| "Two Worlds One Love" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Title: BIG WHINER!!!
Reviewed By: babydragon213 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when are u gonna put the next chap? when are u gonna put the next chap ? when are u gonna put the next chap? ur too good at writing this is such a totally cool awsome story (hippi voice: far out dude) i start creating a moajor mess in my room ( must read next chap .. must read next chap... *drool starts falling from the mouth and forms a large puddle on the floor*... my precious) hehehe i love ur work its super awsome **** starts melting into a puddle of moosh...so awsome!!!
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Reviewed By: elemental66 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 12:38 CDT
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hay that was greate i really hope u update soon.
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 05:33 CDT
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ah so good, go inuyasha! yay!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 02:17 CDT
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Hey hey!!! I just emailed you so I decided to leave a review now. LoL. Let me just say, love the direction. That cliffhanger was to die for. Great story!!! I can't wait for more. ;-) And if you haven't already read that last email I sent, it's up. Tell all your friends. LoL. :-) -K
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Reviewed By: chanda (nsi) On: April 15, 2006 23:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dont think it matters with the mushy stuff. I think its hot the way it is, your angst is wonderful. Keep up the wonderful writing. Chanda
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Reviewed By: Rinlover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 18:50 CDT
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I know you just posted this last chapter....like today...or yesterday (Im on spring break, so I forgot the date ^^;;) BUT PLEAAAASE UPDATE SOOON! That was just cruel, to leave us with that PAINFUL cliffhanger! It makes me want to cry......alot....*sob* SHIT! LOOK WHAT YOU MADE ME DO! *runs away crying* Nah Just kidding, but please find it in your heart to update soon! ^_^
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Title: THE BOMB!!!
Reviewed By: babydragon213 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a super good chap its a good thing that u put kouga in it cuz it makes inu really jelous and when he's jelous he wants kag more... its super cool and suspensful cuz u never no wuts gonna happen next!!! heheh i love this chap and i love the pace of how inu and kag are going...cuz if it were fast it wouldn't be suspenseful and its super cute how they are so reluctant to tell their true feelings to each other.. keep up the super duper job its awsome and its suspensful... i cannot wait for ur next chap eeeeee im in suspense now sorry !!! its a really good story u got talent!!!
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Reviewed By: voicebox On: April 15, 2006 00:35 CDT
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Honestly it's like babysitting 2 year olds, and even that is less stressing!All we need now is for Akitoki Hojo to appear and try to win Kagome over.
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Reviewed By: Inu_Does_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 17:26 CDT
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wow, what a place to leave a chap. your killing me girl, lol! happy to hear that you liked my review and it brought you some confidence. im a very honest person and if i didn't like a story i tell them that, so believe me when i say this is hell of a good story! (::smirk::) wasn't expecting Koga to show in this chap and it surprised me a little though it was a nice touch. infurirating poor Yashia. he'll have a long word with Kagome now won't he? heh heh. maybe next update you can tell us what the mark Inu left on Kag. i haven't seen that type of mark done, its usually the neck or somethin. does it mean InuYasha is courting her? whatever it is i like the new idea of having a bite mark there. im sad that you didn't have the chapter a little longer but that just means the next chap will be worth the wait..............right??? LOL! how frusterating the wait of Inu and Kags love, but it will be so exciting when it happens. the best pleasures come with time. (::sigh::) thanks for the compliment on my name, i like it too! im hentai and proud of it!!!!!! oh yeah! (::smile::) i wait for the next chap with great anticipation! your doing a wonderful job, keep it up. you should be very proud! ^_^ peace out!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEy hey, guess who? LOL. Jus kidding. But wow, this latest was great. Don't worry, I understand why you can't just have them revealing anything yet. It's all about building up the tension to a great pique, then letting the ball drop. LoL. Anyways, just dropping by to leave a review and to say what a great story, and review. TTYL. Until next time!!! ;-) -K
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Reviewed By: Inu_Does_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 22:57 CDT
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ive read some fics that have 'InuYasha and Kagome seperating a couple of years before meeting and never wanting to leave eachother' that type of story. but let me say that this is the best out of all the ones ive seen. it kept me interested throughout every chap, not like the other ones that didn't capture me and kind of had me bored. so BIG congrats, this saga is a great peice of work. im a killer for Yashie and Kag but i don't like it when its to predictable or the whole relationship is rushed. ive found out that even if you have some people get in the way of a relationship or things start to pile that gets a reader hooked, even if they don't like it. they come back because they want to know what happens, its addicting. want over powers hate in writing. and this is what i like about your saga. it has that potential. it could have more of a plot but i really wouldn't change a thing about this story at all. you got enough drama as it is. expesially where you left it off with Kag decideding to leave without Yasha. i almost thought you would have him tell her he wanted her as well. im SO glad you didn't. it could be a heart breaker to write about something you loath like having your fav couple having cheated or liking someone else cause they don't think you feel the same BUT it really makes it worth it in the end. think about this if you do another story. i have to work on this for my stories as well. i just a while back really got that plot building thing from when i was reading one of my friends, InuGrrrl's, sagas and thats when it occured to me. she puts that in every one of her saga's and though you loath it..............you crave it!!!!! im trying to study her techneque and hope one day my own writing will be at least half as good as hers or the other talented writers out there. i really do fan fiction for the love of InuYasha and writing plus to improve it too! and i can see you have that starting to go for you. anyways.......please email me when the next chap is up because i'd like to see how you plan to do the next chap and in later chaps, how you finnish this up. ^_^ my email is (lady_lexa@hotmail.com) if you could give me a hollar i'd be grateful, thanks!
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Reviewed By: voicebox On: April 09, 2006 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The have aged but they are still so immature when it comes to talking about how they feel about each other, honestly I almost wish you would hand them a book called, how to reveal your feeling for dummies!!
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Reviewed By: kt On: April 09, 2006 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aw come on, can you make inu tell kagome already? wah! i love this fic! i'll check up on it in a week and you BETTER HAVE UPDATED! lol ^__^ peace
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Reviewed By: elemental66 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 16:50 CDT
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i loved it! i hope u update fast i really want 2 find out what happens next
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Title: kalabunga dude!!
Reviewed By: babydragon213 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fanfic is super awsome!!! i mean it i was gripping the edge of my chair and i was holding my breath as i read ur latest chapter!!! its so totally kool can u plz plz plz hurry with the next one its a total suspense and i cant sleep without thinking of the next chapter i cant believe it im lin love with ur story... and the chap where inuyasha was watching kagome bathe ( i was actually blushing) hehehe and the part where kag let her feelings be known to inu under the stars (i was crying) this is the cutest and super kool story ever ...i will keep in touch on your story to see if u have put the next chapter !!! i love it and i can hardly wait .. ur talented and got a good imagination!! from babydragon213
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