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Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner *OFFLINE* On: November 13, 2006 11:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can you hurry up and update AND do you write/do lemons/limes? If yes, can you write some? Betweeen Kagome and Hiei? What's up with Hojo now? He's going to give up now ... right???
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Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 01:13 CST
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yays!!! you updated.. ooooooooo so Hiei finally asked her out!!! cute!!! cant wait to see whats coming.. but one quick question... is Kieko and Inuyasha going to be together.. it kinda sounds like it.. but i dunno... that would be funny i think.. MUHA ha ha ha .. well TA ta for now .. :D
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 13:37 CST
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Ah Hiei's such an arrogant ass at times it astounds me. He's damned lucky that she was able to feel his emotions and that Kurama was willing to step in to sway her current frame of mind or she might have tried to deck him lol Interesting chapter, can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 20:45 CST
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*eyes glued to teh screen* oooow my eyes, they burn!!! But it's such an awesome story XP UPDATE ASAP PLZ!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Ch. 10
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 20:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it, and hope for more soon! -Mitsuko
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Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 03:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story... really well written and i agree Ryu is one of my fav authors... mmmmm.. so when are you going to get to the real gooooood relationships going... i cant wait!!!! plz update soon... ja ne ~ Mysterious_Tears
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 16:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
top story, really like this alot.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 01:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HMMM INteresting Please update soon
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Title: Ch. 9
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet ch. and i can't wait until the next chapter comes out! - Mitsuko
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Reviewed By: yue no rei On: October 13, 2006 09:22 CDT
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hmmm... so once one thing is cleared and you think its all over another obsticla comes up and harder that before. interesting idea to put itsuki into play.
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Title: Original, Chapters 1-8
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original! I know you're going for the Kagome/Hiei pairing, which btw I like, but it doesn't look like Hiei is the only one who has the hots for Kagome. There's Yusuke and Inuyasha too! Yusuke seems rather lusty towards her while Inuyasha is just odd. I mean, him being dragged through the well pretty much made the choice for him between Kikyou and Kagome since he can't return. He thinks he'll find a way but if a Goddess says there's no way and that the future is now his home, what makes him think that there is? lol. Inuyasha's relationship with Kagome is weird too. Kagome is supposed to have a big crush on Inuyasha and have feelings of love for him but she barely even shows it. Even if she's rejected she still loves him. I know why it's this way though cause she also has the hots for Hiei but the way it's set up it's like Inuyasha is only a passing thought, lol. It's kinda weird how he's involved too, being dragged through and then stuck. You'd think with Kagome's feelings for him that she'd be way more understanding and sympathetic. Inuyasha flirting with Keiko was odd too. Oh well, you get the picture, lol. I wonder about Yusuke too. It almost seems liek he has more of a connection with Kagome at times over Hiei. Then the next second Hiei is treating Kagome like his mate. There certainly is a lot going on and I can't wait to see how it all smoothes out and who actually gets together with who, hehe. ^^ Great chapter length and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: babygirl20008 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 15:49 CDT
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well done. I am glad to see you back. I though you had letf the story. But i am happy to see you haven't. Keep up the great work. Untill next time. see ya
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: Angelwings21 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love it, because I love Hiei/Kagome Pairings ^^ Please update soon ^^
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Reviewed By: yue no rei(ff.net) On: June 24, 2006 06:51 CDT
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ahhh so they are all somehow linked now but how? hmmm a lot of jealousy and stuff here
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Title: chapter 7
Reviewed By: ptbear@cableone.net [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story. Update soon. Can't wait to see how Hiei/Kagome get together, who you have for Yusuke, if Kurama and Yukina get together, and what the new evil is.
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