| "Fire and Ice" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2006 17:05 CST
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hey when is the ending to this story comming?? giving up at the last chap??
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 15:00 CST
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hey whens the next chapter commin up??
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe nsi On: November 01, 2006 09:37 CST
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Kouga needs a mate!
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Reviewed By: darkangel1986 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 22:03 CST
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Updates, especially happy updates are my friends. I love this, hope you update again soon.
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Reviewed By: darkangel1986 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 13:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love updates. Another please. And soon too. This chapter was good. I loved the flashback with Rin. Why do I get the feeling that her daughter will not pine for Shippou for long? Update soon.
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Title: Loving it
Reviewed By: darkangel1986 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, I'm glad you updated. It's good to heaar that you still have a few chapters left. I'm hoping that Mizuki and Seji scene where they actually have a realtively peaceful, non combative conversation or another bedroom scene. Or if I'm lucky and you are being kind, both combined. I love them both to pieces and it would to see them together because they want to and not because they have to or their "inner demon" wants it and their rational parts do not. Hey, that could be an idea for a story;bonded life and how they learn to accept each other. And the others, they need to be settled also.Shippou and Katsuro need some love too.I love this,I never expected to love original characters this much. I just wanted to let you know though, there were a few spelling errors in the last few chapters.
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Reviewed By: DYquem NSI On: October 26, 2006 22:47 CDT
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I'm so happy. Just yesterday I was thinking about this fic and deciding you had given up on it. I'm glad you didn't
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 08:12 CDT
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hey whats up with your muse?? when is the next chapter???? I really hope to see one soon :) good luck.
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Hazeru01 On: September 14, 2006 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm shocked, it acually happend...I honestly thought things were never going to change. Update soon, I can't wait to see Kagome's reaction.
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Reviewed By: Silver Drache On: August 31, 2006 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*does a dance of joy* Well written, and very entertaining. I love it how you were able to keep them completly in character for this scene. I love the lines and the situations, I just love this chapter. You are a truly amazing writer, who paints a masterpiece with your words. Thank you for sharing your gift with your undeserving readers.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: darkangel1986 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I just died and went to heaven. Wow.
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 12:26 CDT
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Even with all that fighting I got a warm and fuzzy feeling like they are growing closer.
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Title: Lovely Update
Reviewed By: darkangel1986 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories. Normally I would not get so invested in other characters besides Sesshoumaru and Kagome but you have made me change my reading habits. I have been waiting for an update for two week and was begining to get worried that this would be left unfinished. I love this story. I read the others but because of problems with this website i was unable to register or review.
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Reviewed By: Hazeru01 On: August 08, 2006 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There's nothing better than having a talented write update a story and getting two great chapters. Please update soon.
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Title: Hurray
Reviewed By: kccranfield On: July 07, 2006 06:49 CDT
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Wow. Glad to see you back. Finally someone for Yuriko. Yay. Can't wait for more.
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