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Reviewed By: luv4inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read this chapter and i cried so much. for EVERY CHAPTER i cry. like CRY REAL HARD. cause its so sad! unbelievably sad. and i also wanted to point out that the chappie "I Miss You..." has some errors, but its still awesome either way! i have a question though. when kik** (I HATE DOING ANYTHING THAT INVOLVES HER) shows her true colors, will anything fluffy happen between kags and yash?? there has to be some fluff! ILL DIE IF THERE ISNT! lol. and also, in "I Miss You..." i just noticed that the part where you said that inuyasha purposely used her (kagome's) old childhood nickname, i just noticed that it seemed so un-OOC. like, it just seemed like something he would do but hasnt done yet since i havent seen him do that in the movies. but from his characters in all the other fanfics ive read, i guess i kinda mix up the character personalities. *shrugs* maybe, maybe not. so i just wanted to say that you did an AWESOMEPAWESOME job on this fic. and are you SURE its your very first?? seems like youre WAY WAY WAY WAY WAY experienced. so bravo! wonderful job, TrinityK`. (:
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 14:20 CDT
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You do not know how much i love this story right now. Lol, ok maybe you do. =P At first I was like, nooo Kikyo, but hey what good story doesn't haveing some type of Kikyo-drama mixed into it? When they were going back to Kyoto, for some odd reason all I could think about was Sweet Home Alabama...hahahah don't ask me why, cuz I have NO idea...lol. Anyways, loved this chapter and the interaction between Kagome and Inuyasha, can't wait for the next chapter, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Guardian Angel 2 On: June 13, 2006 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a good chapter. Kagome is starting to realize her feelings but she's the kinda person that doesn't want to hurt other people's feeling so that can get in the way. Kikyo... I'm kinda mad that InuYasha might start liking her. I hope that doesn't happen. Thanks for updating and for making a long chapter. That was great. You're probably gonna bash Kikyo in the next chapter. I hope Kikyo lovers don't show up and says bad things about the story. If they do, then they're just retarded because this story is awesome. I don't really like or hate Kikyo but I'd read a Kikyo bashing story from time to time. At least I know she's not gonna get InuYasha. This is a great chapter. Update when you can. Bye!:P
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Reviewed By: Elena Cala On: June 13, 2006 12:43 CDT
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wow this chappie was so .. angsty!! I feel so horrible for them, i jsut wanna smack kags wit ha stupid stick!!! She can't even see her own feelings. She should jsut give back the ring adn go wit hinu. Maybe kouga and kikyo could hit it off or something.. they both seem like each others type.
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter wuz full of so much sadness.*sniffs* Your making me like kikyo!!! ARGH!! kikyo of all ppl! Hurry up n make her the evil bitch. And I like inu's style...and that baka called kagome! HA...serve her right! I really know that engagement thing don't have any love what so eva in it....they don't even kiss!! Kouga is leaving, n all he do is hug her?!?! baka baka baka, fucking bakas!!!!! Oh...um, I love this fic!!!! jus so bootiful. I love your style of writing. I hope like kouga is gone, n the photo shoot coming up, that mayb the positions with inu n kags are gonna be intimate??lol....my mind is so messed up. Are you gonna let them kiss?..so many questions....i guess I'll have to wait, ne? *pouts* I'll wait...great job trini!!
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Reviewed By: rinlover(offline) On: June 13, 2006 11:00 CDT
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I loved it! I cant wait for the photo shoot! YOu should make Kagome and Inu have a one night stand, and then have Kouga find out and Kikyo walk in and and and STUFF! Lol. I just think that would be so awesome ^^ UPDDATE SOON SIL VOUS PLAIT!
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Reviewed By: Guardian Angel 2 On: June 07, 2006 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! Poor InuYasha. Kagome should realize her feelings before it's too late. InuYasha... just wait for Kagome. Update soon, please. I don't want InuYasha to be sad. Thanks. Bye! ;)
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Reviewed By: fire maiden On: June 07, 2006 01:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor inuyasha. kagome should just love him.
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Reviewed By: fire maiden On: June 04, 2006 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG! THIS IS SO SAD. I HAVE A SONG THAT CAN RELATE TO THIS!
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Reviewed By: Guardian Angel 2 On: June 01, 2006 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry! I don't have an email. My dad gets pissed when I talk to my friends because he doesn't trust them. I won't try to ask questions that much. And you don't have to answer my questions by reviewing. I can wait til you update to get answers. I don't care if I have to wait a while because school gave you too much homework. I can wait. I don't want to rush you to update or anything. I'm just curious. So...now that's over. Let's talk about the story. I still think Kouga is stupid to get in the way with Kagome and InuYasha. Oh well. That just makes him him. Update whenever you can. Bye! ;)
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 10:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, not much 2 say since I've said lots on the other site. But remember that I love your fic lots, n that you must keep up the good work!^_^
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Title: Guardian Angel 2
Reviewed By: TrinityK (nsi) On: May 30, 2006 15:06 CDT
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Hey there, do you have an email? Then I could explain some of your questions or whatever. I don't really like reviewing my own story just to talk to you and I don't do lengthy review answers, so, yeah... Juts ket me know. Thanks again for reviewing and liking my story!!! ;-)
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Reviewed By: Guardian Angel 2 On: May 30, 2006 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to put a 2 at the end because some one at mm.org has the same name. Anyway, let's get back to the story. Does InuYasha love or like Kagome? Cause I'm confused with that. I know he likes her but does he love her? Poor InuYasha. He must be hurt. Kagome doesn't understand her feelings, too. She can't love Kouga. I always thought this. That when someone leaves you, you think about them everyday. Then you might love them even more. Because they're always on your mind. So then, feelings might grow from there. I guess this doesn't apply to Kagome. Maybe. I hope Kagome doesn't go threw with the wedding. I mean who would get married to someone they didn't love. I hope she understands her feelings soon. You did a great job with the story. I would never have thought about that. Update whenever you can. Bye! ;)
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 12:51 CDT
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*sniffle* I love this story, you write so well. Wow, you really had me crying there, and only great stories with great writers can do so..lol. Well I can't wait for the next chapter, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Lady Orange [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very angsty and moving fanfic. I was accually already depressed when I started reading it and there was a thundersorm and pouring rain outside. It touched my heart and I thank you most sincerly for writing this.,.......-Lady Orange
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