| "Complexities of Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 1145 ] |
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Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 (nsi) On: July 16, 2006 17:30 PDT
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this is an amazing story, I wish I could write something with this much heart in it. I can tell that you put your time and effort into it and that's what I love about you and how much work you can contribute to a story, and I admire that in you. I wish you happy writings and a merry muse thats keeps you writing, and everybody keeps reviewing your stories..
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion_lo On: July 16, 2006 17:23 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally! He's officially back. Wonderful love scenes. I loved this chapter, it almost made me cry, but in the good way. I knew when Inu kept putting his hand over her stomach that she was preggerz, and it was really sweet how he said goodnight mommy at the end. How's Kagome gonnaa feel about being preg though? She's still in college after all...Guess I'll just have to wait and see...Hope I don't have to have too too long ^.^ Bai
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 15:17 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I just watched your video and I have to say that was amazing. The music went so perfact with it. You did a very good job with it.
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 14:58 PDT
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OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! baby inus!!!!!!!! :D :D :D :D!!!!!!! I'm going away for a week T_T so I wont get to read the next chapter if you update soon *sad* but i suppose it would be something to look foreward to when I get back. Maybe I'll write more chapters for FMN during the drive :P LOVE LOVE LOVE!~!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 14:38 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was a beautiful chapter. And what Inuyasha said that 'mommy' comment too the oh so sleepy Kagome I think he knows that she might have children very soon. Well hope you update soon. Peace.
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Reviewed By: TrinityK (nsi) On: July 16, 2006 14:29 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww!!! Kagome's preggie!!! LoL. Loved this chapter. It was really sweet. Can't wait for the next! I'm sure the wedding will be great. ;-) Go Inuyasha!!!
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Reviewed By: DeadlSoulCaster to tired On: July 16, 2006 14:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that was cute, the video was put together perfectly in my opinion!!!! beautiful!!!!! i love the song! great job great job!!1!*claps* the story was great, if it isnt the end, i will be waiting with baited breath for the next chapter! brovado!!!!!
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Title: oh my god...
Reviewed By: Kisa Niwatari (nsi :P lol) On: July 16, 2006 13:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH WOW! kagome is pregnant!! i thought so cuz he kept touching her belly and all but oh wow...kagome was sleepy does she know?? oh wow that was the best chapter!! i loved it!! yay!! i'm so happpppppyyyyyyy!!!!! i can't wait for the next chapter. ahaha inuyasha knows her too well! ^-^ yay!! keep it up must know how it goes next!!
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 13:53 PDT
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Great new chapter!! is that it or are we going to see the wedding? OOHHH I want to see a wedding!!! I can't wait for everyone's reaction to kegs being preg.!!!
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Reviewed By: mikokitty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 13:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of my favorite stories. Please please please update soon.
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Title: AWWW
Reviewed By: animegurl_06 On: July 16, 2006 13:06 PDT
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Awwww...i loved that chapter.it was so cute!! they finally are back together...i love this story..update soon...
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Reviewed By: page 13 On: July 16, 2006 12:42 PDT
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omg omg omg!!! It was soo good!!! I love it so much it had me in tears!!!
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Title: AMAZING!! BRILLIANT!!!!!YAY!! AMAZING!!
Reviewed By: 0oStandinOuto0 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 12:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I LOVEDIT!!! THEY ARE TOGETHER AND SHE IS PREGNANT!!! OMG!!! She is pregnant...WELL I DOTN CARE THEY ARE TOGETHER AND HE REMEMEBERED AND SHE REMEMBERED AND THEY ARE TOGETHER AND THEY ARE HAPPY AND ARE GETTING MARRIED AND....oh yeah...THEY ARE GETTING MARRIED!!(I love picturing Inuyasha in a tux.)EXCELLENT JOB THANKYOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR UPDATING!! I TRULY TRULY TRULY ADORE YOUR AMAZING WRITING TALENTS BECAUSE WITH EACH CHAPTER YOUR SKILLS SURPRISE ME MORE AND MORE. I just thought of something. What about Kagome's career. How is Inuyasha going to take MILLIONS of people oogling over his soon to be wife? WEll loved it even if I dotn know yet about tehat!! LOl. GREAT GERAT!! I LOVED IT SOO MUCH!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: baka_juju2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 11:53 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SQUEEEEEEEEE! (*background*: Stop that squealing!) I can't believe this! OH MY CHEESE! That was such a sweet (and very AWESOME) chapter! I absolutely LOVED it! And she's going to be a mommy! WHOO HOOT! I'm so excited that I'm vibrating in my seat (nothing ecchi there)! You have to tell me how many chapters are left so that I can be prepared to start reading for a new one to read (hopefully by you) because after this story, others will most likely completely boring. lol. *raises glass of tea* "Here's to this awesome chapter and to the hope that there will be many more stories by you!"
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Reviewed By: mirim87 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 11:14 PDT
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I love it, it gets better every chapter! And now...to the video!
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