| "Runaway Puppy" Reviews/Comments [ 89 ] |
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2011 23:01 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Super sad that you hadn't finish this. I remember when you were writing this fic I was excited for each new chapter. And I still want to know what is going to happen after all these years. Coming back to read old fic are awesome. the new ones are depressing me and coming back to the *back in the day fic* is refreshing somehow. |
Reviewed By: ram8005 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2009 00:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please spell Sango's name correctly. other than that the story wasn't bad. I did hope for a better ending, it just seemed incomplete somehow.
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Title: almost 2 years
Reviewed By: xochitl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2009 15:54 EST
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in two months its going to be 2 years since lasta update i dont think the author is going to finish the fic
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Title: Meanie!
Reviewed By: Ashlan On: November 21, 2008 11:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had to admit, delay the chapters almost a year will make your head hurt, unless you intend to ignore this... P/S: Sorry but as a reader, I had to be cruel. This story is truly attracted me, you know that??? Just MAKE an UPDATE!!!! WAAAAHHHHH!!!! >O
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Title: plz
Reviewed By: cleastol On: July 28, 2008 15:05 EDT
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plz tell me that your going to complete this story? I was hoping to see what happens next. I hate when an author starts a storie and not complete it. plz but out new chapters.
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Reviewed By: miauw [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 01:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I loved this story. I can't wait to see your next chapter. When will you update new chapter?
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Reviewed By: Neko Demon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 05:47 EST
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i would just love to see how sesshomaru handles inuyasha and how his father is going tohelp him.
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 18:52 EST
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This is one of my favorite stories, please update soon! I'm dying to know just what Inupapa has to say to Sesshomaru, to help him out with InuYasha! Please update!!!! B reading U!
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Reviewed By: FABIrox94 On: August 24, 2007 03:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is the best i've eva read i loved it to death and i cant wait for the chapters to come sooo pleeeeeeeaaase update soon i will definately carry on reading carry on the great work
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Tiny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 03:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it needs all 10's because that is what i think this story is. I really love this story and i hope u continue writing it soon. I think it was very original and i did not find anything wrong with the spelling or grammer but i could be wrong i'm not a grammer/spelling expert. I enjoyed it very much it was funny and great all together. I loved the creativity you put into the story because most of the time u dont find a fanfic like this.
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Title: yo!
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 16:24 EDT
Comment/Review:
Ok than now how bout we hurry up and update yes. please update date it's been while and I'm starting to lose hope of this fic ever beening completed.
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Title: awesome!!
Reviewed By: Oryana On: May 01, 2007 15:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this one!! you changed a lot the characters' personalityies, but they're very amuzing! I like it, plz update soon!!!! and plz don't make Sesshoumaru suffer!! *puppy eyes*
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Reviewed By: D.L.I. On: April 07, 2007 06:23 EDT
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Interesting story. You said you were looking for a job at an anime store? Try AnimeNuts or Simply Kids.
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 18:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story scares me. You also mentioned modern ligo in the fedual era i.e. Virius and bateria which the names didn't exsist back then. Yes, I know this is just a story. I think this is funny in a almost bad grammer kind of way. When Inutashio said grandchildren did he mean over the years or all at once. I prefer over time because I just can't see them having several kids at once. Do you know how big a pain in the butt that will be? Don't forget that in your story that Naraku is still out there along with the jewel shards. Naraku could be used to cause so more havoic in your story before you plan a glorious battle to destroy you. Naraku could be used to test sesshomaur's strength of character. To prevent you from getting writter's block you should make a plot outline. that is for instents plan everything ahead of time. You could also get a beta reader to edit your story and to help you make it even better
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 12:58 EDT
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this definetly be interestin i cant wait update soon
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Reviewed By: SoSickOfNyQuil [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 10:47 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOoooo This should be interesting.....*giggle*
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 19:13 EDT
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Yay you updated. GREAT LOVED IT. I really want to find out what happens when Inutaisho tries to teach Sesshy how to court Inuyasha. It's going to be GREAT!! can't wait. update soon PLEASE
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 05:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh please update whe4n you can!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: LadySess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 01:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! you updated and the update ROCKED i can't wait to read what'll hapen next......please update soon i'm hooked all over again.....grandchilern? Good luck inutaisho...sess is stubbon!!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 23:52 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Grandchildren huh....?!? I can't wait for more, so update soon please! Keep up the awesome work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: LadySess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 14:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i love the story i was just wondering do you ever plan to update again?
