good chapter! Nice hints of mischief to come. Looking forward to MORE!
 Title: Ch. 12
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 26, 2006 00:37 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Sweetness! Lubed it, and can't wait 4 more! :D
 Reviewed By: pink-emo-ranger (NLI)  On: November 26, 2006 00:21 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*Squee!!! Is beyond satisfied no words can form right now.*
 Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 25, 2006 21:29 CST
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Going to review here since I *can't* review anywhere else thanks to the sites being down. I liked this chapter, looks like Yusuke and Keiko have a ton of problems that are finally coming to light. Hiei sounds positively pissy over the whole deal. Can't a poor demon sleep? And Inuyasha... Kags is going to have to kick some peoples asses to get them to shut up about them. Good chapter, update soon please.
 Reviewed By: pink-emo-ranger (not logged in)  On: November 16, 2006 16:52 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hiei can be quite the insufferable one when it comes down to it. I feel bad for Kagome but that's the tough break a girl has to take dealing with hard headed guys. This is as always good. Searching for this baby is like traveling the desert for an oasis. All the horrible xover fic I wadded through *sob* but it was worth to find this baby. At fhaven the next chapter doesn't show up. I couldn't read it over there.
 Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 14, 2006 16:49 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Love it! Great chapter! Please work on the next one first, before the one-shots! Glad Hiei got off the dime and talked to her. Only he could get away with "laying down the ground rules" like that. Yay! Sounds like there are going to be some changes in living arrangements coming up, ne? The female villain is out for revenge on Kurama, (well, YOUKO,) right? Can't wait to see what sneaky, rotten little plots she comes up with. kuronue makes a great catalyst because he can say whatever he wants. Still wondering what's going on with Keiko. Lots of stories still to be told here. I can't wait for more! (And more Hiei/Kag action, of course!)
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