| "Two Worlds One Love" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Title: inugirl2003
Reviewed By: inugirl2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ya know, I wanted to say how much I really enjoy your writing. You are one of my very favorite authors, I just wanted you to know that up front. Reading this story through, I was a little confused. It went from typical Inu and Kagsome not being able to admit feelings, to down right hot and nasty sexy. Not that that's a bad thing haha. We had several chapters of back and forth they can't get it together, then you threw in Inu and his little head game, (which I thoroughly loved btw), then he just got mad and did the deed. I guess the confusion was how fast he changed from he "wasn't the marrying type" to you're mine forever. I guess you're saying he just wasn't admiting it to himself then he decided he did want to be the marrying type? Just never really saw that mind turnaround. He never did tell her he wanted her to stay, she doesn't question why he's not so insistant that she leave anymore or curious why he's making passes at her when he doesn't love her (in her own mind). Anyway, just saying I was confused at the sudden change of direction in both characters, the transitions, I hope I'm making myself clear because I'm not much of a writer haha. BUT I gotta say I do love the directions you've taken them in! I loved that he was playing with Kagome, and making her jealous, and wanting. I loved where he got so jealous he couldn't take it anymore. I thought that scene was totally believeable. You definately have cliffies where I say, "Oh man it's over again?" and I can't wait for the next installment. I really love your writing style, use of words and the way you paint a picture of what's happening so that I forget I'm reading and just get involved in the story so much. It's like a good book you don't want to put down. Thanks so much for you're tireless effort. I for one am one reader that can't wait to see more from you, so again, thanks so much for the wonderful pleasure of reading your story. Wish we had more stories from you of course...I'm a greedy reader :)
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Title: shikon shard protector
Reviewed By: Master Inuyasha On: June 01, 2006 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg..this last chapter...it's very very detailed and i love it!!!..god, the love scene was amazing!!..please do more..*blushes*
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great update!
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: June 01, 2006 15:32 CDT
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Woah, now that was intense. I didn't expect that to happen. Knowing Inuyasha he is going to try to get her to leave instead of talking hto her about what happened. And as usual Kagome misunderstood his feelings. Oh boy I guess the drama is going to come.
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Reviewed By: Rinlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 14:57 CDT
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O_O...He raped her....Holy shit....He fucking raped her...That was really well written! I really liked it! I want an update ASAP or you shall die a very slow and painful death. Hell yeah....That was an awesome chapter! lol
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune (too lazy to sign into her account) On: June 01, 2006 10:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ah no! Inuyasha go back! Go back!
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Title: shikon shard protector
Reviewed By: Master Inuyasha=^_^= On: May 29, 2006 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg...this was a rollercoaster fanfic..lol....i was upset that you teased me, but it's all good. you are a very good author..please continue this
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool story.
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Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 03:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dammit, i got so into your fic and then boom I'm stuck waiting until you update again. You always know you're a good writer when you have people complaining that you need to update soon. I didn't notice any big grammatical errors, which is good. I don't always catch the small ones just reading, but good job anyway lol and if I'm sounding weird it's because it's 4:30 am where I am right now.
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Reviewed By: ilovefairytalechic On: May 23, 2006 10:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update, new found love, insight, and emotion all the great things that make a story amazing. Keep up the great artwork and hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 03:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey girl!!! Great chappie. You are updating left and right. Starting tomorrow, I'll get back to writing. It's summer!!!! I can't believe Katana found a man to love, I really never expected that. Not much fluff, but I loved Kags insights. Awesome update. ;-)
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Title: guaw!!! eee.. 0000oo.
Reviewed By: babydragon213 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn. i dunno wut to say. this is gotta be the best fanfic i ever read. its just so suspensful. its awsome. i know my title was weird, but then again how do u put this into words (suspensful: hands in hair. leaning at the very edge of my seat. and then all of a sudden fall of feeling embarassed and well..hehe embarassed) this is too good. i swear it. honest . ur so talented. i was expecting them to go to lemon mode. but once again the sweetness of waiting on their lemon mode is totally awsome. it makes it mind gripping cause u want it to happen, but if it did it wouldnt be such a good fanfic.heheh. which it is of course 100% i hope u win some award or something. u make it super intruiging. hope ur all right i read the last part in ur story in ur new latest chap. ill be praying for whatever difficulties ur going through. and i hope ur in good health and all ur family+ friends as well. p.s hope u update soon!!! this is way tooooo good!!. im in suspense. ur so awsome.heheh :) ice cream!!!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww girl, you don't have to thank me. LoL. This was a really good update. Darn that Shippo for interrupting though. LoL, just kidding. That was some hot citrus I tell ya. Or should I say sour? LOL. Kidding again. Anyway, this was great chappie. Let me guess which review is his. Hmmm... LOL. ;-)
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Reviewed By: Rinlover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 15:25 CDT
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O_O I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU! YOU'RE SO MEAN! How could you leave it like that?!?!?!? UPDATE NOW!
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Title: two world one love
Reviewed By: ilovefairytalechic On: May 15, 2006 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazing, wounderfully written. The charaters are very progessive. the erotic sceens were written in great taste with sensuaous clarity.
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