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Reviewed By: laZzzybug On: December 14, 2007 14:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
of the note you wrote at the end of Kindred chap3:well said. Other than that I thouroughly enjoy your Gaara Lee fics. This is my first venture in naruto Fandom and you've gotten me hooked.
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Reviewed By: Shishikijo On: November 28, 2007 00:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read DR before when Kindred was not yet finished and when(after re-reading the Wonderful DR)I saw that Kindred was ready for the reading I was Beyond Happy. I only just this past re-reading made the conection between you and gw-you
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 13:58 EDT
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MWAHAHAHA! Oh man, this story is fricking hilarious! I'd never expect a situation like this to come up (and frankly, I'm impressed by your writing of Gaara, it's detailed and shows a lot of his world) and it's done very realistically. This story isn't just a sequel to the previous Gaara/Lee story, it's a true viewpoint on things. Plus I love the conclusion, it has that weirdly good father thing that Gaara is, and yet takes nothing away from how dangerous he is either. And I do think Gaara does make to be a very good quietly strong father figure, you portrayed that very well. Please continue to write, and maybe go into the relationship between Naruto and Sasuke a bit too, in a sequel to this. Or finally get into that final battle with Sound scenario you were talking about before. Neh, your writing rocks, so continue to write. Later
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Reviewed By: GaaLee oh yeah On: June 16, 2007 21:27 EDT
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Did you get the name Chiro from Chihiro, the Japenese name meaning a thousand questions? If you did that's cool
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Reviewed By: _ On: October 03, 2006 01:10 EDT
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"Aki wouldn't chew on a cactus, would he?" "Not more than once," Gaara said without glancing up from his map. That made me laugh so hard I nearly wet myself, and made my cat take off running to hide under the bed until the strange, loud noises stopped.
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Reviewed By: Kagedtiger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 13:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. An excellent ending to an excellent fic! ^_^ This has been an amazing read, and I'm sure I'll be reading through it again and again, enjoying it just as much each time. Thank you for a job very well done. (Also: I've been vaguely considering writing a side-story to this, just a drabble, that takes place with Chiro in the future. If I decide to do so, would that be alright with you? I would of course credit you as the creator of the character and link this fic.) kaged_tiger@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: tres_quatorze to lazy to login On: August 29, 2006 20:52 EDT
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Frickin' hell you made me gag on my own laughter in the computer lab....I think some of the people there must have thought I was crazy >_> This is the most hilarious chapter in the whole fic, nice way to conclude though ^_^ Anyhow, kindred as a whole was the sequel I was waiting for after Diplomatic relations, and I'm glad you got to finish it!
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Reviewed By: Efimera On: August 29, 2006 14:52 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've just finished reading both fanfics, never in all my life I would guessed that I would enjoy a Gaara/Lee fic, the match is too weird to even contemplate, in fact that was the reason I read it in the first place, and well it was great, the character development of Lee and Gaara was well done and credible, I'll be checking for more of your fics in the future, bye
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Reviewed By: Sozoku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 01:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...You are the best writer I have ever seen. I read a lot of stories and I can tell you that this is one of the top ten including most of your stories too. As I said before I just love this fic. I like how Chiro developed into a strong character, who don't seem like an OC at all. He just somehow fits into the story without Lee and Gaara getting out of character....AND I don't know what else to say sooo I'm going to end it here. So all I have to say is nice story and I hope you'll be reading anyone soon.
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Title: Yay!!
Reviewed By: LuvaBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 23:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay I luv you work! And this story was great to say the least. I love how you can make a new character and tell the story for their POV and tell readers about how their minds work and why they feel the way they do about the situation. It really is a breath of fresh air when one of your OC's come into the story. I guess that's what makes you such a good author....Something I wish to be one day. But for now I can read a great story! Can't wait for the next one. Ja and lots of love from your fan!
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Reviewed By: EllyYuki On: August 28, 2006 15:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww... I can't believe it's done already. ...Wait... Didn't you say there was going to be an epiloge next too? >_>
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Reviewed By: silentnight On: August 14, 2006 20:15 EDT
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i really enjoy your fics. i skipped your dr story at first because i couldn't wrap my heads around the unconventional pairing. but your gw fics were so amazing that i gave it a chance and was blown away. i hope you write more gaara/lee fics and that you continue to erite in general.
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Reviewed By: Jensa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 22:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eeep, it's going to be ending so soon? I've loved reading this, and it makes me kind of sad that it's going to be ending. I can't wait for the side-story and epilogue! :3
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Title: Encouragement
Reviewed By: RazZadig [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 00:46 EDT
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Okay, I was holding back on my review for "Kindred" since adding kids seemed too much like "domesticating" the characters. I've been burned by too many GW and X-Files stories that suddenly had the chars figuring out porch paint colors with their non-homophobic Mary Sue neighbors. Just wanted to make sure that Gaara's voice would be as clear as Lee's was in "Domestic Relations". Especially in the last few chapters, it has been. I still can't get the picture of Gaara picking up Chiro while walking through the village out of my head. Mind-killing. :-) And Gaara's breakdown while Chiro was having nightmares. Poor Lee. I'm glad Gaara gave him a nice rubdown after that. *grin* Here's for hoping you are just on summer vacation and nothing horrible has happened to you (like disinterest with slashfic). I've been a faithful reader since discovering your marvelous GW fics and have gotten _very_ spoiled seeing a new story part every week. It's so hard to find a great author--much less one that is regular about updating. Very interested to see where the story goes from here. I have 2900 letters I could still fill, but don't want to sway your attention from writing. :-)
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Title: Yo!
Reviewed By: LuvaBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 03:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello. I really love and adore your stories. They bring such joy to my heart when I read them and makes me want to aspire to be a better authoress. I love this story and I hope for a new chapter soon.
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