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Reviewed By: Efimera On: August 29, 2006 14:52 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've just finished reading both fanfics, never in all my life I would guessed that I would enjoy a Gaara/Lee fic, the match is too weird to even contemplate, in fact that was the reason I read it in the first place, and well it was great, the character development of Lee and Gaara was well done and credible, I'll be checking for more of your fics in the future, bye
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Reviewed By: Sozoku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 01:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...You are the best writer I have ever seen. I read a lot of stories and I can tell you that this is one of the top ten including most of your stories too. As I said before I just love this fic. I like how Chiro developed into a strong character, who don't seem like an OC at all. He just somehow fits into the story without Lee and Gaara getting out of character....AND I don't know what else to say sooo I'm going to end it here. So all I have to say is nice story and I hope you'll be reading anyone soon.
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Title: Yay!!
Reviewed By: LuvaBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 23:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay I luv you work! And this story was great to say the least. I love how you can make a new character and tell the story for their POV and tell readers about how their minds work and why they feel the way they do about the situation. It really is a breath of fresh air when one of your OC's come into the story. I guess that's what makes you such a good author....Something I wish to be one day. But for now I can read a great story! Can't wait for the next one. Ja and lots of love from your fan!
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Reviewed By: EllyYuki On: August 28, 2006 15:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww... I can't believe it's done already. ...Wait... Didn't you say there was going to be an epiloge next too? >_>
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Reviewed By: silentnight On: August 14, 2006 20:15 EDT
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i really enjoy your fics. i skipped your dr story at first because i couldn't wrap my heads around the unconventional pairing. but your gw fics were so amazing that i gave it a chance and was blown away. i hope you write more gaara/lee fics and that you continue to erite in general.
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Reviewed By: Jensa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 22:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eeep, it's going to be ending so soon? I've loved reading this, and it makes me kind of sad that it's going to be ending. I can't wait for the side-story and epilogue! :3
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Title: Encouragement
Reviewed By: RazZadig [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 00:46 EDT
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Okay, I was holding back on my review for "Kindred" since adding kids seemed too much like "domesticating" the characters. I've been burned by too many GW and X-Files stories that suddenly had the chars figuring out porch paint colors with their non-homophobic Mary Sue neighbors. Just wanted to make sure that Gaara's voice would be as clear as Lee's was in "Domestic Relations". Especially in the last few chapters, it has been. I still can't get the picture of Gaara picking up Chiro while walking through the village out of my head. Mind-killing. :-) And Gaara's breakdown while Chiro was having nightmares. Poor Lee. I'm glad Gaara gave him a nice rubdown after that. *grin* Here's for hoping you are just on summer vacation and nothing horrible has happened to you (like disinterest with slashfic). I've been a faithful reader since discovering your marvelous GW fics and have gotten _very_ spoiled seeing a new story part every week. It's so hard to find a great author--much less one that is regular about updating. Very interested to see where the story goes from here. I have 2900 letters I could still fill, but don't want to sway your attention from writing. :-)
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Title: Yo!
Reviewed By: LuvaBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 03:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello. I really love and adore your stories. They bring such joy to my heart when I read them and makes me want to aspire to be a better authoress. I love this story and I hope for a new chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: Goddess of Night(not logged in) On: July 13, 2006 22:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, I love this! The idea is so original, I feel in love with it! I just hope you upate it soon, I'm getting impatient!
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Title: Ah...
Reviewed By: nissa On: July 10, 2006 10:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not very coherent at the moment, but I've to tell you that this must be one of the best stories I have ever read. I read "Diplomatic Relations" and at first I thought I wouldn't enjoy this one as much as I did that story, but I was totally wrong. This story, its entirely new situations, is complety and utterly riveting! I think that your characterizations are totally spot-on. How you write Gaara, especially when concerning Chiro, is still very Gaara and yet you can see how he's changing and reacting. Looking forward to your updates! I can't wait to see how events unfold, especially as you mentioned something about a storm...
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Reviewed By: Jensa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 15:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I recently had someone reccommend your fics to me, and I haven't regretted reading them yet. I really enjoy the way you write the contrast between sex during Lee's POV and Gaara's; IMO you got them pretty dead-on. The only error that really stood out to me (that I remember at the moment, anyway) was "Shinobi raised wolves, not lambs, and a certain amount of rough play and testing was always going on at all age." Other than that, I love the story thus far, and I'm delighted to find one that's updated more than once every 3 months.
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Reviewed By: zel n On: May 29, 2006 08:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic seems to be going realy good i very much like Gaara and Chiro interacting.
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Reviewed By: Isollae On: May 20, 2006 15:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing story! I've always liked Rock Lee and Gaara, but you've really gotten me into them as a couple. In fact, now they're the only pairing from Naruto that I read stories of. I also read your other story, Diplomatic Relations, and that was fantastic as well. Your fanfics have become some of my favorite Naruto ones, as well as just favorite fanfics in general and you have become one of my favorite writers.
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Reviewed By: zork On: May 15, 2006 12:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fics are always vary well written and I think this will be interesting to see where it goes .
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Reviewed By: Mainframe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 16:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is BRILLIANT!!! I was hoping that there would be more of the Gaara/Lee stories. I read them today and have just gone nuts for them. ^_^ Bloody Hell! They have to take care of kids? This is gonna be fun. Gaara may find that mental instability rushing back before much longer, and they can kiss goodbye to their sex life...and sleep...and ever walking outside their front door without puke/ food stained clothing again. I generally run a mile from OC fic's but seen as it's one of yours I figured I'd take a look. Glad I did. The boys are very well written and a frazzled Lee is always bonus. (3 Is something, other than delayed shock, wrong with Chiro? I reckon he may relate more to Gaara than to Lee if I'm reading the little one right. ^^; The whole idea of what's happened in the Rock clan is shocking, exciting, and very believable. I loved the insight into poor Lee's childhood and the permanent scares that make him try so hard. Very real. And the theory of his cousin's jealousy, that the runt of the family out shone the star in the end, is very very cool! It sounds like his cousin has been cultivating himself one hell of a fixation and grudge for quite a few years now (if the theory is correct). I can hardly wait to see where this is going and I love the pace you've set. It's great to read your fast paced fic's but also refreshing to have the time to soak up day-to-day life of Gaara & Lee. What can I say, it's another winner in my book. ^__^ Jen x
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