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 Title: HOLY COW!!!
Reviewed By: omegawolfempress*notloggedin*  On: June 01, 2006 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I so totally did NOT see that coming. If that's not original, then I don't know what is. I think that it's great! I think my heart jumped up into my throat, through all the marshmallows. My eyes were wide, my jaw hanging open, I'm not sure if I was breathing or not....JUST TOTAL WOW!!! I cannot wait to read more. Seriously, I'm gonna be thinking about this until I get to read more. Possible senarios are gonna be going through my head...I'm going to go crazy on the spot...*sits in a corner and starts rambling incoherently*
 Reviewed By: Random Person Leaving You a Review  On: May 31, 2006 00:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
No don't! UPDATE!
 Reviewed By: Alena [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 30, 2006 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
For some reason i'm booted of my login when writing this review but whatever... I usually as a general rule stay away from Sess/Kag pairings because I am a die hard Inu/Kag fan. This hasn't been easy for me but your story is a very good portrayal of how these two should get together. You are updating so quickly I LOVE it!... You're doing an awesome job... can't wait for the next chapter! Cheers!
 Reviewed By: SilentHill  On: May 29, 2006 02:35 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Love the story, love the song Holding Out For a Hero. In my opinion it should be every girl's anthem. Anyways keep up the good work. Cheerio!
 Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 28, 2006 22:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a really good story. I love your fluff chapters and Sesshou's and kag's relationship. update soon.
 Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 28, 2006 12:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Beautiful! They are some of the best chapters I have ever read. I love your story. It is really cute that your young'in knows who Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru are! CUTE! It is so fun, to get on and read your story, when I go to work I have a habit of retelling the story to myself, and telling the funny parts out loud to myself. Which makes everyone think I am crazy. Anyaways keep writing, because I am in love with your story.
 Title: another great chapter
Reviewed By: sesshyschick  On: May 25, 2006 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
A perfect 10 for 10 all across the board from me. 2 more wonderful chapters and I just couldn't wait for. I like how you have Kagome being the one who's fighting the attraction with the relationship, and Sesshoumaru is just sort of going with the flow. I will agree with you on the Sesshoumaru-sama being very yummy. He's been in my thoughts since I first saw him in the series. Please, keep up with the great writing. I can't wait for another installment soon!!
 Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 23, 2006 03:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Your chapters are coming along beautifully! I want to know what happens next, so hurry and post more chapters. I love the way you write, it flows woderfully, and it draws you in and leaves you wanting more. I think your story, once it is farther along, will get nominated for something. Because you have a style for greatness, not to mention a unique way to tell the story.
 Reviewed By: Angel_Rias [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 22, 2006 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was a really good chapter. Keep up the good work.
 Reviewed By: crystalclearangel (NSI)  On: May 21, 2006 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey i love this story. i can't wait til you write another chapter. hope you update soon.
 Title: coolies!!
Reviewed By: sesshyschick  On: May 21, 2006 10:56 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think you have a wonderful story going here. It's very, quite original for all the Sess/Kag pairings set in the Sengoku Jidai. I do like how you incorporate Japanese terms in with the story. And you're one of the few authors I've come across who actually uses terms correctly. I love your style of writing. It's very sophisticated and well thought out. It's almost like you wrote it down, then typed it up, only to go over it again and again, making sure you haven't missed errors. I will say that the only thing I noticed, mostly in early chapters, was a few small errors that I don't think many noticed. I think it was a few gender mistakes that could always be taken as typos (i.e. placing 'she' when meaning 'he'). I do LOVE how original this is. I really liked how you went through and explained how things won't be done, and all of them I am in total agreement with. A lot of writers do all of those things in one story, and that just makes the whole thing monotonous. I do like how you got rid of the threat of Naraku. Others would have him come back again...You're not planning on doing that, are you? I honestly cannot wait for the next chapter to come out. I will admit that I've come across your story with earlier chapters, but never thought to check it out. Now I'm so very glad that I did. Not many stories are a page scroller, but your's definitely is. It's funny, even in the early stages, it's tugging at the heart strings. I do like how you let InuYasha go peacefully like that, and the closure that he gave to Kagome in the dream. But most of all, it's a Sess/Kag pairing. I guess I have a special place in my soul for these two. And how can I forget about Sango and Miroku. That was pretty good, giving them a sweet departure as such. I do really hope that that's not all we'll hear from them. Keep up the great work. I do hope that you continue with this story, and perhaps start other stories as well. ^_^
 Title: FLUFFY
Reviewed By: mysterious_demon is not logged in  On: May 21, 2006 00:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
that is the most funniest thing ever. how can this be. i call him fluffy too. man if i were sess i would not mind it because he does have a big old fluffy thing over his shoulder. it is his fault. other than my obsession with that word this would be the best story ever. just update as soon as possible.
 Title: His Past, Her Present, Their Future
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 20, 2006 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
 Title: wuv ^^
Reviewed By: nikoonna [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 11, 2006 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I absoloutley love your fic. It's held my interest very well so far, being as you're only building plot(and I have ADHD so thats no small feat, kudos!).You write beautifully, I like how you don't just jump into the story, unlike some who rush there work. Also, you've portrayed the charecters well..good job of keeping them in charecter(and thanks for not turning sesshy into a mushy prettyboy^^). Please keep up the good work, I can't wait to finish reading your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Title: Great start
Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 01, 2006 17:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Actually I thought it was a brilliant start. It wets your knowledge of what is to come. I like plots in the storys, it makes them better. Instead of "Hey there big boy, lets get busy!" "woohoo, I am a changed man." I am also a big Sess/Kag fan because of Tales From the House of the Moon. It was just a beautiful tale, like yours will be. Hang in there and hurry and post the next chap. Because I want to know what is going to happen next!
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