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Title: presto
Reviewed By: musicmuse18 On: June 02, 2006 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is keeping me on the edge! Great work and I can't wait until you update!
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Title: this is not a rag so please read it!
Reviewed By: Lady Orange [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my current favorite in the entire fanfic world! The plot (wow you actually have a plot unlike most fanfic authors/ authoresses)is detailed and complex but still understandable. And there are just the right amount of funny parts and witty exchanges. I do have some questions. Well one question really. I want to know that if InuYasha stayed in the past after Kagome died for 500 years, how is it possible that (according to the Time Loop theory) he did not exist twice in the same time. Your story notes that after some time in the Goshinboku, he left. But woudn't his existance be negated every time he went into the future to get Kagome? Because if he went back to the past after burying Kagome, he must have lived through th Fuedal Era in Edo all the way up to 1997 when Kagome first fell into the well. When he first comes to get her when Yura attacks he would already exist in the future. I am also interested in the fact that it must be around the year 2045 for this story to be possible. Also, if it was 40 years ago that Kagome died (as it says in your esteemed writings pronounce) that makes it only about 85 years since she met InuYasha. And the second Kagome is not old enough for her predecessor to be merely her great aunt. But I am extemely worshipful of your ability to make such a riviting and plausible story and weave all the plot lines together in a seamless cloth. The fact that you update efficiantly and consistantly is a raw miracle in the world of mediaminer fanfiction. I really wish that I could use all of the optional space to review in, but I fear I have bombarded this space with my words to long. If you do not understand my lengthy ramblings, feel free not to answer my questions at all. I have never written a review longer that a few hundred characters before but I am surprised I had the patience to carry this out. *whew* Thank you so much for writing this,..........-Lady Orange
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Reviewed By: anth On: May 31, 2006 20:06 CDT
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YEAH!!!! that got my soul at ease finaly seein hojo trying to grope kagome .......... egh the very thought of that lol oh well good job i expect to read more. ps. i was wondering why sess isnt lookin for rin?
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Reviewed By: Dragodden On: May 31, 2006 19:50 CDT
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It just gets better and better! ^_____^ And thanks for the response to my question; much amusement in seeing it included in this chapter, and all. (I've had the question for a bit, but I'm a quiet fan.. ;)
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Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 18:18 CDT
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I forgot to put this in my last review- I had the impression that once you have "mated" with a demon, you gain some of their characteristics. I've heard alot of stuff about marking, but never in the actual series... Oh well, maybe I just haven't watched enough of the actual anime. *sigh* I'm really bad about that. And I was also wondering about the remembering stuff. Is that like their past lives invading their bodies or something? (Like when Michael and Sally are talking as if they are MIroku and Sango) I'm just curious cause some of that stuff was confusing to me. '^_^
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Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 18:10 CDT
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Yipee!!! You updated! *Does the Macarena* LOL. Anyways, really good!! Update soon! :D
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: May 31, 2006 12:10 CDT
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*singsongs* Inu is in trouble! ^.^!
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 10:12 CDT
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He is back, and acting all Yashy-like! Yay, I want Kags to realize who he is now...*sniffle* Please?
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Reviewed By: Dragodden On: May 31, 2006 00:24 CDT
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Ooo.. I am following this way too obsessively. The few days it takes you to update feel like weeks~! >.< I just have to say: Your story is amazingly written, fascinating, and fun! I do have a question. Why is it that Kagome of the past saw no changes when becoming Inuyasha's mate (like Miranda is after mating with Kouga)? I mean, Miranda is developing youkai traits, and I'm just assuming here, that includes a longer life span? I just wonder why Kagome of the past did not age more slowly after being mated to Inuyasha? --- and thus died, developing the entire premise of this story. Life span issues always pull at my heart-stings! ;__;
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Reviewed By: FluffyKirara in like never logged on huh? On: May 30, 2006 20:46 CDT
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^^ wow great update! cant wait to find out what happens next. i saw the email saying u updated and it just made my day^^ after it totally sucked... a guy i like as only a friend was eyeing me / and there is not much there to see so i donno y he was.../ and it kinda creeped me out and then i came home and saw u updated^^ /i havent cheacked my email in a while.../ and then i had a big yummy piece of prime rib (sp?) ^^ it was soo yummY!! and plus ur story.. it just made my day^^
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Reviewed By: shippos girl On: May 29, 2006 17:02 CDT
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I love it you gotta wright more more more I say. Any way I really love this story your a good wrighter.
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Title: sshyfrk
Reviewed By: inuhakmoon2673 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this is soo cool its very different i love it.
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Reviewed By: anth On: May 26, 2006 17:59 CDT
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DUDE this is an awsome fic im enjoying reading it very much, write more. P.S. plzzzz get houjo off kogame and to somthing else
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Title: adamile
Reviewed By: dewrose [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you for them both Finally getting together. I have two questions: 1. what does kagome look like and 2. why did kagome die of old age. I thought once you became mates, you lived a longer life span the same lifespan as the hanyou. Please explain it. thanks J
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: May 24, 2006 16:35 CDT
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I encourage sadism as far as Hojo is concerned. I don't know why I never really liked him XD. I dislike him more than Naraku! Lol
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