| "Runaway Puppy" Reviews/Comments [ 89 ] |
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Reviewed By: SoSickOfNyQuil [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 10:47 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOoooo This should be interesting.....*giggle*
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 19:13 EDT
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Yay you updated. GREAT LOVED IT. I really want to find out what happens when Inutaisho tries to teach Sesshy how to court Inuyasha. It's going to be GREAT!! can't wait. update soon PLEASE
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 05:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh please update whe4n you can!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: LadySess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 01:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! you updated and the update ROCKED i can't wait to read what'll hapen next......please update soon i'm hooked all over again.....grandchilern? Good luck inutaisho...sess is stubbon!!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 23:52 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Grandchildren huh....?!? I can't wait for more, so update soon please! Keep up the awesome work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: LadySess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 14:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i love the story i was just wondering do you ever plan to update again?
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Reviewed By: b121 (Sesshoumaru's Incarnate) On: March 13, 2007 20:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
personally I believe you should forget the idea of rewriting it and just continue where you left off, if you need a spellchecker for your story you can use the one I recently started using on my story on fanfiction.net but its no where as good as your story sadly --, the site for the spellchecker is http://orangoo.com/spell/ its pretty good, catches all or almost all my mistakes thus far. I vaguely remember reading this story a heck long time ago, and now that I have offialy REREAD it, could you pweese update? XD ok I tried the cute talk, any affect? lol XD but seriously I cant wait to read what happens next and to me it would be a total waste of rewriting the whole story just because of a few spelling mystakes. So can you please think about it? I really hope you decide to just continue with what you have thus far ^^;; Oh and I am deeply sorry if I have said anything to offend you by accident, because if I did I didnt mean to.
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Title: plz
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 17:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update I soon gotta know whats going to happen.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 03:32 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nO THAT IS SO CRUEL, pLEASE START AS SOON AS YOU CAN.
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Title: ch 7
Reviewed By: mysesshou2 On: February 19, 2007 14:23 EST
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"Whoa, down boys, food's almost done, just sit down at the table" hehe, she says "sit" and he wasn't sat. :)
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 22:55 EST
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I'll be sittiing right here waiting for you to update your story. I CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: Faery Goddyss [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 11:24 EST
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...Please tell me English is not your first language? I'm not an expert with grammar, spelling, or punctuation, but that was...pretty awful. The CONTENT of the story is fine, it's the technicalities that are killing things. Take this sentence: "He was raped, badly, by his own brother." You can't say that. It either has to be /He had been raped, badly, by his brother/ or, if you want to talk about the present, then, /He was being raped, badly, by his own brother/. But since Inuyasha was reflecting, you obviously have to use past tense. You were using present (sorta, and not very well) in reference to the past. Another example: "It's not your fault, kagome, you or he didn't know this would happen" miroku assured her. You can't say it like that either, it's meant to be a negative sentence. It should be /It's not your fault Kagome. Neither you nor Inuyasha knew this would happen," Miroku assured her. ...do you see the difference? Your chapters are FULL of these kinds of mistakes. You continuously mix past, present, and future tense. Also your ending of the first chapter was very abrupt, TOO abrupt. In any case, I was only pointing this out and I hope you take no offence; I only want to help the best way I can, because again, the content is fine, I like it, but you need to work on your grammar. Sorry if I sound like a teacher! ^_^; Best of luck! Feel free to contact me if you have any questions! I'll still be watching the story's progress! Anyway, damn, so people have already decided on a litter? I would have gone for one pup...oh well.
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Reviewed By: Korune On: October 23, 2006 22:36 EDT
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Ohhhh... Yay on the drama! I didn't see that comming! ^_^* Keep up the good work, at your own pace, of course. I'm one of the patient ones. Often times if rushed a story can turn from good to bad really quick.
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Title: inuyashawifey
Reviewed By: inuyashawifey [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 16:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an awesome story i hope to read more in the future
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Reviewed By: Polka Dot On: October 22, 2006 14:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like that Inuyasha isn't a whimpering fool in this but he is a bit pathetic. Still it's a good story, I keep forgetting about it because it takes a while for updates.
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