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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 15:27 CDT
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I like that you gave us some insight into Cain's background. It was so sad but at the same time I already know what was to come of these to parents/lovers/soulmates. Everytime I think you've reached your peak at your writing (never in a bad way lol) you show me that a true author excels always. Wonderful job. ~Usagi
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Reviewed By: devildice708 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story, Sue. A wonderful look back on Cain's childhood, and a very sad one at that. And while I felt bad for Cain, I really felt bad for Sebastian for all that he went through. But I was glad when he finally got to join his mate in the afterlife after suffering for so long without her. Anyway, enough of my babbling. XD All in all, I really enjoyed this story and I'm glad you shared it with us. ^_^
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Reviewed By: spookeymelichan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 14:53 CDT
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doesn't matter that i have read this 5 or 6 times begining to end even before you posted this. doesn't matter that i already knew what was going to happen before i read it. doesn't matter that i even played a fairly large role in the creation of this. this made me cry. well done.
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Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 10:45 CDT
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Okay... I changed my mind... T_T You are evil. Heh, just kidding. That was very sad, but very well written, which doesn't surprise me in the least. I especially loved the very end, when Sesshomaru was watching Sebastian. Very nice. Thanks for sharing this with us. ^_^
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Reviewed By: nish04 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 22:01 CDT
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Sorry, i just had to review this separately. I cried, it was really touching...it kind of explains a lot about the way he is...and the his stubbornness in Justification about accepting Gin. But i don't understand how in your fics youkai can live on for centuries and not arouse human suspicion...especially influential ones like tai-youkais. I mean...Cain is a well known artist and Sesshoumaru is a business magnet (?)...but you get the point...how can "people" like this change their name and identity but go unrecognized..by the rest of the human population....it might seem like a stupid question but it has been bugging me for a while now....anyways...i really enjoyed Revolution, it was sad but explained a lot. Thank you for allowing us to read it. ~ Nish
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Reviewed By: BladesoftheValkyrie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 20:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great one, though it was definitely a tear-jerker. I also loved the way you closed it. Well done.
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Reviewed By: xenus [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 19:04 CDT
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I don't write reviews. But this one seemed to need my presence. *Grins at his confidence* I think I now understand why the man we know to be Cain Zelig thought that it was necessary to folloy Isabelle into death. Thank you for the clarification. Thank you for never giving up. Most of all, thank yourself for not giving up. It takes a strong woman to endure what you have experienced.
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Reviewed By: zorioko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I feel so bad for Cain............ I mean Zelig. But he was so young he does not even remember it.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 16:55 CDT
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Wow...I cried so bad in this one-shot. Very well writen, Sue, I loved it. I feel so sad that Sebastian had to go through that, and Zelig, even though he was too young to understand what exactly was happening, he knew on some level. Once again, very well writen!!!!!! I gazillion kudos to you!!!!
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! Sue you are the greatest! I knew what was going to happen, I knew Cain's parents were going to die, but I couldn't stop crying. Sue how do you do it? I loved this, it was nice to know the whole story about Cain's parents.
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Reviewed By: kamackie21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 14:39 CDT
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Wow....you left me speechless with tears running down my cheeks. Bas has some big shoes to live up to. I take it Daniella was an element youkai? This is an amazing oneshot Sue.
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Title: *Cries*
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 09:21 CDT
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Sue everytime I read this I cry more. You just have such an amazing talent and I hope you never quit writing. PS I also hope you never quit letting me read your stuff too!
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Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 05:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bravo! What a beautiful story! Just beautiful writing at its best! I love the ending so much and was truly touched to read what truly happens to a mate when one dies. Sure, we've all read what will happen when they die, but to read it in detail was captivating. It felt like you were there along side Sesshoumaru watching the lovers go into the next realm together. Thank you so much!
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Reviewed By: lere [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 02:40 CDT
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Beautiful... beautiful!!! I'm crying my eyes out here. I love this story. I've been reading your fics since the very beginning, but I've never sent a review before. Forgive me. I just tought that there were so many reviews that you wouldn't miss little me. So I think I must thank you for your gentelness when you post the stories. You made many of my days happier. I smile, I cry, I laugh and I jump with joy when a new chapter comes. I've never liked fics with original characters before, but I think yours amazing. When you finish some Purity story I find myself empty, but soon you post another one and I'm imprisioned again. I love your stories!!!! Thank you for all of them. A big warm hug from Brazil, my friend. Lere
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Reviewed By: floopyloopyoopy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 01:08 CDT
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i love your writing.... and i love this one-shot. i was actually crying cuz all the emotion put into it is just heartbreaking. thank you for sharing your wonderfully amazing writing talents with us untalented people. =] i can't wait to see what you come up with next!
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