| "His Past, Her Present, Their Future" Reviews/Comments [ 90 ] |
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Reviewed By: daydreamer999 (sorry not signed in) On: July 15, 2006 21:40 CDT
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Great chapters! I like Kagome's point though....this will change a lot...won't it? Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Alena [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 22:24 CDT
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Keep updating!.. its so awesome i cant control myself.. every update i'm glued to my chair till i'm finished!! LOVE IT!!
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Title: kawaii!!!
Reviewed By: omegawolfempress*not logged in* On: July 10, 2006 13:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet again, more wonderful chapters. I can't even begin to explain how much I've enjoyed reading this story. Every time I'm on-line, I so look forward to reading this one story in particular. It makes me think of me and my fiance. Falling for each other only to be separated and learn to love each other all over again. Please, keep up the great work. I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 10:12 CDT
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Awe...It's so sad that Kagome has to leave....I knew it was supposed to happen but still....Again great chapter can't wait for your update!
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Title: OO
Reviewed By: Kurai Kyusobin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 01:46 CDT
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When I finished the last chapter I was like, WHY? I need your story like a heroine addict needs heroine. You could do the whole singular chapter thingus, or pleasantly supply it. In my story I placed it within the chapter and well didn't give much of a warning. But it wasn't explicit so no one should be upset about that. Anyways, do as you wish. If you think it better to provide an entire chapter so that readers who do not wish to view it can skip it then do so. If it's explicit then I do believe that is your best bet. So that people can't yell at you afterwards, well type angrily about it. LOL! How's your munchkin?
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Reviewed By: kittycat925 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 20:52 CDT
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Kagome's going to leave that time soon...and only ONE DAY in the Feudal Era? That's just not fair...but you said it would be a happy ending so I'm hoping for Sesshy to be on the other side of that well when she leaves...and yay to the upcoming lemon! *laughs* I think three chapters is enough warning ahead of time for those with sensitive eyes! Loved the updates, and I hope you put up another one soon!
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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 02:39 CDT
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I am drawn to reading your story over and over, I am picking up small bits here and there that I did not pay enough attention to in the first place. It is just simply a dynamic story that should be published in it's own rights. Well When it is done I will print myself a copy. Keep the chaps coming. Because you left us hanging in such a bad spot! I hope Kagome will finish what she started, cause if she didn't that would just piss them both off! Keep it up, faithful reader that I am, can only sit and dream till other chaps. come up!
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Reviewed By: Kurai Kyusobin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 17:25 CDT
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Congrats! Great additions... my internet has been a foolish trite running off on me so I haven't been reading them as you post. Oh well cest la vie! Muse is an awesome band. Butterflies and Hurricanes is my favourite. Much love, keep up the fantastic work!
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Title: I GOT GLOMPED OH YEA!
Reviewed By: Kurai Kyusobin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 17:08 CDT
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Have you watched it in English? Reload that is... OMG the voices... Hakkai sounds so femme... at first I was like no its some horrid joke! A prank of sorts, alas it was not. As for the dic. Maybe I did.. LOL! I totally like the whole addition of Kou as a guard and Hakkai. More eye candy! Your daughter is so kawaii. I want, if I have a daughter, to be like her. Nothing else matters but the prettiness! Good job, I understand completely. In the real world things just happen. Most people don't understand that. It's like one night you get plastered with all your mates and end up waking up next to your best mate, nekked like the day you were born, and with a sneaking suspiscion that you didn't just sleep next to 'em.
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Title: No!!!
Reviewed By: critical eye [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 10:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How evil you are! Argh, poor Kagome. At least the water is cold enough to cool down *snicker* This fic is absolutely beautiful! Keep going please.
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Title: Great, as usaual!!!
Reviewed By: omegawolfempress*not logged in* On: July 02, 2006 10:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Girl!!!! I LOVE the latest installments to the story! Makes me feel like a giddy school-girl again. I am so totally in awe of your talent to push out chapters and keep the story going. How in the world do you do it?! And I love all the marshmallow-y goodness with Kagome and Sesshy-chan. I can't wait to read more! Keep up the wonderful work.
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Reviewed By: EarthToMe001 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 02:46 CDT
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I'm not sure if I've commented on your story yet... but I just wanted to tell you that I love it! ^_^ I'm a huge fan of Sesshoumaru, and it's nice to see this younger, more emotive side of him. Mattaki is great too, and Kaori playing matchmaker... that just made me laugh (in a good way!) keep it up! I can't wait to see how everything plays out with all of the great lords and Kagome in the after-dinner festivities. also ... forgive the ineloquence of this review... it's almost 3am, but I wanted to write something before I forgot. :-)
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Title: awwww
Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha Ravyn is SOOOO adorable from what u post....i LVOE this story...and i cant wait for ur next update!! ^__^ (haha and the holding hands thing was cute too)
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Reviewed By: kittycat925 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 21:44 CDT
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*gasps* You mean you were thinking of having non-happy endings... I couldn't imagine it...I can't! It would be sad... I loved these two chapters...*sighs* I wish I were Kagome... *daydreams* And the lesson from Rayvn about Prettiness being all that matters...cute! Well, you oughta post those other chappies sometime soon, that would be awesome!
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 00:44 CDT
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great chapter...Loved it...update soon!
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