| "Complexities of Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 1145 ] |
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Title: Sweet sugar!
Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 16:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it..it was so sweet. The last few chaps have been really good. You must have been in a romantic mood when you wrote this and it showed. When is someone going to fill in Mr Walrus...I mean Sesshomaru about his denseness regarding Rin....will Rin have a drunken confession?? Hmm...I am surprised Inu hasnt said anything. Oh, and when is Inu gonna finally confess what really happened?? Oh the anticipation.....thanks for the quick chapter...as always I am pleasantly surprised. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 20:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so good. I have loved it from day one. Your an excelent story teller. Even in the end..you always leave me at the edge of my seat. Thanks again for writing it. You Rawk..
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Reviewed By: lsc33 On: October 31, 2006 04:26 PST
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Wonderful story. I read this while waiting for updates on the Mirror Images. You are a very talented writer. Keep it up.
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Title: :'(
Reviewed By: Tohru Hotaru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 11:33 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! NONONONONONONO! CARRY ON THE STORY DAMMIT! NOOOO! NONOONO! *sobs*
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Title: Overload
Reviewed By: Ayano_56 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 07:32 PDT
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Perfect ten kabayan. Isa ako sa mga milyun milyong tagahanga ng mga romantic na kuwento at ang masasabi ko lang i'm proud to be your kababayan. galingan mo pa.
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Reviewed By: yoshi_apple [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2006 14:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I found this on accident and I'm glad I did. Although I will admit that I had difficulty the first few chapters because I've read a lot of 'in highschool' fics that are pretty crappy. But I'm reading Mirror Images and I love that so I thought I'd stick around and give it a try. I can't tell you how impressed I am with this story. Not only does it have one of the most original plots, but you keep the characters, well, in character, while still managing to have them grow and change. Definitely not boring at any point, I didn't even have to force myself to stay up all night to read as much of it as I could. Now, normally, this is the part where I would say 'eagerly awaiting the next chapter', or something of that sort, but since it's finished... Well, Eagerly awaiting the next chapter of Mirror Images. :)
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Reviewed By: KAZ1167 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 09:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm so glad I came across beyond the other day, because after reading those chapters i started looking at your other stories and found this. wow. absolutely loved it. i loved the songs you used in your story as well. i downloaded almost all of them! keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: alakab4m [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 19:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this story was really good just like your mirror images one. keep up the good work and keep on writing stories. Your one-shots are really good as well. (:
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 15:29 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hmmm, yes...I wouldnt say this chapter was bitter but it does have me a little nervous. So many things can happen from here on out. What role will Kikyo have in it? Will she have a change of heart and actually save her sister? Will there be a happy ending for all..and what happened to the love interest or Rin and Sessh? Well I will await your next chapter. Thanks for all your work and wonderful story!
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Title: OH MY GAWD
Reviewed By: IYsMateKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 09:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PS: i totally agree with this person !!!!_______________________________________________________________________ __________________________________ Title: Romantic Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 02:09 CDT Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: You have an amazing talent writing Romance. You had me hooked through this entire fic wanting to read more and more, chapter by chapter. It was just beautiful! YOu convey the emotions so well through your words that at times you had me crying, while my heart was racing the next minute. That just proves how talented you are! ^^ Not only did the story have a nice twist compared to all the other highschool inufanfics but you kept the characters interesting without changing their core personalities. The spelling and grammar had troubles in areas but overall it was readable. I very much enjoyed reading this story and I think everyone who loves Inuyasha and romance should read this fic! :) I am looking forward to your future stories. ^^ ___________________________________________________________________________ ________________________ I TOTALLY AGREE WITH HIM/HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Title: OH MY GAWD
Reviewed By: IYsMateKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 09:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cried, i laughed, heck i even felt depressed when thye had to leave each other, GREAT story!!! i'm abot to go to a wedding and your wedding chapter was reallly good!!! i hope the wedding's just like it.... lol ANYWAYS........... dang i looved reading this story soo much i stayed up reading it until like 5 AM yesterday!! it took me about a day to read CONGRATS!!!
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Title: awwweee...
Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 08:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sooo gooood! This story was soooooo darn sweet. It took me a week to finish, but I really enjoyed it. Thank you for writing it. Take care!
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 10:58 PDT
Comment/Review:
Wonderful! So much fun and sadness and fun again.
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Title: AWSOME!!!!
Reviewed By: Katari On: August 03, 2006 19:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT! AWSOME ENDING!
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Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 (nsi) On: July 30, 2006 15:12 PDT
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hey girl. Awesome story, I just love the plots you create... I'm amazed. Just wanted to say that much...
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