| "His Past, Her Present, Their Future" Reviews/Comments [ 90 ] |
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Reviewed By: alissa On: June 22, 2006 09:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update please!!!! i love the story!!!
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Reviewed By: kittycat925 (not logged on) On: June 21, 2006 21:31 CDT
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Not just one update today, but TWO! and good updates at that...full of Kagome and Sesshy. He so wants her, why doesn't he just admit it to himself...maybe make that dream come true *laughs* Great updates, can't wait to see what happens next.
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Title: -_-
Reviewed By: lady silverfox aka mychelle 79 On: June 16, 2006 20:00 CDT
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good story please write more please!!! whats gonna happen between kagome and sesshomru? any nooky? kagome and sesshomru sittin in a tree... well there are 2 virson 2 that but i'm not sure if it's a good thing 2 say what they are!!
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Reviewed By: kittycat925 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 20:28 CDT
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Yay! You find the time to update...TWICE even! And now young Sesshy is going to spend some alone time with Kagome...I can imagine it now...but it probably won't be creative as to how you write it...so I'll just wait for your update and see what happens between those two.
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 19:08 CDT
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Kags and Sess going shopping. Interesting. I like how you are building them slowly into a relationship. Can't wait to read more!
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Title: The Dream
Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 18:15 CDT
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Like always I am left wanting more, you are the bread and water of sustenance of my daily life. Well, not really, but you do relieve the boredom of it. I can't spell right now so forgive the errors. The dream is very interesting...sharing it that is. Their should be more, and I like the young sesshy. Very good! When will the next chaps come out? I hope quickly! Maybe Papa-Inu should take Kag and Sess out on patrol, or even just out. Or even just have Kag kidnaped while she is in the North Gardens by advisors, that don't want their lord tainted then Sess could catch them, and/or so forth. I read you were looking for ideas to get them alone. Keep up the phenomenal story!
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Title: love it!
Reviewed By: kittycat925 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 23:55 CDT
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...I feel kind of dumb right now...since mine was the last review...why didn't I just wait for an update which came minutes after I posted. Ok, that aside, I think she's starting to grow on the young Sesshy too...and that dream, wow...oooooo I am sooo interested to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: kittycat925 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 22:59 CDT
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Wow...this story definitely is creative...I can't wait to see what you have planned next! Please update when you can, I'll be waiting!
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: s On: June 07, 2006 05:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Loved it, i cant wait to see more!
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 23:04 CDT
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I love this story. Please update soon. This is my favorite sess/kags story!!!!!
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Reviewed By: lovedit On: June 05, 2006 00:18 CDT
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love love love love love love love love love it can not wait till you update again please update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ugg On: June 04, 2006 20:51 CDT
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Update... it's a cliffie! I hate cliffies! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
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Reviewed By: awedandamazedfan On: June 03, 2006 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gah forced are you kidding me you didnt like it! I absolutely loved it! it was fantastic i don't review unless i really really like a story and i absolutely love love love love love love love yours! I was worried it was going to end soon to when the jewel had been completed i some glad ya said there is going to be lots more i can't wait please please please keep updating and updating and updating i almost cried when the chapter was over and there wasnt anything else for me to read!!!! please i am begging ya update soon!!! and i can't wait to read your other story you will have coming out i am so excited i love it when i find and amazing author to read you so totally just made my week!!!!! I just wish i could give a higher rating on the enjoyment factor!!!!!!
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Title: Awe struck
Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 23:58 CDT
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I must tell you I just didn't see that coming at all! She went away all right, back into time. Poor future Sessy, looking to never find. It would be quite funny if you have past Sessy corner her, after Inu-papa told him to leave her alone. Hmmm... I think I am seeing your plot come together, just now. But I must say you keep me second guessing. You are a wonderful story teller! This is so good, but I want the chap. to come quicker! Of course, if wishes were Sessshoumaru's then everyone would have one! Keep yp the beautiful writing, I think I am your number one faN! Did I mention that I love your story and that it is so unique.
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Reviewed By: Alena [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I love it! Have fun with these characters! You're doing awesome ...keep it up.
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