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| "Finding Kagome" Reviews/Comments [ 140 ] | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] | Reviewed By: crimsondragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is a great story. It keeps me interestedt the whole story through with the plot turns and the developments of some of the lesser characters. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
| Reviewed By: avidReader On: March 20, 2007 23:40 CDT
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I just wanted to say that I absolutely adore this story. Hope you update soon!
| Title: Chapter 45
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 09:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please forgive me. I'm sorta typing with my eyes closed because of double vision. It took me awhile to figure out how to find things on mm.org, but I found your fic again! I loved this chapter. This sentence was great and made me grin: Evil creatures had infiltrated his skull, and were apparently trapped there, since they were trying to bore out through his eyeballs. Poor Sesshoumaru. It's just awful. If you kill him off, I'll hate you forever. Inuyasha's method of getting Kagome past her fear was awesome. And when he was relieved that he had done 'something right' for Kagome, it was so sweet. Ah, which will win out, his anger or concern for Sesshoumaru? He will definitely be pissed when he finds out about the Sesshoumaru's plans to hand the estate and holdings over to him. ^_^ What a relief that Kagome could help him. I'm trying to figure out what caused it. Great mystery there. I sure hope that Miranda gets away from Kouga. What a bastard. Hm, Hojo is a mystery to me. I need to read the past chapters much better. With my vision problems right now, I did skip some of the kouga parts. Sorry. Plus, it got a bit…erm, violent. I'm such a hypocrite, considering that I have a much more violent fic running around in my head. Awesome chapter. I will cover the others when I can see better. ^_^ Snow
| Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 04:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! If there was a higher rating than 10 I'd give it dammit all! LOL. ^_^ Your greatness has stunned me to silence *bows respectfully* Please update soon! -- Shigure-san
| Reviewed By: Lady Youkai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 18:05 CST
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Hey, I know I'm not one of ur normal reviewers but i am a loyal reader and i just wanted to let you kno that I really enjoy your story. I was afraid that you had abandoned it for a while, since a few of my fav writers have been giving up on their stories. I'm glad you're not. I'm addicted to this story so please keep it up! :D Thanx alot
| Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 16:43 CST
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I have been reading this straight through and am up to Ch 24 right now, but I just wanted to stop and let you know how much I am enjoying this. The humans rediscovering their heritage and pasts, Inu's introduction to the modern world, and Sess's warmness toward his brother have all been a lot of fun. Why did I decide to write now? Caleb. Just cracked me up! Inu's name is is basically Mr Dog Dog. F-in hillarious. Caitriona
| Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 15:21 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Poor Kagome, so much trauma. I can't wait for more, so update soon please!!! ^_^
| Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 21:35 CST
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WOW!!! good chapter can't wait to see a new one!! keep up the good work
| Reviewed By: FarAwayEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 18:58 CST
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Well, I thought I'd leave you a review. I love how your descriptions are getting better and better. They're getting me the detail I need, but not going too much overboard. That's great to see. I love how Selene has had a difficult time fully believing what has been told to her, yet has had some memories herself that she can't deny. It shows a good realism to her situation and her character, because so many other stories that might have a reincarnation of a character tend to have them assume their past life as if nothing happened. Selene hasn't done that here, and that's good. And I love how she is grateful to not be the one talking to Seth. And I love that Michael is there to comfort her, even though he's in the same situation in so many ways. And I love his definition for "fine." That's funny. Awww and the bad guys had to interrupt them. Oh well. And Miranda, I think she's figuring out that Koga isn't the guy she thought he was, but is finding herself rather stuck. I think her character has put herself in quite the predicament. I love the fleeing scene. Inuyasha is so cunning and you've brought that out here. Everyone seems to think he's not all that bright, but he has to be to live as long as he has. It's nice to see that, and for Kagome to realize what he's really up to. The description here is really strong, too! Oh dear. I think Koga's in even more trouble for that set up! I don't think he's going to have a very good Tuesday. This last chapter you have posted was wonderfully done. I love the thoughtful descriptions that have been placed in it, and we can really see/feel what the characters are. Kagura is so beautiful here, and I loved the descriptions of her use of her powers. I also love how Kagome and Inuyasha's arrival came off the page. I am hoping, though, you won't let our dear Demon Lord succumb to his illness!! I want to know what IT is and HOW it'll get fixed, though it seems Kagome and the jewel will have something to do with it. She's already getting a sense that someone is ill, but I'm not sure when we'll find that out. And it seems that Koga alliance has fallen apart. I do look forward to the next chapter, and keep improving that description!
| Reviewed By: Kimura Seiji On: January 03, 2007 14:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Honestly, I'm really interested in the premise and enjoyed watching Inuyasha adapt to modern life. I also especially enjoy his interaction with Sesshoumaru. What's driving me absolutely nuts, though, to the point where it's completely distracting is the copious misuse of Japanese. I was willing to overlook things like Inuyasha's use of "hai" (even though this is just a word that he doesn't touch in the series-- a more appropriate word would be something like "Aa" which is what he does use as it is much more masculine), but as soon as he started using "koi" as an endearment to Kagome I had to quit reading. I'm sorry, I can't handle it anymore. You write well! Your plot is so fun, too. The characterization is also pretty good so I'm particularly bummed that I can't handle reading any more of this because of the one detail but from the standpoint of one who speaks Japanese it's so very distracting. It's like an English speaker trying to immerse himself in a story that uses broken English-- it's too awkward to handle. What I was able to enjoy was wonderful; please keep writing and take care.
| Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I hope Sesshomaru shows Kagome that he means no harm!!! Update soon please because I can't wait for more! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Shadow_Demons_Heart [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 01:42 CST
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Wow. I would like to point out I read this fic for a total of about five hours. It is awesome. I really didn't want to leave when I had too but I finally finished. I haven't read another one like this and I must say it is one of my favorites. The entire plot is entirely believeable and your character development is one of a kind. You stay on track with the story and don't seem to branch off and have many filler chapters, despite the length of the story. I would like to give my thanks to you for sharing this tale with everyone else (Wow, what happened to me! I'm actually sounding like a professional, almost) I can see nothing wrong with the grammar and you don't make most mistakes that beginning writers do, (no offense, I could be considered one) even though it is your first fanfic. You keep everyone in character most of the time and yet for those times you don't, It is understandable with the part in the story. You seem to have taken someone else's characters and added your own personal touch to them. Squeet. Too fancy, no? Must do something random now. Eh? *holds up giant bag of cookies* Update soon and this glorious bag of goodness shall be all yours, if not, they shall remain mine, yes my precious', all mine. *hugs cookies* LoL. Much better. 'Til I reveiw once more, ~Shadow
| Reviewed By: avidReader On: December 19, 2006 01:17 CST
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i absolutely LOVE this story! can't wait for your next update....keep up the incredible work!
| Reviewed By: rach (aka pokiepal) On: November 25, 2006 12:29 CST
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Great new chapter! Thank you so much! ALOT of action! that is one thing I like about your story ~ no boring parts!
| Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 11:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is awesome! It's original, creative, it keeps you on the edge of your seat, I gotta know what happens next! And can someone PLEASE knock Kouga out? He's really starting to annoy me, talk about PSYCHO. Anywho, update soon please!
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