| "Two Worlds One Love" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: TrinityK (nsi-sorry, too lazy!! lol) On: July 15, 2006 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey girl!!! Sorry, i took so long to read your chapie. But I must say, it was really hot. I could see the passion between the two. It was a very good chappie. And what an end! LoL. I can't wait for the next chappie. I can't belive your story's coming to a close end... I think I'm only half way for my story, lol. ;-)
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Reviewed By: aznboi408 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 14:26 CDT
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That was some intense love making LOL Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: underwater963 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon! Thanks.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: ilovefairytalechic On: July 10, 2006 11:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow great update, that was a whole lot of lemons. i hate to hear your finishing in 3 more chapps. i really enjoyed this chap very wow and speechless.
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 (not logged in) On: July 10, 2006 09:13 CDT
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great update!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow girl, you truely are a romantic. I love it!! LoL. That was one hot, and sweet lemon. This chapter was just so cute and sweet, I could actually see Kagome sitting in a field making flower crowns with the sun and the wind. It was great. Loved the fab update!!! ;-)
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Title: hmm
Reviewed By: ilovefairytalechic On: June 26, 2006 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. . . familiar. . . great. . . can't put my finger on how familiar this is. I can not wait to see whats going to be on the next chapter. Where??
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Reviewed By: Rinlover(offline) On: June 26, 2006 12:00 CDT
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That was soo sweet. THat was sweet, tender sex. I myself prefere in the moment, rough sweaty sex, but hell, this was great too. Keep up the good work, and I would love to see something extreemy unexpected for next chappy ^^
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Title: Yummy!
Reviewed By: inugirl2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 09:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very passionate, thanks for the update :). I really wanted that scene that Inuyasha apologizes to Kagome and I loved how she handled the response. I'm glad you had him speak to her instead of just physically showing her he loved her. I needed that closure haha. She needed to see there was more to him feelings that just passion, but true love even though it came off as violent at the time. We all know Inuyasha's "rape" was truely his unbridled intense feelings for her coming out all at once while he was driven insane with jealousy. Thanks for that. I appreciate you staying up to write more, I know it's a lot of work. Can't wait for more though, sorry I'm greedy :).
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Title: sorry i havnt reviewed for a while..
Reviewed By: babydragon213 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ive had tons of stuff to do ..essays, final,,u name it..but neways i also moved and the library is more far away now..but its all good..i just love ur latest chap...so KAWII!!!! im glad that u have put up alot of creativity in ur story...most dont have that..but thats why ur on my fav list...cuz of creativity.. neways after im done and all(around june 22) i will start putting up my first fanfic and everything...plz be one of my readers...it would mean alot to me hehehe. thankx great chapi!!! lub yas tons....keep up the awsome work..
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Reviewed By: InuyashaAnime4ever_Brittany On: June 08, 2006 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COOL!!!!!!!!!!! I love your story I found your story in one day and I read it all in like 3-4 hours I think it is So Cool cant what for the next chapter hope you keep writting =)
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Title: WHEW
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally, I got the lemon I was waiting for even though it wasn't really romantic ( I'm sure you'll make up for that later hmmm?) but I'm glad they did the do. Keep the updates coming. Thanks for having Katana come around, I was hoping she wouldn't be a bitch.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: : ilovefairytalechic On: June 03, 2006 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. . . speechless. . .WOW. great update very great did not expect that. you my be the best at what you do. you really did work hard on this one. i can not wait to read the next chapter. WOW again (appluase)
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there girlie!!! I finally got a chance to read your update, so here I am. I must say, wow, that was one really good chap. I'm glad they finally got together, but sad it ended the way it did. Your really good at writing angst. LoL. Anyhoo, awesome chappie, and I'll ttyl, kay? Bye!!! ;-)
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: savii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 03:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW i must say i really enjoy your story.. its had me at the end of my chair wanting to know whats going to happen next! i just started reading it today and i am amazed !!! really good job i love it !!!!!! update soon
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