| "Complexities of Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 1145 ] |
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 14:07 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I just got done reading through all of the chapters that you have up so far (practically all I did besides work in the last three day, lol) and I have to admit I'm in a state of shock! I absolutely love this story with it's complex plot and characters. I loved the whole bond-breaking-having-to-meet-again because it just made it all the more enjoyable watching them fall in love again. Kagome's fiery personality is also a big plus.Of course I can't forget to mention all the super delicious lemons. Damn, why don't I have their sex life! At any rate, I think this is a damn great story and you're a fantastic writer. I can't for your your next update! (aww I think it's romantic she's preggers, hope she does too, hmmm).
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 11:55 PDT
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MOMMY?? What the heck? I wonder what Kagome will do when she finds out she's pregnant. All I can say is that Inuyasha should run. Far away.
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Title: i am sorry
Reviewed By: lovelywhite110(nsi) On: July 17, 2006 21:38 PDT
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sorri i havent been able to review!! i wasnt home. was at my cottage and didnt have a comp there so em reali sovie. anyway KAGOME IS PREGNANT!!!!! HAHA i new that was gonna happen ^.^ teehee anyway can u still make sesshomare end up wif rin (you know like in an epiloge). Update soon!!! love you biii!!
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Reviewed By: Lilly McFadden On: July 17, 2006 17:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Video = 10 out of 10 fantastic! And very touching! I loved this chapter! I cried at the end, I was so happy. Thank you so much for writing this book. It's made me laugh and cry and experience every motion in between. Also, the lemons were HOT in this chapter. You really know how to steam up a romance. Your writing style is great! I can't wait to read whatever you post next!
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 17:18 PDT
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sorry its taken me forever to read thes chapters and review! Political science is sucking out every last moment of free time i have lol!!! Anywya such great chapters! I am gld they ended on a softer sweet note. After all the yahve gone through they deserve at least that much! great job!!
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Title: Magnificent
Reviewed By: utopian dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 14:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have a bad habit of wanting to wait till the end to review stories, but I can't go any lnger without telling you how fantastic this fic is. The momentum and creativity is outstanding. I really enjoy your ability to create the surroundings and keep the everyone in character. And I think I have even taken a liking to Sesshomaru in this fic as well. Such a caring and romantic demon . . .(shudders) almost wondered if he was a replacemnt. I know he's not all bad, but he's not the extremist in your fic, I like it. It is kinda odd hearing all the lovey words from Inuyasha without his attitude and defensive nature in tow. But as I have said, I enjoy your fic. I haven't read an interesting one in a while and this one really kept me on my toes. I was also severaly anxious for the next chapter update and was disheartened when I finished reading it. I wanted another chapter. Great job and happy writing in your next endeavors. URD
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Title: ohhhh ahhhh....
Reviewed By: Yasha-Boy aka terry On: July 17, 2006 13:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that was the chapter right there! they made love two times!? yeah i'm seeing more of myself in InuYasha....was meanha trying to tell me something when she said the samething? i love that there gonna have a baby now. update soon beautiful...O_~
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 11:17 PDT
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ACK!!! Kagome's Preggy!!!! WOOHOOOO Inuyasha and Kags are together again, and dun dun duh they're gonna get married and Hojo's gonna have a cow and they're gonna have a baby!!! Sigh...... ^_^ ..... I can't wait for your next chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: Braden ( not signed in) On: July 17, 2006 06:34 PDT
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She's pregnant!? Didn't really see that coming...
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Title: ARYANNA!!!!!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 04:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'M GONNA GET YOU FOR JUST STOPIN' THE CHAPTER LIKE THAT!!!!!!!!!! She gonna have baby!!! Please tell she happy about that...or I'll get ya even more missy!!! Oh my God her mother's gonna love this, so will Inu's. I can see[read] it now. And the way they just made love was such a dream. InuYasha's words were so....hmm lets just say I'm in lalala land ok! I LOVE INUYASHA AND THIS STORY!!! You know it's funny but InuYasha in this chapter was just like Terry. All the things he said sounded like things Terry would say and do. Well it's all the more lovey... Lov ya girl mwah!xoxox
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Reviewed By: iluvchibis On: July 17, 2006 02:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE LOVE LOVED this chapter!! I wasn't expecting a pregnant Kagome though! Woohoo... so I wonder what they're gonna have? Twins maybe?? Oh man and Kagome doesn't know yet.. WOW! OoOo... can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Title: chap.59
Reviewed By: pup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 22:10 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! They had 2 hot lemon moment?!?! Gods... n I guessed deyr gna hav babies sooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope ders still 100 chaps to come coz' I don't lyk dis story to finish! Haha. Bad me!!
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Title: *happy tears*
Reviewed By: kirara0557 On: July 16, 2006 20:10 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god!!! bThis is terrific i just loved it!!! my heart is bursting with the exitment!!! this story really makes up my days i'm so happy bcause of this chapter, but sad cause i know it's comming to the inminent end!!1 Congratulation it's a wonderful story the best i've read in many months!!! i'm so glad!!! and so happy you should be proud of this.. you make a lot of people happy because of this *oh my god they are PREGNANT!!!! an IY is so sweeeT *jumping up'n down*
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Title: Fabulous!
Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 17:55 PDT
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Wonderful chapter!! :o) I am so happy they are FINALLY back together *with their memories* I wonder how Kagome will react when she finds out she is pregnant!! hehe... I am sure their families will be pleased! Yay!! I am anticipating the wedding. This is just such a wonderful story! I loved the video too. It was SO good and tied into the story well. I really like the locket part! It was simply perfect! :o) Congrats on another great video; this was definitely my favorite!
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Reviewed By: kagome313(nsi) On: July 16, 2006 17:55 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did I like it??? NO! I LOVE IT!!! KAGOME IS PREGNANT!!!!!! WOW, THAT LEMON WUZ FUCKING AMAZING! DAM!!! YOUR ONE ASTONISHING PERSON! I ENVY YOUR WRITING.LOL I REALLY ENJOY THIS CHAPTER. I'M SO GLAD THEY FINALLY GOT TO THE MAKE-UP PART. AND THEY'RE GETTING MARRY *POUTS* WHY NOT ME INUYASHA!??!?!LOL. ATLEAST HE'S ALL MINES IN MY DREAMS.:pLOL. DID I SAY I LOVE THIS??! I DO, I REALLY REALLY DO! THEY ARE SOOO KAWAII 2GETHER!! MY SUSPENSE IS FINALLY OVER, BUT I JUST GREW A NEW ONE WHEN HE MENTION THE MARRIAGE. SO IS KAGS GONNA STAY IN THE LIGHT?? I WOULD REALLY LIKE TO SEE INUYASHA AND THE GREEN MONSTER 2GETHER AGAIN. THE WHOLE SWEET INUYASHA WUZ BOOTIFUL N HAWT 2. BUT, DAM IF HE ISN'T SEXIER WHEN HE'S THE ARROGANT AND STUBBORN HANYOU.hehe. UM....I LOVE YOUR FIC ALOT.I'M STARTED TO FEEL SAD, CUZ I KNOW THAT THE END IS SOON. :( *SIGH* OH WELL. I DID HAD FUN. DO HURRY N UPDATE. I'LL WAIT, I JUS LOVE THIS FIC SO SO MUCHY!!!!^^
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