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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 14:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, there. Now I've finished the entire thing again. Thank you so much for writing such an amazing story! The characters feel so real, and I totally love Merkamou. :D Also, you are really amazing when it comes to battles and sparrings. Many fanfic writers generally skip battle scenes because they are hard to write, but you do them so well that I'm convinced you must be some kind of commander yourself, eh? ;) I once did fanart for this, but I've developed much since then and will draw a new, better pic some day when I get the time. :) I want to draw Merkamou, but I have a hard time drawing feathers. :P Anyways, I'm gonna check out the one-shots now... :)
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Title: Love the trilogy set!
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 19:44 CST
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I lvoe the three stories you made! I just finished this one and Both Matchmaker and Nothing left to loose was great too! Sorry i never posted up sooner but, yeah it was sooo great!
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 14:14 CST
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CONGRADULATIONS!!! that was a long run. Take your break and have your fun. I'll be here waiting for your return.
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Reviewed By: darkangel1986 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 23:25 CST
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I'm sad that it's over but I guess that it's time. This is my absolute favorite fanfiction ever, and that's saying alot since i've read hundreds in numerous other shippings. Even though i wanted a big romance between Mizuki and Seji, I'm glad you didn't. That would have deviated from the characters you created. Your ending was perfect. I'm looking forwards to your next project. I know it will be as great as this one.
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 23:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you didn't give up on this fanfic.
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 19:06 CST
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Is that the ending?? kinda leaves a few unanswered questions. Well if your muse finds its self giving another chapter I will be happy to ready it
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Reviewed By: darkangel1 On: January 14, 2007 23:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter broke my heart. I knew that she had to leave but I still hoped that she wouldn't have to. I love how her brother did not want her to give up on love, that was sweet. I'm glad you updated, hope you do so again.
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2006 17:05 CST
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hey when is the ending to this story comming?? giving up at the last chap??
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 15:00 CST
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hey whens the next chapter commin up??
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe nsi On: November 01, 2006 09:37 CST
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Kouga needs a mate!
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Reviewed By: darkangel1986 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 22:03 CST
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Updates, especially happy updates are my friends. I love this, hope you update again soon.
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Reviewed By: darkangel1986 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 13:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love updates. Another please. And soon too. This chapter was good. I loved the flashback with Rin. Why do I get the feeling that her daughter will not pine for Shippou for long? Update soon.
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Title: Loving it
Reviewed By: darkangel1986 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, I'm glad you updated. It's good to heaar that you still have a few chapters left. I'm hoping that Mizuki and Seji scene where they actually have a realtively peaceful, non combative conversation or another bedroom scene. Or if I'm lucky and you are being kind, both combined. I love them both to pieces and it would to see them together because they want to and not because they have to or their "inner demon" wants it and their rational parts do not. Hey, that could be an idea for a story;bonded life and how they learn to accept each other. And the others, they need to be settled also.Shippou and Katsuro need some love too.I love this,I never expected to love original characters this much. I just wanted to let you know though, there were a few spelling errors in the last few chapters.
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Reviewed By: DYquem NSI On: October 26, 2006 22:47 CDT
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I'm so happy. Just yesterday I was thinking about this fic and deciding you had given up on it. I'm glad you didn't
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 08:12 CDT
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hey whats up with your muse?? when is the next chapter???? I really hope to see one soon :) good luck.
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