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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Kagome kicked butt! ^_^ I can't wait till Sesshomaru finds out that Inuyasha is human for , atleast, the moment. Update soon please because I can't wait for more!!
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Reviewed By: WanderingAnariel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 11:52 CST
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LOVED IT! Way to go KAGS! Keep up the good work!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Crystal_Gazer95 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 19:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOAH! It's better than I first thought, to be honest I thought it would suck, but HELL WAS I WRONG! I
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Title: SUSPENSE
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 03:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this story months ago but lost track. I'm happy I picked it up again even though I had to re-read a few chapters to remember the story line. Wow, so much going on, these people got drama and you're doing such a good job of weaving us into it. The last chapter had me on the edge like I was watching a movie. Update a.s.a.p please.
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Reviewed By: FarAwayEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 00:39 CDT
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I've been meaning to read this story for quite some time, and I finally did it. You might want to duck and cover, because my readers might be vexed that I didn't spend my time working on MY story. I saw it in the update list and started to read it and then had to continue until there was no more. I really love how you've brought poor Inuyasha into the thrust of the modern world. And Sesshomaru? I'm not sure what to make of sympathetic/compassionate Sesshomaru. He's got it in him, that's for sure, but boy would I LOVE to have the gaps from when he tries to provoke Inuyasha out of the tree to the point we see him FINALLY find Inuyasha back. We've had glimpses into that growth he's had, but damn, I'd love to see just what happened. He's got this tender streak now, especially when it comes to his brother(ie the scene on the plane, the scene when Inuyasha was poisoned and came close to death) that I just have to really wonder WHEN and HOW did he get that in him? The Great Demon Lord shed tears over his brother? Shed tears at ALL? I must admit though, I love the way he gets irritated and flustered. You think he'd remember that Inuyasha's rough and wild so it shouldn't surprise him in the least, yet it seems since he had 500 years between the last time he saw him that he just has to get used to it all over again. I mean, after all, he has to remember that Inuyasha raised HIMSELF, so yeah, he's not going to be refined. Though my jaw did drop the way Old Sesshomaru came back out and sliced that driver's head off. At least he still has it in him! I love that he's taken the surname of Mister Dog. It makes me giggle. I kind of like the name Seth, no matter what others might say. It seems to fit. Sess, Seth, it has a familiar sound to it. Caleb for Inuyasha works, too. The meaning of bold is certainly fitting, indeed. Now for the reincarnations. . .I love Michael. He seems so much like Miroku, yet he has his own quirks and mannerisms that make him in character yet different. It would have been a different story if they had been carbon copies to the letter of their past lives. Kagome is not just like Kikyo in the series, so it would suffice that Miroku and Sango's reincarnates would have slight differences here and there. I like that Michael went into psychology and that Selene's a police detective. It seems to work. I'm wondering just who Kagome's mother might be, is she a reincarnate of some sort, or just filling the role of the old Kagome's grandfather and mother rolled into one? And Shippo? He's gonna fall on his butt when he sees Inuyasha again, or he might just scream at him for pushing him away like that, one or the other. After all, the kit's not a kit anymore. He's a grandpa for cripe's sake! I do hope that, now that the gang is in America, that we get to see a Thanksgiving/Christmas with the entire family, that'd be...interesting. Now for Koga. . .can someone please find some way to tell him he's being Naraku all over again and this time GET THROUGH to him on it? Koga's not a bad guy, at least not really. He's not exactly a good guy, either, but right now he's gone completely psycho. And is he nuts? Sesshomaru, even by being older, and with one arm, can kick his ass any day of the week with his damn eyes closed. Gun or no gun, though that was a nice touch to have him fire that weapon. And Koga's nuts if he thinks he can eliminate Inuyasha. He may be human right now, but we all know that Inuyasha gets his strength from Kagome and she's right there again. He gets foolish enough to attack Kagome, he'll be the new rug on the floor to replace Sesshomaru's fave rug that the puppy piddled on. And I do like the idea of Sesshomaru and Kagura together in this one, though I'm much more of a Sess/Rin fan. It works here,though I do hope he gets Rin's reincarnate back. At least to provide him with his entire family again. And I'm glad Ginta's not totally insane to follow Mister Insane-O Wolf. Go him! I'll be waiting to see what happens next!
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 09:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story - it is something actually original! I truly hope you continue with it - I really enjoy it can can't wait to see how it all plays out. At least the monk finally came around! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: FoXy_hOtTiE [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 16:01 CDT
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Im OMFG-ing right now!!!This story is great!!!I hope you can update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: shippos girl On: October 14, 2006 21:55 CDT
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Love it every chapter is getting better as I read I got one Quistion are you going to have the tina girl be in later chapters? If so that would be awsome.much love keep up the good chapters. bye
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Reviewed By: Simply a Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 22:13 CDT
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Still like...still one of my all time favorites.... :D That and I hope Ginta and Hojo live...Kouga really ahs become Psycho Wolfy
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Reviewed By: xxSilentbeautyxx On: October 12, 2006 12:19 CDT
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amazing..great update! i love this story
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 00:32 CDT
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great chapter keep going!!!!!
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Reviewed By: angelevie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 20:39 CDT
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WOW!!! I loved that you had Ginta still that loyal to Kagome. And the fact that Hojo realized that he had to get the man that was his rival for her to help, that was great! Good work. Can't wait for the next chapter to see what's going to happen!
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Reviewed By: kashudoreineko On: October 11, 2006 18:57 CDT
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So glad to see you update! I really enjoyed this chapter very much. I'm glad you're not making Hobo evil - just an idiot. That's totally in character with the Hojo of the past. Cheers and here's to the next chapter! I'm looking forward to it.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I can't wait to see what happens next!!! Update soon.
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Reviewed By: shippos girl On: September 27, 2006 22:00 CDT
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This story keeps getting better ever time I get the time to read it keep up the really good wrighting please please keep updating this is the best story Iv read in such along time thanx bye.
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