"Standing In The Shadows" Reviews/Comments [ 86 ] |
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Reviewed By: ladylilly On: June 19, 2006 18:52 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I think this story is very well written. It flows very nicely. I really enjoy it so far. I can't wait till you update. Please keep up the good work and updated soon.
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Reviewed By: ladylilly On: June 19, 2006 18:51 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I think this story is very well written. It flows very nicely. I really enjoy it so far. I can't wait till you update. Please keep up the good work and updated soon.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune no Faia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 03:11 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: All my mind's sayin is WOW!!!!!!!!!! You've got a good story here. I caught my attention right from the start. You don't leave anything out and your story is very detaled. I like that. I dislike all these crapy stories that only half describe what is going on. I admire your work. You've a great talent. I hope you write original works and not only fanfiction. Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens next. Good luck and God bless.
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Reviewed By: kagsinred~not login~ On: June 14, 2006 17:10 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: keep up the good work
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Title: Well.. Reviewed By: Raizen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 23:12 CDT Comment/Review: Well... this is different....heh heh he...Nice work though
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 10:59 CDT Comment/Review: I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 22:02 CDT Comment/Review: schweet =3 I love it still. Plz update asap.
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Title: love it Reviewed By: Artic Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 16:53 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: although you missed a few words in the begining and it was still a little hard to follow but than i think that it became absolutly adicting after i read all of it so far i took about an hour to read it because my mom neded my help on cooking, (yuck, cooking) finally i chooed her out and told her to let me read. please continue i would like to see who gets the jem. i agree with ashtonreed's review and think that kagome would be perfect for the jewel and would make a lot of sence, but hay, its your story, not mine.:) ^.^ cant wait to read more! Sorry that im such a critic but being a writer my self i seem to notice everything my friends get annoyed with it because they can never lie to me or pull any pranks on me i always see everything.Well, hope i didnt bore you with my small explination but i am like that. and if you read my lookup page than you would know that when i write reviews i dont leave any thing out. i loved the story so far though^.^!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 12:46 CDT Comment/Review: I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: Alesyira (nsi) On: June 07, 2006 21:31 CDT Comment/Review: Very entertaining. :) Cliffies rub me the wrong way, but it's worth waiting for in a good story like this. I'm looking forward to the next update!
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Reviewed By: yue no rei On: June 02, 2006 04:50 CDT Comment/Review: whoa.. nice job. interesting plot forming i see... update soon
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Reviewed By: youkos girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 00:49 CDT Comment/Review: very different...BUT i like it!!! plz update soon ok ~_^
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed (nli) On: May 25, 2006 05:51 CDT Comment/Review: NO!! That was a terrible place to stop... *pout* I wanna know who gets the sword & the jewel. Personally, I think Kagome should get the jewel. I dunno, it just seems to work to me. The Shikon no Tama, with its ability to be easily tainted & then having that other jewel would sort of counteract it or something. Kind of like puting it at peace. But thats just me, it your story. LOVE IT ^-^ UPDATE SOON PLEASE
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Title: Yay! Reviewed By: HalfBlackWolfDemon(nli) On: May 24, 2006 17:34 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I can not wait 4 the next chapter to come! It should be very intelectual... *lafs histerically* Gomennasai! I just HAD 2 act civil 4 once in my life! I luved it w/ all my heart and can't wait until u post the next chappy! IT'S SO DANG AWESOME! ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ WHEEEEE!! *does happy dance* U UPDATED! U UPDATED! U UPDATED! U UPDATED! U UPDATED! *giggles* Hope 2 read more soon! ^__________________________________________________________________________ ________________________^That was awesome! Can't wait 4 the next 1 2 b posted!!!!! ^^ ^^ ^^ -Kohara
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Reviewed By: Angeltsuki (not logged on) On: May 24, 2006 16:45 CDT Comment/Review: YAYº\^^/º Plz continue^^
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