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Reviewed By: Whispering Angel On: May 17, 2006 17:39 CDT
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Yuriko is rin's daughter righrt but who is Akane cause i tried to see who it was and i couldn't figure out. I forgot who she is or is she a new charater. i know i'm sad, but please answer..
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Reviewed By: Lizzie Welling [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 13:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've recently found your stories, and could not stop reading once I started! I LOVE your characterizations of Kagome and Sesshomaru, and your added characters are perfectly suited to the plot. It's wonderfully written, and very original. Katsuro is a doll, and Mizuki cracks me up, almost as much as Kagome does. Keep up the wonderful work!
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You may be right about me and computers. I enjoy your writing style "Well, aren't YOU the proud papa?" Kagome drips with annoyance. So, no more children. Quelle dommage. On to the actual children. . . Fire and Ice. Would that be Shippou as the Fire and Mizuki as the Ice? Perhaps one of Akira's sons? Are you going to do Katsuro and Cho? Not that I expect you to fess up. Somehow I always think of "Cho" as a large drunken Australian male Youkai. . .
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Reviewed By: GoodyKags [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 14:01 CDT
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Even though it's not that far into this installment of the story, I really like your projection of the characters. I also loved the 'training' session, lol. It was awesome. I really hope that you continue with this series. I am waiting on your updates and always look forward to reading them. This is a very good and well developed story. Take care and as long as you enjoy it yourself, keep writing. don't doubt you have devoted fans though! GoodyKags
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Reviewed By: DYquem NSI On: May 08, 2006 23:25 CDT
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I did the previous review. typical problem with thinking I was signed in and apparently was not.
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Reviewed By: 12 On: May 08, 2006 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd planned to do the first review, but that didn't happen. Good start to your new fic. I really liked the fight between "the two hanyous" and the taiyoukai. Sess was so proud of them. I really think after over 100 years, there should be a couple more kid, but we'll see. You could just mention them, and not even make them a big part of the story, if you wanted.
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Reviewed By: Dalafanole [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 22:15 CDT
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I'm greatly relieved that you have decided to continue this "beast" as you call it. I have a great time reading what you write and I'm always anticipating your next update. As long as you keep writing I can promise you that I will continue reading. Great job on the ending of Matchmaker as well as the beginning of Fire and Ice. If possible, I would like to know the current age of the main characters. Just to be reminded of the age difference between them. Such as Mizuki, Katsuro, Cho, Rin's Daughter (I can't remember her name at the moment). Oh and do you know how old Sesshomaru is? lol Good luck on your fic and I currently await your next update. Ja ne!
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