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Reviewed By: Goddess of Night(not logged in) On: July 13, 2006 22:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, I love this! The idea is so original, I feel in love with it! I just hope you upate it soon, I'm getting impatient!
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Reviewed By: nissa On: July 10, 2006 10:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not very coherent at the moment, but I've to tell you that this must be one of the best stories I have ever read. I read "Diplomatic Relations" and at first I thought I wouldn't enjoy this one as much as I did that story, but I was totally wrong. This story, its entirely new situations, is complety and utterly riveting! I think that your characterizations are totally spot-on. How you write Gaara, especially when concerning Chiro, is still very Gaara and yet you can see how he's changing and reacting. Looking forward to your updates! I can't wait to see how events unfold, especially as you mentioned something about a storm...
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Reviewed By: Jensa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 15:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I recently had someone reccommend your fics to me, and I haven't regretted reading them yet. I really enjoy the way you write the contrast between sex during Lee's POV and Gaara's; IMO you got them pretty dead-on. The only error that really stood out to me (that I remember at the moment, anyway) was "Shinobi raised wolves, not lambs, and a certain amount of rough play and testing was always going on at all age." Other than that, I love the story thus far, and I'm delighted to find one that's updated more than once every 3 months.
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Reviewed By: zel n On: May 29, 2006 08:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic seems to be going realy good i very much like Gaara and Chiro interacting.
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Reviewed By: Isollae On: May 20, 2006 15:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing story! I've always liked Rock Lee and Gaara, but you've really gotten me into them as a couple. In fact, now they're the only pairing from Naruto that I read stories of. I also read your other story, Diplomatic Relations, and that was fantastic as well. Your fanfics have become some of my favorite Naruto ones, as well as just favorite fanfics in general and you have become one of my favorite writers.
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Reviewed By: zork On: May 15, 2006 12:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fics are always vary well written and I think this will be interesting to see where it goes .
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Reviewed By: Mainframe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 16:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is BRILLIANT!!! I was hoping that there would be more of the Gaara/Lee stories. I read them today and have just gone nuts for them. ^_^ Bloody Hell! They have to take care of kids? This is gonna be fun. Gaara may find that mental instability rushing back before much longer, and they can kiss goodbye to their sex life...and sleep...and ever walking outside their front door without puke/ food stained clothing again. I generally run a mile from OC fic's but seen as it's one of yours I figured I'd take a look. Glad I did. The boys are very well written and a frazzled Lee is always bonus. (3 Is something, other than delayed shock, wrong with Chiro? I reckon he may relate more to Gaara than to Lee if I'm reading the little one right. ^^; The whole idea of what's happened in the Rock clan is shocking, exciting, and very believable. I loved the insight into poor Lee's childhood and the permanent scares that make him try so hard. Very real. And the theory of his cousin's jealousy, that the runt of the family out shone the star in the end, is very very cool! It sounds like his cousin has been cultivating himself one hell of a fixation and grudge for quite a few years now (if the theory is correct). I can hardly wait to see where this is going and I love the pace you've set. It's great to read your fast paced fic's but also refreshing to have the time to soak up day-to-day life of Gaara & Lee. What can I say, it's another winner in my book. ^__^ Jen x
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Reviewed By: Sozoku [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 12:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is the first time I had commented on your fics. I read every one of them, but I keep forgetting to review, sorry. Anyway I would like to say that I just love this fic sooo much! I love your version of Gaara and Lee. Also I think Chiro was acting the way he was because he upset with being with a bunch of strangers that he never seen before, but when he knocked the plate off of the table...Maybe he was waiting to be yelled at or hit....Maybe that's why he looked at Lee like that as if he didn't understand why Lee was being so nice to him. Hmm I don't know, but that's my guess.
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Reviewed By: *mel*soong* On: May 07, 2006 09:13 EDT
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Oooohh, very interesting ^__^ I don't know very much about children so I can only guess why Chiro's acting the way he is and what he had hoped Gaara and Lee's reaction would be. Still, I'm very intrigued.
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Reviewed By: Courtney/Sangochan56 On: April 26, 2006 01:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are the greatest writer I have ever had the joy to meet. I was so depressed when Diplomatic Relations ended, but now that you have this one, I'm so much happier ^^ Despite Gaara's attitude....>> But I can't wait for you to continue this fic, Your wrting style is absolutly amazing. I love the way you go into the characters mind, and thought flow. It gives them more of a personality. Not to mention you write the most in character GaaLee lemons ever. ^_~ Thank you for continuing DR/ writing this fic, ~Courtney
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Reviewed By: mel*soong On: April 17, 2006 11:51 EDT
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I love your Lee and Gaara a lot more than is reasonable, and I'm so glad you're writing another fic about them. The premise seems to be very interesting, too, and I'm looking froward to the next chapter. Happy Easter! ^__^
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Reviewed By: pixie smith (nsi) On: April 17, 2006 10:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this. It'll be interesting to see how it all pans out.
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: Maddox On: April 15, 2006 12:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, this was great... since lee is the 'titular' gaurdian!!! hahaha.... XD good stuff...
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Reviewed By: Yuurimaoh [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 15:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*fights back brimming tears of joy* YES, yes yes yes yes yes!! Though you warn of this being a dark fic, I can't wait to read more! I just LOVE your stories!! *sits at edge of chair waiting ever impatiently for more*
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Reviewed By: dk_joy not signed in On: April 08, 2006 16:31 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Pretty cool so far - I don't like this pairing as much as others, but I really like the way you write and this is a good story, so please keep going!
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