| "Long Lost...." Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Reviewed By: Elena Cala On: May 26, 2006 18:37 CDT
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Ola chickadee!! Awesoem chapter, filled wit hso much emotion.. i jsut don't get why she is torturing herself like that.. does she like suffering? Its only obvious to anyone w/ half a brain cell that they were made for each other. And kouga, if he really loved her he would let her go, got be truly happy and free... what did she do.. will it ever be the same since that song? I hope so, i hope she will turn into the run away bride and run to her true love... before its to late!!!
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Reviewed By: Guardian Angel2 On: May 26, 2006 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry! My computer was broken so I couldn't get on the Internet. Great chapter! But that was so sad. Kagome had to give up InuYasha. Why did she have to get engage to Kouga? Poor InuYasha. I would feel the same way. I've been thinking about something...who's gonna break up with who? It would kinda be mean if Kagome broke Kouga's heart and if Kouga broke up with Kagome, she wouldn't be that hurt. I was just thinking. Just do whatever you want. Thanks for the super long chap. It was a good chap too. Poor InuYasha(again). Thanks for updating. Bye! :P
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Title: yeah!!!
Reviewed By: Fairytalechic1 *nsi* On: May 26, 2006 12:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great job Triny!! i luved this chappie! When i listened to 'broken' imagining Inu and Kags singing it i got chills! wow! i couldn't find 'again' though :( But at least i got to hear one song, lol. so great update, extra long chappie, hehe luved it! hope ya update soon, can't wait to read more. poor Yasha, that song really affected him more than Kagome woulda thought huh? *sniffs* bye! TTYL!
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Reviewed By: Gaurdian Angel On: May 23, 2006 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm still gonna try to review after I forgot last time(Sorry!) Update whenever you can. The next chapter will be great. I know it. Thanks. Bye!
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Reviewed By: Guardian Angel ( Viv N.) On: May 22, 2006 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I guess you had to do something important cause you didn't update like you said you would. Sorry if I sound rude. Just update whenever you can. I can't wait. Bye!
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Reviewed By: Gaurdian Angel On: May 21, 2006 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I guess you couldn't update. Well... just update whenever you can. I can't wait til you update. I bet the next chapter is gonna be great. Bye!
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Reviewed By: Gaurdian Angel (Viv N.) On: May 20, 2006 10:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I guess you must of been busy. So can you update today? But if you're busy...just update whenever you can. I can't wait til you update. Bye! :p
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Reviewed By: Gaurdian Angel (Viv N.) On: May 19, 2006 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! 2 weeks past so You'll update today. Unless you're busy. Then... update tomorrow. Or the next day. I love the weekends. If you have time, can you please update today. I mean 2 weeks for us reviewers is like forever. So... just update when you can. I can't wait. Bye! :P
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Reviewed By: Guardian Angel (Viv N.) On: May 18, 2006 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One more day til You update. Yay! Okay... Here are some more things I have to say about the story. I think that when InuYasha and Kagome were kids that they were adorable! Imagine a mini Kagome that has pigtails and a cute little dress getting up real close to InuYasha. Clean up a cute little InuYasha. That would any girl think that little scene is the cutest thing ever. Just so you know... I tellin' you stuff about the other chapters. Can you update like tomorrow if you can cause i wanna tell you how great the new chapter is. All your chapters are great but I'm getting a little bored over here. I'm seriously running out of things to say. I need a new topic. Sorry if I sound rude. I know you have homework and stuff so just update when you can. Thanks! Bye!
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 00:57 CDT
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wow! i couldn't stop reading you rwonderful story! Thier childhood memories are so sweet and innocent, i jsut hope that kags will wake up to what her heart wants adn screw duty. Please update soon! *begs*
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Reviewed By: Gardian Angel (Viv N.) On: May 17, 2006 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I just wanna tell you that this is a great story. The songs go great with the story. I hope you update soon. I think it's about two days. But if you're busy you don't have to update. Just update when you can. Thanks! Bye!
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Reviewed By: Viv N. On: May 16, 2006 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I just wanna tell ya that I'm gonna change my name to gardian angel. So when I send a review it won't say Viv N. Just to let u know. 3 more days til you update. Yay! Unless you're busy. If you are then... just update when you can. Bye!
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Reviewed By: Viv N. On: May 15, 2006 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Four more days til you update. I have nothing to say. It's hard to send a review everyday. I know when you're gonna update. And I probably said a lot of good things about your story. Did I? Well... the next reviews I send will be compliments. Update when you can. Bye!
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Reviewed By: Viv N. On: May 14, 2006 21:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Trinity! I'm really running out of things to say so I'm just gonna act like this is my first review. Wow! This is a great story! I hope you update soon because I can't wait to find out what happen's next. This is one of favorite stories so update soon. Thank you. Bye! P.S. I had to act like this is my first review because I probably said all those things. But I forgot to tell you that this is one of my favorites but I think you can tell. I hope you finish all your school work so you can update. But you might be busy so...Update when you can. Bye!
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Reviewed By: elemental66 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 00:47 CDT
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that was GREAT it's my new favoret story ireally hope u update really really so or i might die from lack of info
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