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Reviewed By: b121 (Sesshoumaru's Incarnate) On: March 13, 2007 20:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
personally I believe you should forget the idea of rewriting it and just continue where you left off, if you need a spellchecker for your story you can use the one I recently started using on my story on fanfiction.net but its no where as good as your story sadly --, the site for the spellchecker is http://orangoo.com/spell/ its pretty good, catches all or almost all my mistakes thus far. I vaguely remember reading this story a heck long time ago, and now that I have offialy REREAD it, could you pweese update? XD ok I tried the cute talk, any affect? lol XD but seriously I cant wait to read what happens next and to me it would be a total waste of rewriting the whole story just because of a few spelling mystakes. So can you please think about it? I really hope you decide to just continue with what you have thus far ^^;; Oh and I am deeply sorry if I have said anything to offend you by accident, because if I did I didnt mean to.
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Title: plz
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 17:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update I soon gotta know whats going to happen.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 03:32 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nO THAT IS SO CRUEL, pLEASE START AS SOON AS YOU CAN.
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Title: ch 7
Reviewed By: mysesshou2 On: February 19, 2007 14:23 EST
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"Whoa, down boys, food's almost done, just sit down at the table" hehe, she says "sit" and he wasn't sat. :)
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 22:55 EST
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I'll be sittiing right here waiting for you to update your story. I CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: Faery Goddyss [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 11:24 EST
Comment/Review:
...Please tell me English is not your first language? I'm not an expert with grammar, spelling, or punctuation, but that was...pretty awful. The CONTENT of the story is fine, it's the technicalities that are killing things. Take this sentence: "He was raped, badly, by his own brother." You can't say that. It either has to be /He had been raped, badly, by his brother/ or, if you want to talk about the present, then, /He was being raped, badly, by his own brother/. But since Inuyasha was reflecting, you obviously have to use past tense. You were using present (sorta, and not very well) in reference to the past. Another example: "It's not your fault, kagome, you or he didn't know this would happen" miroku assured her. You can't say it like that either, it's meant to be a negative sentence. It should be /It's not your fault Kagome. Neither you nor Inuyasha knew this would happen," Miroku assured her. ...do you see the difference? Your chapters are FULL of these kinds of mistakes. You continuously mix past, present, and future tense. Also your ending of the first chapter was very abrupt, TOO abrupt. In any case, I was only pointing this out and I hope you take no offence; I only want to help the best way I can, because again, the content is fine, I like it, but you need to work on your grammar. Sorry if I sound like a teacher! ^_^; Best of luck! Feel free to contact me if you have any questions! I'll still be watching the story's progress! Anyway, damn, so people have already decided on a litter? I would have gone for one pup...oh well.
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Reviewed By: Korune On: October 23, 2006 22:36 EDT
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Ohhhh... Yay on the drama! I didn't see that comming! ^_^* Keep up the good work, at your own pace, of course. I'm one of the patient ones. Often times if rushed a story can turn from good to bad really quick.
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Title: inuyashawifey
Reviewed By: inuyashawifey [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 16:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an awesome story i hope to read more in the future
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Reviewed By: Polka Dot On: October 22, 2006 14:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like that Inuyasha isn't a whimpering fool in this but he is a bit pathetic. Still it's a good story, I keep forgetting about it because it takes a while for updates.
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