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| "Kindred" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 › » ] | Title: ^.^
Reviewed By: The AWESOME one On: December 31, 2012 05:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I fucking love you man! Okay so I just enjoy your writing tremendously, and I always come back to it, both for naruto and gundam wing. Freeport is the best 2x5 ever written, and one of, if not the best fanfics for GW ever written. Diplomatic relations and Kindred hold that spot for me for Gaara and Lee. You are awesome. I should know, I'm the Awesome one. | Title: Sarah
Reviewed By: MontonousRainbow On: June 17, 2010 03:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the fifth time that I've read this (these, DR included) story in some years. I always fall in love with the series whenever I read it. It's always the first series on my mind when I think of Naruro fanfic, and almost always the first one on my mind when I think of fanfic period. It's also the best fanfic that I've ever read, which is impressive considering the amount of fanfic reading that I do. :P Every time that I read this series, it's still entertaining and thought-provoking and amazing. I absolutely love the characterization, the plot, the flow, the descriptions, the word-choice, the writing-style, and how deeply you can get into a character's head. It blows me away, and always makes me want to reread the stories again and again. I'm amazed at your ability to weave strands of comedy within a dark fic. If this didn't have those, I'd probably just be really depressed after reading. And while it's good to leave the reader with an emotion, I don't typically want to read the stories that make me sad. When I finish this series, I feel impressed. Amazed. Thoughtful. I feel happy and sad and glad to have been able to read something that is so good. I'll admit: I wasn't the biggest fan of this pairing when I first read this series. It was the second or third story that I had read about the pairing, and I was still making up my mind on whether or not the two were compatible. Ever since DR, I'm madly in love with the pairing. I can't image either character with anyone else. I think that this time reading the series may finally get me to read your KakashiGai fics. I have hated Gai for as long as I can remember, but you're a damn good author. We'll see if you can make me like him. :P
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2009 12:12 EST
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Heh, I finally reread Kindred and the original story, and its given me a few character design ideas, for which I am thankful. Still, as always these two stories are interesting, different and fun reads, and very worth the time to consume. So, continue to write, and perhaps upload any new stories sometime, will ya? These ones were fun to read, and have some real depth to em. Continue to update, neh? Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: Calcifer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2009 23:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've done brilliantly with this fic. Not necessarily my favourite pairing, but extremely well written. I really enjoyed reading this. Keep up the good work! ~Angel
| Reviewed By: Calcifer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2009 01:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story. Gaara's perspective is an interesting one to look at. Keep up the good work! ~Angel
| Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X On: June 23, 2009 23:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww. that was so cute. and i think you did a really good job with the point of view... all of them. I hope to read more of your work soon. Keep writing and keep up the good work. (though my hubby gets mad that i'm to involved in your stories when i read them.lol.)... ^_~
| Reviewed By: Inarae On: April 03, 2008 22:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You rock. I loved diplomatic relations, and I love Kindred. This is one of my all time favorite fanfic universes. I can't wait to see where you take it next. There aren't that many fanfic authors who can write good OCs, but those two kids are just adorable. Heck, I'd read a story about them alone. Thanks for writing & sharing.
| Reviewed By: graypheonix85 On: March 14, 2008 17:12 EDT
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Lol, love this story, and the previous one, with Lee as the envoy to Suna, and all. These stories are great (and the pairing is uncommon, but pretty cool in my opinion). Neh. ANyway, are you still writing? YOu haven't posted anything on Mediaminer in some time, and I'd like to read more of your stuff. Seriously. Anyway, update, writing, post, whatever, something soon, will ya? Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: laZzzybug On: December 14, 2007 14:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
of the note you wrote at the end of Kindred chap3:well said. Other than that I thouroughly enjoy your Gaara Lee fics. This is my first venture in naruto Fandom and you've gotten me hooked.
| Reviewed By: Shishikijo On: November 28, 2007 00:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read DR before when Kindred was not yet finished and when(after re-reading the Wonderful DR)I saw that Kindred was ready for the reading I was Beyond Happy. I only just this past re-reading made the conection between you and gw-you
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 13:58 EDT
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MWAHAHAHA! Oh man, this story is fricking hilarious! I'd never expect a situation like this to come up (and frankly, I'm impressed by your writing of Gaara, it's detailed and shows a lot of his world) and it's done very realistically. This story isn't just a sequel to the previous Gaara/Lee story, it's a true viewpoint on things. Plus I love the conclusion, it has that weirdly good father thing that Gaara is, and yet takes nothing away from how dangerous he is either. And I do think Gaara does make to be a very good quietly strong father figure, you portrayed that very well. Please continue to write, and maybe go into the relationship between Naruto and Sasuke a bit too, in a sequel to this. Or finally get into that final battle with Sound scenario you were talking about before. Neh, your writing rocks, so continue to write. Later
| Reviewed By: GaaLee oh yeah On: June 16, 2007 21:27 EDT
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Did you get the name Chiro from Chihiro, the Japenese name meaning a thousand questions? If you did that's cool
| Reviewed By: _ On: October 03, 2006 01:10 EDT
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"Aki wouldn't chew on a cactus, would he?" "Not more than once," Gaara said without glancing up from his map. That made me laugh so hard I nearly wet myself, and made my cat take off running to hide under the bed until the strange, loud noises stopped.
| Reviewed By: Kagedtiger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 13:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. An excellent ending to an excellent fic! ^_^ This has been an amazing read, and I'm sure I'll be reading through it again and again, enjoying it just as much each time. Thank you for a job very well done. (Also: I've been vaguely considering writing a side-story to this, just a drabble, that takes place with Chiro in the future. If I decide to do so, would that be alright with you? I would of course credit you as the creator of the character and link this fic.) kaged_tiger@hotmail.com
| Reviewed By: tres_quatorze to lazy to login On: August 29, 2006 20:52 EDT
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Frickin' hell you made me gag on my own laughter in the computer lab....I think some of the people there must have thought I was crazy >_> This is the most hilarious chapter in the whole fic, nice way to conclude though ^_^ Anyhow, kindred as a whole was the sequel I was waiting for after Diplomatic relations, and I'm glad you got to finish it!
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