| "Runaway Puppy" Reviews/Comments [ 89 ] |
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Title: Hi!
Reviewed By: LadyIvy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 18:37 EDT
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I like your story a lot, but I would suggest either getting a beta-reader or editing it closely. It will help your readers tremendously and make your story that much better. If you want some help, let me know. Can't wait to see what happens when Inuyasha wakes up in the next chapter. Hmm, I wonder how hard a pregnant Inuyasha can punch? Lol. :-).
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Reviewed By: Punishment of the Inu/Tryst On: May 24, 2006 00:05 EDT
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Hey... Try this site online manga of Inuyasha. www.eartweak.com keep going... Tryst
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Tenisha-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 21:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so gooooood! Thank You by the wat for emailing me. I loved this story. Very well done. ^_^
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Reviewed By: love it!! On: May 13, 2006 20:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it!! Update really soon!!
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Reviewed By: love it On: May 08, 2006 18:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it!! Update really soon!!:P:)
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Title: Runaway
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 On: May 07, 2006 23:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your story is very good and I am enjoying it to the fullest, but I'm wondering how Sesshoumaru is going to feel about the baby? Do you think there will be a knockdown-dragout brawl for InuYasha? As much as I love Sesshoumaru, it would be funny for Sess to sport a black eye from a MERE human ^_^! What do you think?
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Tenisha-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 00:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG what got into u? huh? u got to b brave(dont mancine carzy)(cant spell)to do this!!!!! But i like it. he is able to get pregnet. u must have alot of free time. well plz update soon. email me at coco1085@msn.com when u do update. plzzzzzzzzz.
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Title: Pregnant Inu
Reviewed By: Tryst/Punishment of the Inu On: May 05, 2006 16:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MMMM. It's already the fifth. No update? Why? Come on... You gotta update soon. Please?
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: blu_sunset [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 15:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, Inuyasha pregnant with Sesshoumaru!! u have guts 2 write something like this!!! I like it! geez... I think I'm becoming a perv! but the ending didn't suck at all! I can't wait 4 u 2 write more!!! pretty please update soon!!!!! mail me at ory_91@yahoo.com when u update, onegai !!!! thx.
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Reviewed By: LOVE IT!!!! On: May 03, 2006 11:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!!!! Update really soon:)
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Title: lol...
Reviewed By: punishment of the inu/tryst On: May 03, 2006 01:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your attitude. Find yourself a beta for the spelling though. Other than that, I'm liking your plot, your style is funny, and I love to read angst. What are Inu's thoughts? Emotions? and Will Sess learn the bad news? Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: same ai, just to lazy to sign in On: May 01, 2006 21:55 EDT
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awsw...goods! yes more woo hoo update update!
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Reviewed By: Ai Hemora [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 19:46 EDT
Comment/Review:
OMG! LUVED IT DUDE! EVEN THOUGH THEY'RE BROTHERS...IT WAS STILL GOOD. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHA
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Title: Lemons...Num...^^
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 30, 2006 17:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice, Wonder hoe Inu will escape this one, or even if he does *gasp* lol Cant wait for the update! XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
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