| "The Battles of Peacetime" Reviews/Comments [ 88 ] |
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Reviewed By: Gittelbug [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 03:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow amazing story. I enjoy how you've taken in both the book and the movie and still managed to have a great story!
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Title: FFRG
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 11:46 EDT
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I'm giddy with excitement to see Howl's Moving Castle fanfiction, and it gives me great pleasure to be able to review this for FFRG! While Chapter 1 only gave the vaguest sense of where this story was going, it didn't have any grammar or spelling errors that I could see and I pretty much enjoyed reading about the contentment that the whole HMC crew gets to share after the end of the movie/book. There were a few moments, I think, when the story wasn't really cohesive, such as the three line long scene of Prince Justin beginning to enter the castle. That portion, I though, didn't have very much significance and it's always good to have a vision (otherwise it's just rambling rather than writing). Best wishes with the story and thank you very much for submitting to FFRG! --Dee
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Reviewed By: The Prophet Talia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 03:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God, this story is great! I'm a bit upset because I thought it was done, but I'm also a dedicated fan, so I'll be watching until you finish! It's great, making me giggle and sigh at all the right times :) How often do you update? Looking foreward to reading more! On a side note, there's a few points in the story (I'm not sure of specifically where) where Howl refers to Sophie as "my own". I'm not sure if that's what it's supposed to say, or if it's a typo, but since it sounds a little weird I thought I'd mention it.
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Reviewed By: monkeyking2089 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 17:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you write so well, and with such detail. its such a great story, i never thought that i would find an HMC fanfic written with such taste and beauty!
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Reviewed By: AnimeJunki07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 01:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all i would like to inform you that i have thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. It's made me want to read the book, which i hope to be buying in the very near future. And secondly i would like to tell you that you are avery lucky woman to have her oen husband be her beta editor. I only hope that i am so lucky when i find a potential husband. Anyways keep up the exceletn writing because you have got me hooked to this story. Cant wait to see what you have planed for them next lol well gtg... yours truly animejunki07 aka Jessie-chan
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Reviewed By: Mariiii On: June 05, 2006 23:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I'm loving this story i cant wait until you update again!!
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Reviewed By: fluffys_mate_kaya (not signed in) On: June 05, 2006 17:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic so much! I love how you've combined the movie with the story, and somehow made it all make sense. I think that your style of writing is very nice to read, and I just love reading this story. Hope you can update soon! Ja Ne Kaya p.s. can you maybe read my fic and give me some suggestions? it's called A Modern Fairytale: Not Really by fluffys_mate_kaya thanks
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Title: uuuwwwwaaa!!!!
Reviewed By: elfbane5 On: June 05, 2006 15:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! Please continue soon! This is hands down the BEST fanfic I have ever read, and I've read thousands! The pacing is perfect, the emotions and character spot on. This is the perfect blend of the movie and book. I even found myself getting a little emotional over parts of the story (not to mention spilled my tea on myself from laughing over the strawberries and cream at dinner)Please continue soon, I wanted to cry when the 3rd chapter ended and there was no more to read for now.
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Reviewed By: Firedemon86(nsi) On: May 14, 2006 21:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I love this story it's so good. THis is one of the first Howl fan fictions I've read so, I can't wait to read more! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: ash26 On: May 03, 2006 20:59 EDT
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thats not the way you spell demon but i love the story
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Reviewed By: animegrl93 On: April 28, 2006 17:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
let me put it this way, if you do not write more i will find you and make sure you do rofl!:DJK, but still WRITE MORE DAMN IT!!!:P
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Reviewed By: Katami Foxxe On: April 26, 2006 03:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more! Please, I beg of you, write more. This has become one of my favorite fics in 2 mere chapters. It is so sweet and cute!
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Title: Exceptional!
Reviewed By: Tobers On: April 21, 2006 10:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I fully agree with the reviews given by, 'brower47', and wish I had a more eloquent command of words to describe how much I am enjoying this story, without riding the coat tails of another's review. It's lovely and romantic - without being mushy. You and your husband make a great team!
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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: brower47 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 19:26 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You put so much warmth into your characters. The three way interaction between the price, Sophie and Howl is great, easy to follow and leaves me hungry for more. Another great chapter to add to the first. Well done and I look forward to next weeks installment! The 10 in spelling & grammar is for your husband, he's doing a fine job.
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: brower47 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 23:08 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a well done and engaging story. It is absolutely on cue with how the characters were originally portrayed that I found myself easily going along with your continuation. Bravo and I do hope you write more. Also, just in case you didn't know, you have your reviews set to only allow members to review. You might get more if you allow anyone to. Good luck and keep up the great work!
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